MG FF:DISTANCE BRINGS US CLOSER#2 (24-38) parts - Page 44

Originally posted by: neha5058

first i am apologizing you for reading & commenting late here... sorry sorry..very sorry..please maaf kar de na...dekh i am holding my ears and doing ups & down...😭

finally read whole 5 complete parts last night...😊
all are amazing...love you dear...😃
first i was thinking that there will be some kind of mystery behind shanti's accident
but you threw my thinking in to the dustbin and then i sighed in relief when came to know that it was just normal accident hit by truck...
all were very worried for her.. that was really caring..so sweet..
wow maanvi... maan has a daughter...how sweet...
oh my god that was not expecting that that person would be vinod.her brother
but how that can be possible? means where he gone? and suddenly came back...
that was shocking for me...
ohh god maan felt some kind relation with that cute little girl...just heart touching...
geet saw the sight and had tears...omg...
and maan came to know about maanvi...
but dear suddenly bulb lighten in my mind...
you broke out the truth very soon...
you should take some time more in revealing the truth...
i mean in one day they met with their brother...
maan met with geet and his daughter...
and swetha's truth and she is thrown out from their lives...
even maanvi's disease truth also revealed...
i think you should gave us these news one by one...
chalo ab to mil gayi news...
their family is so large...
please don't feel bad...actually some times i forgot that kaun kiska beta hai and kaun kiska father hai... but then pata chal jata hai...because there are so many characters...any way don't give much attention on this line..read my another lines... okkay...
wow maanvi trying to open his pen and not giving him..that was a big thing about babies...
oho...maan to abhi se achhe wale papa ban gaye hai...
hmm..teasing session starts...
what sid have done in past? and why geet didn't tell to maan anything?
vinod ke dimag ki batti bhi jal gayi...chalo achha hua...
ohh rupa also so sweet...
hmm next maaneet moments... can't wait for that...
naughty -2 maan...
hey you didn't tell us when maan & geet came close? i mean... ahem ahem..you can understand my question very well...😆
now happy na...i have commented here...
hugs to you...
muah..
love you...😳

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

hay rabba... thanku very much neha... ha i am happy now... 😃 ok ok maaf kardi now stop doing up's n down's 😆
wo kya hain na i wrote all these parts in one day so went in one flow... didnt want to back up...
koi baat nahi family is so big... but u remember only maneet...
about ahem ahem u will come to know later... from now onwards the story will move slowly...
no hurry... tumne teaser padi...
love u too dear... 😊 hugs to u... 🤗

Originally posted by: neha5058

welcome dear... chalo tussa happy to assi bhi happy...
okay..you wrote according to flow then it's ok...
haan i remember maan..unhe kaise bhul sakti hu..
okkay...slowly-2 truths reveal karna..maza aayega..
nahi yaar teaser nahi read nahi kiya..
link nahi hai mere paas...

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

teaser is in the before page only yaar...
ha ab story will move slowly...
because i want them to meet vinod... n swetha ka part tho all knows except maan...
n sid ka part tho kisi ko bhi nahi pata... so they cant guess it na... 😉

Originally posted by: neha5058

haila ye kya tha...me scratching my head..
lil confusion...
really you teased me a lot..
one side maaneet romance and another side some twist & suspense...
looking for sat but dear that is very far...
very nahi very very far...
how can i control myself...mummy...😭