MAANEETSS-THE JOURNEY[epilogue:pg112-june12th]

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hey frnds...me back again to eat ur brains but this time along with my friend jyothi...we both decided to write an ss which is based on movie...




THE JOURNEY

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the main theme of this ss is about how different people meet in a journey and a strange incident takes place which they donot expect...the journey of the different people is of 5 or 6 days...then how they meet?where they meet?and what are the circumstances they are going to face?and how they face them?

scroll down for character sketch>>>>>>

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CHARACTER SKETCH:

MAAN SINGH KHURANA:



he is a NSG(national security guard)commando who carry out commando operations...he is down to earth person and very kind hearted but at the same time he is arrogant and person of reserved tendency when it comes to his profession...


GEET:



she is a married woman.she is very kind hearted and fun loving... she is a under cover cop and she is very brave when it comes to her profession..she also plays a major role along with maan in this journey...


HERE ARE SOME PEOPLE WHO ALSO ARE VERY IMPORTANT IN THIS JOURNEY...
SHASHANK GUPTA:



he is a superior officer to NSG commandos and also to police...



AADTIYA SHARMA:




he is also a NSG commando who works with maan..he is the best friend of maan...


RAJ SINGHANIA:


he is the famous young film star...heartthrob to young girls and Ideal for young guys...


ROMEO:




he is a software engineer..funloving and he have the talent to irritate a person with in few minutes...he plays a comic role in our ss...


PARI MEHTA:



she is an air hostess...she also plays a very important role in this journey...


YASH CHOPRA:



he is a famous doctor...who also plays very important role...


MEERA KAPOOR:



she is a rich girl who born with silver spoon..she is a fun loving girl and love to face the adventures...she is a model by profession...


BRIJ




he is very dangerous criminal who escaped from police several times and brother of underworld don dev ..so he got many names as he disguise himself in new names at different places...

DEV:



he is an underworld don who commited each and crime existed in this world..he kills every one very brutally to get whatever he wish..
hope u all like the character sketch...friends every one i mentioned here plays very important role in this journey...

PROLOGUE>>>>>>


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hey friends here is the prologue(written by jyothi(jyothi krish))..hope u all enjoy it...

PROLOGUE:

A girl came out of washroom having her shower tied a bathrobe around her. She is drying her hair n seeing herself in the mirror n a smile on her face. Her eyes went on her neck which is red due to previous night love making. She lowered her eyes feeling shy. Even though she got married 8 years back but even today she is feeling shy. She has a 2 years old son who is very naughty. He wont leave a single chance to torture her with his badmaashi. On top of that her husband always support his champ. She has a very sweet family husband, son, mama, papa. Sister in law. All of them loves her very much. Infact she is very lucky. She is from a samll village called hoshiyarpur. Her parents r very strict n traditional. She got married at the age of 18 only. At that time she is not at all interested in marriage but her parents forced her rather say emotionally blackmailed her. But she did not regret getting married.

Her husband understood her very well n encouraged her for higher studies. She want to study but not interested in any type of engineering or architecture. Her husband is a COMMANDO in an army. She is inspired by his work n decided to study IPS. Yes she is an IPS officer, an underground cop. At home she is a very sweet and caring bahu but when it comes to work she is a terror.

From past 5 years a team in mumbai trying to arrest a underworld don DEV. Who rules the whole world with his illegal activities. His men is alover world who will do what dev says. Till date no one saw him they contact through emails. It became impossible to trap him. They only knows that he lives in switzerland with his girlfriend n brother.

So the govt of mumbai handed that case to her seeing her ability. Within 2 months she arrested that dev n noe he is in jail.

But the words he said when geet arrested him are unforgettable

HEY TODAY U MIGHT ARREST ME BUT ONE DAY I WILL COME OUT N FROM THAT DAY UR COUNT DOWN STARTS. I WONT LEAVE ANYONE IN UR FAMILY. BY SEEING THEM DYING U WILL REPENT FOR WHAT U DID. THIS IS NOT END BUT STARTING OF THE WORST DAYS IN UR LIFE.

Even when she was about to retort back someone came n punched him hard on his face n told ALL THE BEST. I AM THERE FOR HER. BEFORE TOUCHING HER U HAVE TO FACE ME. U HAVE TO FACE MAAN SINGH KHURANA. OFFICERS TAKE HIM INTO CUSTODY roared maan.

Yes he is maan singh khurana COMMANDO n she is geet maan singh khurana UNDERWORLD COP.

Sudenly geet came out of her trance when she felt her husbands hand on her waist. He jst got up n saw geet lost in some thoughts. He came n hugged her from back placed his chin n her shoulder n asked

what r u thinking jaan? Asked maan.

uh.. nothing maan. Lost in some thoughts told geet.

Hmm kya hua jaan why u r tensed? Asked maan.

wo.. wo..

bolo geet.

I was thinking about that dev's words.

Geet dont think about him. I am here no worries.

Hmm... OMG...

now what happend?

Oh god maan I am getting late. Have to go.

Oh yaa right. Jaan I dont want to leave u today told maan.

Maan plzz I am going on duty na will be back in 3 days.

Hmm.. thik hain I should also leave now. I will drop u in airport n then go.

Ok maan I will get ready in 10 min.

when maan was about to go geet held his wrist.

Kya hua geet?

Geet hugged maan n told take care of abhi. N ha no ice cream for him.

Shona dont worry about abhi. I will take care waise mom n dad r there na so no worries.

Hmm n hugged him.

They broke the hug n maan said get ready shona.

Ok maan.

Geet got ready n maan came out of shower.

Come soon maan I will prepare breakfast.

She went down n saw abhi playing with his dadu n dadi.

Good morning dad, good morning mom..

Good morning beta.

So all ready asked mom.

Yes mom.

Abhi came n stretched his hands. Geet smiled n took him in her arms. Abhi kissed her cheeks n told culm shoon mama (come soon mama).

Ok my devil.

I aum naat dwewil (I am not devil) told abhi cutely.

Aww mera bacha. Breakfast??

abhi made a yuckyy face n nodded in a no.

plzz beta.

I will eat told abhi.

Just then maan came down n wished his mom n dad.

They all had breakfast n geet bid good bye to all.

Maan dropped geet to airport. He kissed her forehead.

Call me when u reach banglore.

Ok maan I will. U too take care. Have food on time. Dont stress urself. Dont be busy in dealing with cases. Ok??

ok rani sahiba aur kuch??asks maan while smiling at his shona's concern...

geet smiles back and says..nahi. Miss u told geet n hugged him.

Miss u too darling...bye...

Bye maan...

By this geet headed to boarding place n maan to his office.

From now the actual JOURNEY begins better say THE UNFORGETTABLE JOURNEY begins. Either maan or geet cant forget this. Lets see what will happen in this JOURNEY. Will geet be able to meet her maan. Will maan be able to meet his jaan. Dont know?? no one knows? But what is there in destiny who knows. Lets wait n watch how this JOURNEY ends. Not only to maan n geet but it is unforgettable to many other prople, the normal people, the politicians, a film hero, a doctor, a fun loving girl, a father n even a small 5 year old kid.

so friends..this is the introduction...hope u all like it...
please press LIKE and do COMMENT...
and plz tell us whether we should continue with this or not...

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love u all...
jyothi and mona😉


Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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PART-1


PART2


PART3

PART4


part-5

PART-6

PART-7


part-8

part-9

part-10[lastpart]


epilogue


hey friends if u are interested plz do read our other works...

JYOTHI'S(JYOTHIKRISH)WORKS ON MAANEET:



JYOTHI'S MANEET WORLD

MONA'S WORKS ON MAANEET:
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow me 1st who commented
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome start please conti soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds interesting...!!!!!

...::::...Love undercover agents stories...::::...
and mysterious sleuthing ones!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!gud start..
Diff story line...
Waiting for the journey to start..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful prologue
i loved it
looking forward to this journey as well

good luck guys
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww awesome prologue
will be waiting for the ss
awesome work jyoti n mona

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