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Posted: 13 years ago
#11

Thanxxx
for liking dear 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: angleI8383

very sad 😭 bt i will wait to see wat happen next


OMG ur first post and crying hehehe😆😆😆

wait and watch dear and thanx for commenting 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cuty16

Hye jo,
new os nice idea.
Valentine week mein start kiya we want romantic one dear,but what ever u will give dear will have it.
Nice story but how can avi think for some one else n what mistake did arpi,
but dis time i'll not blame before reading d full parts b'coz in ur khawish(BIYA) i had blamed him a lot.

But dear just one small request as dis is valentine week want some dose like "Desire" short only sweet cute story for our avita.
And
Happy Promise day dear.


Hey Rups 😃
well Valentine week me start kiya hai to Valentines day pe khatm bhi kar denge😉
and about Avi, hunn well Arpi ne kuch to kiya naa that's why ...hehehe just wait 😆
about BIYA 😆😆😆 well all i can say ke jitna Avi ko blame kiya tha utna hi sorry bhi feel karenge hehehe😆😆

Awww Don't worry dear this will be a short one Shot shorter then Desire haan Sweet n cute hai ke ni you guys will decide it after reading😳


Thanx for liking it too dear 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: yoga23priya

Daiii 😡 😡 😡


why i am supposed to last every time 😡 😡 😡

Anyways i will be also posting my new OS on 14 feb he he he 😛

luv ya

PS i nearly understood your concept 😉


Daiii 😡😡😡😡😡

don't you think that should be my question 😡😡

but as you are asking so let me tell you ..because you are the most busy person on earth nowadays and you don't have time for free ppl like me 😭😭😭

M waiting for Your new OS hun😉😉😉
hehehe Of course yaar only you can read my mind as you are ma editor naa😆😆😆
PS missing you like hell as have to edit it my self

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello everyone

Thanx for liking the intro

And here we go for the Update

As it my first OS which is going to be really a one shot hehe

And now without any more blah blah of mine enjoy the OS as it's a bit long

Perfidious Valentine

here are the final look of

Avi

And

Arpi


It's a new morning…

The soft, fresh, gentle rays of Sun kissed her eyes softly through her window.. and a soft smile appears on her rosy lips, she realized that he is late today, but how can she allow the sun to steal his right…Right to wake her up from his own dreams. She turns her back at window and tried to sleep again though she knows what's going to happen next.

Next second her cell rang and she knows its him..

"Hello.." she replied the call softly in sleepy voice.

"Good Morning Love.."

"Morning…let me sleep yaar!" she replied no chantingly as he was late today.

"Sleep! Hey how long will you sleep dear…please come in balcony naa..and let my day start. Please" he said in pleading tone.

"Why? You are almost 15 minutes late todayi think you have started your day with someone else naa" she replied back in anger.

"Oh hoo so that mean you were waiting for me! Am I right love?" he enjoyed her anger.

"What!! why should I wait for you hun !!! Especially when I have my alarm clock…"

"Come on Yaar come naa..you know naa I start my day with your cute smile and m getting late for class. Please come or my whole day will be a disaster." He pleaded again.

"No I will not.. if you really want to see me.. Then come up naa.. If You Can!." She challenged him.

"What..do you really wish so?" he exclaimed with joy.

"Yeah why not..after all I want to see naa how much you love me and what can you do for me. Let us see today, how will you tackle Mom and Dad, what excuses you can find to step in my room so early in morning, aajao !," she smiled at her own desire to see him in front of her as she knows well that Avdhesh is quite shy to her parents since their childhood.

There was no reply on other side for next few seconds…

"Hello…Hello…Avi are you there? What happened? Sara love mom dad ke naam se hi chuu ho gaya kya?"

"Are you Sure Arpita? I mean…if am not wrong you are still in bed… " finally he replied her with softer tone this time.

"Hunn yes you are right m in bed but don't worry I am sure that I will have my breakfast until you can find way to tackle mom and dad haha. " she laughed as she knows that he was disastrous in lying and in front of her parents he just can't speak properly so if he thought to do so it would take long hours.

"Hunnn…"

"What hunnn…"

"Jaan..wanna kiss you… may I?" he said so softly that she felt as he said in her ear.

"Of course..roka kisne hai…but its now or never…and your time starts now." She challenged him again as she was sure that he can't be there in her room at that moment.

"OK as you says Love.."

and next second she find herself in his arms.. he pulled her close to him; in her blanket from back..

"Missed yaa love!." And he hugged her tightly while lying in same blanket.

"Avi what are you doing here, and how you come in, in my room , my bed.. My blanket!" she turned to him while staying in his arms.

"Hey..don't waste my time..or later you will say my time is over." And he was about to kiss her lips.

"No first answer me, how do you get in haan?" she placed her finger on his lips before he can kiss her.

"Aree yaar if I can enter in your heart in your mind in you soul then room, bed and blanket is not a big thing." He tried to tackle her questions and again tried to kiss her but again she put her hand on her mouth and glared at him.

"Ok baba OK…You challenged me naa,. So I came through rain pipe. And luckily your window was open so I came in without disturbing you and as you were busy on cell with me… you didn't noticed me coming here next to you. If your questions are over may I Kiss you mam and start my perfect day." And again he pulled her close to him.

"No Mr.Thakur, Your time is Up I told you Now or Never!" and she jumped out of the bed and ran toward her bathroom and locked it from inside.

"Hey That's cheating…That's not fair.." Avi said throwing pillow at her.

"Everything is fair in Love and War Avi…never forget that." She replied from inside.

"OK got it but itnaa to bata do what is this?" he came close to the door and placed his hand on it.

She placed her palm at the same place on other side of it and replied "don't you know; This Is Love.."

"No this is My life.." he mumbled and was about to placed a kiss at door for her and leave when suddenly she opened the door for a sec kissed him on cheek and shut it again.

"Hey that's cheating!" Avi exclaimed with sweet smile at her expression of love.

"Ahhh stop crying like babies and go now, you are already late for your class and how many times I need to told it haan Every thing.."

"…Is fair in love and war… I know I know.. Ok baba m leaving come fast OK." He cut her words and completed it.

"Ok byee…by the way M not coming today haan.." she thought to play with him before he can leave.

"Why?" he was about to step out of the window when she said that and he paused at once with the thought "Day without her!".

"Well mom said some people are coming to see me for their son, you know arrange marriage and all." She said as she don't care and bite her tongue as she knows what would be his reply.

"What ? you know it and you didn't talked me about it, Why Arpita? What if they liked you and the guy! is he coming too?" he came back to the door and banged his fist on door furiously .

"Awww then I have to marry him naa, after all, jo mom dad kahenge karma hi padega. And by the way what you mean by If they liked me! Obviously anyone can like me, am not that bad." She teased him more as she love to hear and see him when he shows his possessiveness for her.

"OK any one will like you, and what about you, Me, and our relation, our love,? Will you not say anything to them about us, will you marry someone else?" he asked in hurt tone.

"Avi I told you naa, I have to, what else I can do?" she enjoy a lot to hear him like that.

"OK Arpita then I will not disturb you again ever, go ahead in your life and I will move ahead in mine. Good byee and all the best for the new guy in your life, hope he will love you more then me because I can't love you any more now. " and he left in anger.

Arpita realized that may be its too much today, she should not say like that, she should ask sorry to him for her foolishness.

"Avi.. Avi.." she called him many times but no reply. She came out quickly as she realized that he had left the room.She reached to window and find him in his car.

"Avi…. Wait yaar..Please." she called him but without replying her he just started the car and moved toward collage.

"Hunn so you are mad at me haan..lets see how long you can!" instead of getting worried about the situation she smiled at his anger and possessive nature, she knows him well and his love too, He can't act to be angry with her more then few hours.

"OK Mr. Thakur Here I come, hold your breath because today you are going to loose your heart once again, after all our day is coming. I am not going to leave you without a diamond ring. And this Valentine you have to go to your knees and propose me properly the way you should."

She get ready for the collage and determined in her mind that her love has to confess his feelings once again for her and this time the proper way unlike last time; in canteen in front of whole collage while quarreling with each other over a guy who dared to came close to her.

At The collage..

When Arpita reached collage, half day was passed, and there was some kind of gossip floating in whole campus , she didn't get what was actually happening around her, a group of gals passed her looking at her strangely,

"is she that unlucky gal?" one of them murmured in her friend's ear.

"Yes , she is the one..Poor gal. just few days before Valentine yaar.. " the other replied.

Arpita looked at the gal next to her, she thought they were talking about that gal. she moved ahead to their group, to find Avdhesh, but he was not there too.

"Hey guys where is Avi?" she inquired about him from others.

"Why? Why are you asking about him now?" Chulbul replied angrily.

"Chulbul, why are you talking to me like that? What have I done? Tell me naa where is Avi?" she asked again with surprise.

"Chulbul, let it be, we can't change someone's destiny. If that's their destiny we can't help it." Simple tried to calm him down.

Arpita, "Simple what are you saying yaar? At least koi to batao where is Avi?"

Simple-"Chulbul is correct Arpi, you should not bother about him now, he met us when we came and he said everything is over between you and him, as you will marry according to your parents will, so there is no meaning to drag this kind of relation."

"What? What he said to you all? Its Over, damn… what the hell he think of himself, aise kaise sab khatm ho jayega, I just teased him and he take it seriously don't he know me? He knows me well and he knows it well too that how much I love him, then how can he talk like that." Arpita banged her fist on table in anger, but tears filled her eyes.

"What ? you were teasing him? Oh no Arpi… this time he take it to heart, the way he was talking m sure he is firm with his decision of ending the relation." Simple exclaimed with wonder and sorrow at the same time.

"No.. let me see him once then I will see what 's going on his mind, idiot , fool how can he think that I can think about anyone apart from him." she started to cry but her fury was on peak.

"Auunnn Arpi I know I should not say it right now, but I think its better if you get his whole message at once. He asked us to pass it to you" RV interrupted her in mid

"Message! What kind of message? (she wiped her tears off as she thought it's a prank her friends were playing on her and its about to over now) are you guys making fun of me?"

"Why would we do that Arpi? Actually, he said its all over, and he will not see your face again and asked you to not come in front of him ever again, as he is starting his new life today onwards. " RV completed his sentence without looking at her.

"what New life? And what do you mean by that?" She asked curiously.

"Arpi he find some new girl today when he was coming collage and he decided to marry her, before she can change her mind like you." Simple held her shoulder and told her everything.

"What? What are you saying Simple? He can't do this to me, he can't punish me like this for a stupid joke of mine, no he can't where is he, I have to see him, before he can destroy my life in his foolish anger." She got up and wipes her tears off.

"Sorry Arpi, but your joke caused you great harm hun… and if m not wrong he must be with that girl." This time there was bit of sympathy in Chulbul's voice for her.

Arpita felt broken, she never thought Avi can do that with her, how can he think like that, and how can he think of any other girl so quickly, no he has to meet her, she can't loose him like that.

She reached his home by evening, his car was there that mean he was at home by that time, she thought to rang the bell but before that she thought to call him, she tried his number, but it was going busy continuously, all most after half an hour he picked her call.

"Hello."

"What Hello, kis se baaten kar rahe the, m trying from more then half an hour." She just burst out at once.

"excuse me; I don't' think you have any right to talk to me like that, and to ask such kind of questions." He replied in rude manner.

"Avi are you still angry on me..Sorry jaan , please don't punish me like that for one stupidity of mine, promise I will never repeat it again." She get that he was still angry with her. And his rude behavior really hurt her badly.

"You don't need to be sorry,..even now I think I should thank you for what ever you did today, because of that I met someone whom I really can love and who loves me more then anyone can." He replied softly as he was thinking about someone else.

"Avi stop it, just cut your crap I know you are teasing me, badlaa le raho ho naa, ok if you want to punish me, then come down n slap me, slap me in front of everyone and I swear I will never do it again, but please don't say like that, I can't bear it." Tears starts rolling on her cheeks as the thought of her love going away from her to someone else was enough for her..

"Arpita..all I can say is "Thankyou and good byee" I don't know how serious was you when you said you will marry someone else according to you parents will,at that time I was really angry and hurt too but now am sure I will marry this gal as soon as possible because she don't tease me like you, she don't shout at me like you, and most importantly, she don't stop me from kissing her lips unlike you." He said lustily.

"shut Up Avi that's limit, you said you just met her and now you are talking about Kiss and all!"

"yes, I kissed her, I know I should not share it like this but you are my friend first naa, so I think you have right to know about it, can you imagine! Kiss at first meeting .wooowww man she is awesome yaar." He started talking like he was talking to some guy not Arpi or it doesn't affect her.

"stop it, stop it Avi..OK if you are really happy without me, then for once come in your balcony and face me, and say that you love that gal more then me, say that you can live without me, say that you love her." She said almost challenging him.

"OK if you insist so , m coming but its last time m dancing to your tune, to prove that m not your puppet any more,

just look back and see how happy I am." He came to his balcony while Arpi was on the other side of the street, their eyes met,

"I love her…and this valentine m going to propose her and ask to marry me, if you don't believe me than come at Victoria lawns. I have made all preparations for the night, she will be there by 8 pm, she promised me." He said with smile and blush, while her eyes turn red with anger and disgust, flow of tears turn heavy.

"I hate you Avi, I hate you, you never loved me, if you did so then you can't forget me like this, and you want me to be there to see your, disgusting so called love confession to your newly found shameless beloved, why should I hun..No I will not be there, Mubark ho tumhe apni new life, congrates ." and she left at once.

She reached home and cried whole night, How can he did that with her, how can he forget everything, how can he think of anyone else, and Kiss, yakkk how can he say it to her that he kissed someone else…Now she was wondering does he ever loved her or not.

Her Whole night passed in tears and his thoughts, she was living in her past with him, the moments which they shared, those smiles, those tears. Those moments when they were standing by each other' side as supporters as strength as friends as lovers how can he deny all them at once, no he can't. She have to talk to him for the last time, but the way he was happy to find someone else, the way he was smiling and blushing at her thought in front of her she can't deny it too.

In morning she was lying in her bed with his thoughts waiting for his call or him though she know that he will not come or call her but still somewhere she was waiting for him as she wants it to happen. But at his collage time his car passed and she recognized it by its sound, and she realized that its all was really over from his side. She gets up herself and get ready for collage. Whole day passed without any activity or hope, he was there with their group but when she joined it he left them, when ever she was around he disappear like he don't want her even around himself. It made her cry.

On the next day when she came down from her room Her mom dad called her to sit with them before leaving for collage, and they informed her that they have chosen someone for her and soon his family members will visit them to see Arpita and fix everything.

Arpita was shell shocked, she don't know how to react? What to say to them, as her father asked her wish too, as if she likes someone else, she don't know what to say, Avi has ditched her just few days ago. She didn't reply any thing and left for collage her parents take her silence as agreement.

At collage she was unable to concentrate on anything… not even to talk to anyone, Simple and Manjari were noticing her condition, when she was sitting alone they came to her..

"Arpi what happened? Why are you so calm?" Manjari asked her holding her shoulder lightly.

"Calm! Come on yaar you are looking unrest, what happened Arpi? Will you not share with us?" Simple asked her cutting Manjari's word in mid.

"don't know what's happening with me? First Avi left me alone don't know for whom? And now mom dad wants me to marry someone else, how can I Simple…Manjari tell me how can I think of it when That idiot Avi is flowing in my veins , I am trying to be angry on him, to hate him, to forget him, but I can't, I can't get away from him , his thoughts are always with me, on my mind, he is like my shadow, my soul, and how can I think of my self without soul, without shadow. Don't know what to do?" she cried badly as her friends triggered her pain by asking it.

"Shhh calm down Arpi.. Don't worry everything will be fine.." Manjari hugged her and tried to calm her down.

"Kuch theek nahi hoga.. that idiot doesn't love me, he never loved me, you know he kissed that gal and now he is going to propose her as I wished sometime. And he is doing all that for don't know whom." She hugged her back and cried more bitterly.

"Calm down Arpi, don't cry like that, everyone is looking at us," Simple tried to calm her in her own way.

"And tell me did you talked Avi about this, that your parents want you to marry someone else.."

"Use kya fark padta hai, he is planning for his gal naa" she replied angrily looking at Avi standing just few yards away from them, busy with others.

"Hey… just talk to him naa, at least he should know what s he is going to loose, come on yaar at least for your year's long friendship, tell him naa." Simple insisted as she knows that she want to talk to him but she is not doing so in her ego.

Arpita decided to talk to him but not at the moment, what if he made fun of her feelings in front of everyone, she decided to talk to him later or when they will be alone.

Whole day passed but she didn't' find any chance to talk to him, but when he was about to leave she find him alone in parking area.

"Avi… if you have few minutes can I talk to you?" she called him from behind as he was about to sit in his car.

"Ahh Arpita! Yaa yaa please tell me, you can talk to me whenever you want, after all we are friends' first naa!" he said with a smile as nothing has happened ever.

"Oh that;s good, I thought .." she calmed her self as she felt irritated at his behavior , how can he react as nothing happened when she is so restless.

"Thought what Arpita?.." at once his cell rang and he smiled to see the callers name "Oh am so sorry yaar have to take your leave, I totally forgot tomorrow is Valentines Day naa, just last minutes preparations. Actually I changed my mind inspite of tomorrow m going to propose her tonight…exciting naa(he winked at her) . See you soon; hope you are coming to see her naa." He sits in his car hurriedly as she has no importance for him.

"No I will not come to see any one, but I was here to inform you that I have found someone too.. and if you want to see him, come to my wedding directly because m not shameless like you and your gal who can allow to kiss anyone at first meeting." She banged her fist at his door and left in fury with tear full eyes.

She came home back without any hope and without the thing called life, she was moving like dead one, but somewhere in her mind his words were haunting," come at Victoria Lawns to see my gal"

She decided to meet him for the last time, she called him many times but as usual it was busy again.

She gets up and changed her mind, in spite of calling him, now she is going to meet him at his place before he can leave to meet his gal.

She wear a white embroided suit and reached his place she noticed that it was only 7.30 and if she is not wrong he asked her to be there at 8 and the next day so she can catch him before he can leave for there. And her thoughts were correct as she saw his car at gate, that mean he was still in home, without wasting a second she rang the door bell, his mother opened the door.

"Hello Aunty. Good evening," she greeted her with a soft smile as she doesn't want to show her real state.

"Good evening Beta, you came after long time haan… how is Mr. and Mrs. Rai? Come in side naa." She greeted her with love and kissed her forehead too as both families were acquaint with each other from long time now, they were childhood friends.

"Mom Dad are fine Aunty..Aunty Where is Avdhesh? Dikhaai nahi de raha?" she asked for him directly as she don't want to waste time.

"Oh Avi.. he is getting ready for Party, you both are going together naa, he didn't told me that you are coming , I thought he was going to pick you from your place." She exclaimed.

Arpita got that Avi didn't' informed about that gal to his family yet and Aunty was thinking her to be with him for some party so she pretended as there's nothing wrong.

"Mumma M ready… see how am I lookling? Dashing naa.." at the same moment Avi came down from his room and for his surprise he found Arpita with his mother.

"Arpi… You are here!!!" he forgot that her mother was there too but soon he realized and changed his sentence in mid, "Aree I was coming to pick you naa ..See mumma gals ko party me jaane ki kitni zaldi hoti hai, theek se ready bhi nahi hone detin.." he pretended as they were getting late for some party, he held her wrist and drag her with him to the car.

"ohoo Avi just calm down, she is not in any hurry, its you who is making hurry, she is here naa, and by the way you took more then two hours to get ready and still you can't match her simplicity." She praised Arpita for her simplicity and placed a soft kiss at her forehead,

"Mumma..does that mean m not looking good" Avi complained and her face made his mother and Arpi both laugh,

"Ale leee mera baby..You are looking good beta but you both looks great together, go and enjoy your party, OK and don't fight like you both used to do in childhood." She kissed his forehead too and bid them good bye.

Now Avi an Arpi was together in the car, Arpita was there to talk to him for the last time, she never thought that she will accompany him on his date with someone else. Tears filled her eyes as she saw that he was happy then she saw him ever, so that mean he actually loves the girl more then he suppose to do to her.

"So finally you are coming with me, to see her hun?" Avi asked her without looking at her.

"Yeah seems like I have to,as I came to talk to you about something else but I noticed you lied to Aunty and I don't want to spoil your eve so I pretended as we are going to some party." She turns her face to window and wiped her tear silently.

"Oh you are great yaar, thanks yaar, actually I want to propose her first only after her Agreement I will inform Mumma as I don't want to be a proven fool." He emphasized last line as taunting her "well you were telling me something at parking area naa, I didn't get it does that mean, Uncle Aunty find someone for you hun?"

"Yeah seems so, lets see, they will come soon to see me and then…" she stopped as her throat was choked with lump.

"then.." he repeated and looked at her with questioning eyes,

"Then I will be a married gal.. and no one can hurt me ever after." She replied back looking straight into his eyes with her tearful eyes.

Suddenly Avi pushed the breaks and car stopped with scream.

"We reached Arpita.. I think she is not here yet, she will be at any moment if you don't mind can you please stay in car, I don't want her to see me with anyone else until I made her mine." He steps out of car while asking her to stay there.

"Yes Why not!" she mumbled as he was not there to wait for her reply after few minutes she saw the rest group leaving from there one by one she got that they all were there to decorate the place for Avi and his gal. she felt cheated, and she cried badly at her fate, just few days back, she was the most lucky gal on earth as her love was always there by her side, and today she was so lonely even when he is just few yards away from her, she cried for hours, suddenly she noticed all lights went off may be it was power cut or something, and she looked at her watch, it was almost 12, they were there from 8, almost 4 hours and Avi was there alone as she didn't noticed any one going inside, and if she is not wrong their all friends left the place around 11, did she missed her, or she didn't' came yet, but how, Avi said she suppose to come at 8, does that mean she ditched him?

"Oh My God…Avi you are such a fool, how can you manage to hurt your self like that, you idiot." She thought to herself and step out to find Avi, as she was sure that he must be hurt as that girl didn't came.

She stepped in the lawn; it was all dark. Only light was of moon.. which was feeble as it was not a full moon night, she reached the place where it was decorated with flowers and heart shaped balloons, it was just a roof on six pillars giving it a perfect shape of circle , she found Avi sitting there at other corner of its stares, she went close to him, sit next to him and placed her hand at his shoulder,

"Avi..Are you OK?" she asked softly as she recalled how confident he was that the gal will love him more then she did ever.

"Avi.. am talking to you." She shake his shoulder gently, "Look don't know what happened? Why she didn't come? May be she forgot the date, may be .." she tried to console him.

"Arpi.. are you trying to console me..?" he placed his hand palm on her's and asked without looking back at her.

"No am not, m just trying to make it easy for you, you know… I know how foolish you are, and I don't want to see you hurt…" she tried to cover her concern for him, but actually accepted it herself.

He turns back and their eyes met Arpita find herself helpless to hide her love and concern for him and her eyes turns misty. Avdhesh drag her close and huge her, she finds herself in his embrace after long time, the place where she use to start and end her days from a long time now. She hugs him back and took a deep breath as she breath after ages.

They stayed like that for few moments and His hold was turning firmer by each passing minute.

"You can't see me hurt, even after what I did to you?" Avi whispered in her ear softly.

Suddenly Arpita realized what were they doing and she breaks the hug and gets up.

"Avi I think its too late…we should go home now, Aunty and mom must be worried about us…come on get up." She tried to tackle his question and turn back to leave the place as soon as possible. But before she can go away from him Avdhesh holds her wrist and pulled her back close to himself.

"Arpi..you didn't replied me! You don't want to see me hurt even after what I did to you!" he asked it again looking strait into her eyes. their eyes were filled with love and tears both at the same time,

"we are late Avi let us go now, come on!" she turned to move quickly breaking the eyes lock.

Avi held her wrist tightly and pulled her back to him, this time he held her close to himself by putting her folding her hands at her back and pushing her against himself, just a breath away, eye in eye, "I am still waiting for your reply Arpita…Ok I am asking it again, why can't you see me hurt even I know I hurt you badly in last few days."

Arpi was trying to release her self from his strong hold but she can't so she took a deep breath as its time to say it all, for which she has came to him in evening, "Yes I can't see you hurt, doesn't matter how much you hurt me, doesn't matter to whom you belong, whom I belong…because fact will remain always same.." her eyes again filled with tears and she stopped.

"Fact !" he asked her to complete her sentence ,

"Fact that I Loved you, I love you, and I will Love you till my last breath… that you are in my mind, in my heart even in my blood, my soul, I can live without breathing but can't without you, your thought." And with this a drop of tear broke the edge and rolled down at her cheek bone.

Avi smiled at this and collect that drop with by his lips,

"really if you love me so much then why you always tease me by adding your name with else haan, do I need to tell you how much it hurts me." He rests his forehead on hers and placed a soft passionate kiss at her forehead. "The thought of you with anyone else burns me inside, I can't Arpi I can't, I can't think any one else with you…how can you say it haan." And he kissed her eyes.

"Yes you can't bear my thought with any one else…but you can forget me in just one day and you can kiss any random girl." Her face turns red with anger as she thought him with someone else. "Leave me Avi what if your gal came and found you with me like this? Just leave me." She tried to break his hold once again and this time she succeeded too.

"My gal… She will not mind to see me with you like that In fact she is here and watching us." He came close to her and said it with a proud smile.

"What she is here? Where is she?" she starts looking around her as if she missed her at gate.

"Here…" Avi took her in arms and twirl around with joy, at the same moment whole place enlightens with lights and Arpita saw at roof it was of mirrors and there was their reflection.

Avi put her back to her feet.

"What? What do you mean?" Arpita was unable to understand anything but there was a smile on her face.

"You Silly girl, its you, am here for you, I made all these preparations for you and here I am on my knees.." He goes to knees

"Arpita…You are the love of my life. I will live and die for you only, I can't live without you as my heart denies to beat without you, and I want to live, I want to live with you for ever and ever, Will you be mine for this and all coming lives. Will you marry me!" and he proposed her with a beautiful diamond ring.

Arpita was shocked…and she started crying and laughing at the same time, tears were rolling down at her cheeks while she was smiling whole heartedly.

"Aree yaar kuch to bol…my knees are hurting now…ab kya feet touch karke bolun that I love you…please be mine." Avi asked her again while laughing whole heartedly and enjoying her surprised state.

"Get Up you idiot!" she wiped her tears and holds his hand firmly and hugged him tightly, "Why you did all this haan? There is no one naa except me?" she inquired him again to confirm her happiness.

"No you Idiot hahaha…you use to call me that naa, now tell me who is idiot? You believed that I can love someone else beside you! And on top of all you believed that I kissed someone else hahaha.." he hugged her back and laughed whole heartedly.

"I am Idiot ! let us see bachuu! Mom Dad thinks m agree to marry some one else whome they likes for me, let them came to see me then I will ask you who is idiot?" she punched him hard on chest and hugged him again.

"So what? Kar lena ussse hi marriage."

"Are you gone mad Avi?" she broke the hug and looked at him with wonder.

"Ha ha ha..look at your face.." he starts clapping and laughing like mad..., "Oh my god…can't believe it…you are such a fool Arpi…You silly Aunty and Uncle was talking about Me..My mom dad is coming to your place tomorrow." He came close to her and stroked her head gently.

"What?" she exclaimed with joy, "But how?? How uh when it's all happened?"

"Hunn..The day you said that some one is coming to see you, and you will marry the guy if Aunty and Uncle asked you for it. That day I decided that I will be that guy." He pulled her close to him and said with all his love and affection looking strait into her eyes.

"You idiot, cheater, liar, dhokebaaz…you did all that, you lied to me so much. You destroyed my whole week…hurt me so much…without any reason, that's not fair." She complained.

"OH that's great you can hurt me by saying all that, when ever you want, and I can't play a simple prank on you."

"Prank…what if I died in this silly prank hun? you don't have any idea how much I suffered in last few days."

"aise kaise mar jaati? You are my life, and I can't die so easily…and I think someone said to me that. Everything is fair in Love and War. And this is Love." He replied with sweet smile and puts a soft kiss at her lips.. "And by the way you forgot but Its Valentines day now" he shows her watch and according to it he proposed her exact at 12 o'clock when the day of love was started.

"Happy Valentines Day Love, and with this day our life is starting with more love and a promise that I will love you more and more each second, and this love will increase day by day." And he placed a soft kiss at her forehead.

Completed

That is all for the OS..

Hope you guys liked it, and I don't bored you hehehe

Happy Valentines everyone.

And don't forget to press; likewa and comment too if you like it.

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👍🏼awsmawsm awsmawsm awsmawsm awsmawsm awsm 👏 bst valantine story,no words,,only i can say u r amazing🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: joliefille


Daiii 😡

don't you think that should be my question 😡😡

but as you are asking so let me tell you ..because you are the most busy person on earth nowadays and you don't have time for free ppl like me 😭😭😭

M waiting for Your new OS hun😉😉😉
hehehe Of course yaar only you can read my mind as you are ma editor naa😆😆😆
PS missing you like hell as have to edit it my self



Daiii i said to you my timing...

if my exams end by april then i am free...

i will be home at august :)

tk cr

luv ya

PS i will NOT comment on Part 2...😛

I am lazzzyyy 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: suvarnaawt

👍🏼awsmawsm awsmawsm awsmawsm awsmawsm awsm 👏 bst valantine story,no words,,only i can say u r amazing🤗


Thanx dear for liking
but trust me best stories are yet to come
as na editor is lazzzy she will post the best Vday OS soon

I know it will be the best 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: yoga23priya



Daiii i said to you my timing...Yap you said but you are never on time 😡😡😡

if my exams end by april then i am free...

i will be home at august :) OK then cyaa at that time now 😕😕😕😕

tk cr

luv ya Luv yaa too😳 and TC hun 😉

PS i will NOT comment on Part 2...😛

I am lazzzyyy 😃 yaa yaa i know how lazy you are hehe hope you will not forget to post your new OS m waiting hun😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wahaji 😃 Valentine Day pe such a romantic update.☺️
First I was angry wth Apri 😡for her foolish joke, tht lead her to loose Avi hehehe😆
Thn didn't liked Avi behavior to her, hw cn he just leave her n also find smone else,😲 m really thgt tht there's another gal.😭 Finally hv to chg m mind fr both.😃
N fr m ths is wt SIMPLE lv story.❤️ 😉

"Even if the sun refused 2 shine
Even if romance ran out of rhyme
U would still have my heart
until the end of time
ur all i need my love, my valentine"

I knw it tooo late : HAPPY BELATED VALENTINE

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