Avita OS-*Perfidious Valentine*

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello GKDians
how your all
here is one more Avita OS from ma side hehe
well its Valentine season so it will end on Valentines day

but don't expect full on romance in it as you know m not so good in it hehe
Suvarna had asked for it so its dedicated to Her n oll lovely GKDians

here is the summery

Perfidious Valentine

Summary- Avdhesh and Arpita were Childhood friends and now lovers but just close friends for their families while whole collage knows about them,

he starts his day with her smile.

"Jaan..wanna kiss you… may I?" he said so softly that she felt as he said in her ear.

"Of course..roka kisne hai…but its now or never…and your time starts now." She challenged him again as she was sure that he can't be there in her room at that moment.

.but suddenly one day she said something and he decides to end their relation and without any delay he finds someone else to replace her, before she can ask for forgivness..and later when she talks him she find it too late.

"OK Arpita then I will not disturb you again ever, go ahead in your life and I will move ahead in mine. Good byee and all the best for the new guy in your life, hope he will love you more then me because I can't love you any more now. " and he left in anger.

"Avi are you still angry with me..Sorry jaan , please don't punish me like that for one stupidity of mine, promise I will never repeat it again." She get that he was still angry with her.

"You don't need to be sorry,..even now I think I should thank you for what ever you did today, because of that I met someone whom I really can love and who loves me more then anyone can." He replied softly as he was thinking about someone else.


Hope you guys will njy it soon 😉

waiting for your comments 😳


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suvarnaawt thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh!god pahle he updt mai judai😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wooohooo


Im waiting..very eagerly waiting fr next part!!

Update it sooon😉😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow neha another OS just wow.👏
Just nw I commented on "Khwahish Part II" n here u started yet another SS 😆
grt huuunnn👏⭐️
U knw why I m praising 😕 u coz nw I hv 2 yell 😡😡 at u.hhehehe😆
Aarree yaaar valentine day ke lekh rahi aur pyaar ke jagah bewafi naaa.😉
Oh!!!!!!! dr cnt u wrtie sm simple lv story yaar😳, why separation😭 😆hehe why cnt AVITA be together yaar😉😃
The last comment I did in Khwhaish I said I chng m mind fr avi 😊, I thk I shuld take bck mah words😉 here 😆 heehhehe.😆
I m angry😡 na so nt pressing the likewala button 😛 although I liked ur summary.😃
Update soon 😃

BTW whn r u updating ur SS- Simply Crush, 😔 reading BIYA i 4got abt it, hvnt u na 😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very sad 😭 bt i will wait to see wat happen next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hye jo,
new os nice idea.
Valentine week mein start kiya we want romantic one dear,but what ever u will give dear will have it.
Nice story but how can avi think for some one else n what mistake did arpi,
but dis time i'll not blame before reading d full parts b'coz in ur khawish(BIYA) i had blamed him a lot.

But dear just one small request as dis is valentine week want some dose like "Desire" short only sweet cute story for our avita.
And
Happy Promise day dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: suvarnaawt

oh!god pahle he updt mai judai😕


He He yap dats ma isshhtyle hehe
just wait and watch 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: prash_t

Wooohooo


Im waiting..very eagerly waiting fr next part!!

Update it sooon😉😛



Mrs.Thakur 😃

wait wait hehe but not for long hun

will update by tomorrow nite or 14th😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MuktaJaiswal

wow neha another OS just wow.👏
Just nw I commented on "Khwahish Part II" n here u started yet another SS 😆
grt huuunnn👏⭐️
U knw why I m praising 😕 u coz nw I hv 2 yell 😡😡 at u.hhehehe😆
Aarree yaaar valentine day ke lekh rahi aur pyaar ke jagah bewafi naaa.😉
Oh!!!!!!! dr cnt u wrtie sm simple lv story yaar😳, why separation😭 😆hehe why cnt AVITA be together yaar😉😃
The last comment I did in Khwhaish I said I chng m mind fr avi 😊, I thk I shuld take bck mah words😉 here 😆 heehhehe.😆
I m angry😡 na so nt pressing the likewala button 😛 although I liked ur summary.😃
Update soon 😃

BTW whn r u updating ur SS- Simply Crush, 😔 reading BIYA i 4got abt it, hvnt u na 😲


Hii Di thanx for liking it too😛
naa di its not going to be SS hehe, for the first time its going to be a OS only One shot 😉
haan issske baad pata ni mujhe kitne shots padenge (If you guys don't liked it hehe😆)
hehe di simple word apni dictionary me nahi hai hehe but i tried to make it simple seriously😉
u commented on BIYA 😲
and i m missing it uh maa 😲
btw di i really thought that everyone forgot SC so i too forgot it hehe
now vil start it again hehe😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Daiii 😡 😡 😡

why i am supposed to last every time 😡 😡 😡

Anyways i will be also posting my new OS on 14 feb he he he 😛

luv ya

PS i nearly understood your concept 😉

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