ArSha FF (new)- Pehele Pyar ka Ehsaas- # 1 - Page 74

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it tish amazin their footsie was fab😃 but amar forgot the road only wat an effect of shaks😉 you rite really well gr8 imagination👍🏼 love u❤️ for dis ff it brings a huge smile on my face everyday keep it up gal..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey finally u completed 100
pages very soon just because your awesome work n regular updates. 😃 👏

A BIG CONGRATULATION [ to u Priya 🤗 🥳
wonderful, keep rocking n updating 👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for update first
lovely one n cute too 😍
Shaks was angry n Kunwar just have one thing in mind how to calm her down n that resulted in footsie.😳
And that made Kunwar forget the way n now the car is not going to start, this is called luck by chance.😉
Yaar pls try to update asap.
A VERY HAPPY HOLI TO U 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
It is past 100 pages now plz update soon loved it tons and it was awesome n amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG Tish I my self hav neva felt so gud abt footsie..;)..it was mindblowing...

wow wow wow..I loveddd it...big hug to you jaana..sorry I cudnt reply ur last post..but really thank u so mch fr rwiting this...mwaah
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Posted: 13 years ago

Congrats the page is over 100 now.

Nice update. No one could have ever thought of giving a foot massage while driving a car. But this part was very cute indeed.

Best line is ' Gadha!!... usko joke lag raha hai yeh sab?!!...' LOL

Apne kunwar ki to nikal pari. Car broke down in middle of nowhere. Ab ayega maza. Expecting cute romantic scene between ArSHA.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wo d ticklish part was awsm...haye dy both r so adorable...bt plz shaks to annowng mat dikhao..amar k pyar ka jadu chaldi se chalao lol..update soon tish
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Posted: 13 years ago

Surprise!!!!... treat for holi….. 2nd update of the day😃….. Congratulations for 100 pages to you all too…. Couldn't have done it without you guys!!🤗

Part 22

Alisha- ab kya karen?

Shakti- call Archie….. where are they?... they could come to help.

Shantanu- they must have already reached Ahemdabad.

Shakti- ya so ask them to come back….. I'm sure we were not that far from Ahemdabad.

Amar- but we don't know where we are….. where do I ask them to come?

Everything was back to square one….. they were on the highway in the middle of the night with a broken car….. in an unknown place….. wow….. what a start to the trip!... and it's all because of this stupid guy, who drives me bonkers!!

Sneha- so what do we do?

Amar- I'll go back and get some help….. you'll wait here.

Shakti- (panicky) nooo…. You're not going anywhere….. aur woh bhi akele…. yeh time pe.

Amar- toh tum mere saath chalo. (wink)

Shakti was taken aback….. she opened her mouth to answer but dint know what to say….. she frowned and closed it.

Shantanu- haan….. I think it's a good idea….. you both go and get us help….. we'll wait here and see if we can find anything here... agar khuch mile, call me.

Amar- ya bro….. just call Archie and inform them about this….. (at Shakti) chale?

Shakti swallowed hard….. wiped her hands on her jeans….. and nodded….. she wasn't sure if she was nervous of the dark, unknown road or him.

Amar collected his phone and a flashlight and they headed off in the opposite direction.

They walked almost a mile in complete silence….. she dint even look in his direction….. Amar could feel she was anxious and he smiled.

Amar- scared?

Shakti- no….. why I should I be scared of you?

Amar- (chuckle) I meant scared of the dark.

Shakti- oh….. (embarrassed) no I'm fine….. it's not so dark….. thank god there are street lights.

Amar looked at her…. She had her arms crossed over and she was rubbing her bare arms with her hands.

Amar- I'm sorry.

Shakti looked at him with confused eyes.

Shakti- huh?

Amar- we are in this because of me….. I should have paid more attention.

Shakti- (sigh) it's not your fault, Kunwar….. I should have also been more attentive…. Aur aise ho jaata hai na…. chill (smile)

Amar smiled and they kept staring in each other's eyes.

She blinked and looked down... sometime back she was solely blaming him for getting them stranded here, in the middle of nowhere….. toh ab kya hua?... why do his eyes always make me mushy?

Amar could not resist any longer….. he stepped towards her and pulled her in his arms….. she snapped her eyes up, completely taken by surprise.

Shakti- Kunwar yeh…..?

She dint finish….. she kept gazing into his chocolate eyes.

He had his one arm around her waist and he brought the other hand to rub her bare arm.

Amar- (whisper) you're cold.

She shivered….. but it was nothing to do with the cold... he gently continued to rub her arm and back with both his hands.

Shakti- I'm…… (cleared her throat) I'm fine.

She lightly pushed him away and escaped his embrace, looking down….. Amar wanted to get her back where she belonged and touch the pink hue on her face.

She turned and started walking ahead….. Amar smiled….. shook his head and followed her.

After a while they saw a light ahead and they hurried to it….. it was a small roadside tea shop….. they walked up to the shop.

Amar- (to the Chaiwala) arre boss…. Yahan pe kahin koi mechanic, ya petrol pump hai?

Chaiwala- nahi sir…. Woh toh bahut dur hai.

Amar- kitna dur hai?

Chaiwala- kum se kum ek ghanta yahan se.

He pointed in the direction of where they were going….. Shakti groaned.

Shakti- I cant walk now.

She sat on one of the benches and Amar joined her.

Chaiwala- don't worry sir….. yeh lijiye (handing him 2 glasses of tea) mere haath ki chai peejiye…. Aap aur aapki Mrs. dono fresh ho jayege.

Both Amar and Shakti's heads snapped up…. They looked at each other….. Amar's lips twitched….. Shakti blinked and quickly answered the chaiwala.

Shakti- arre nahi bhaiya, hum…..

Amar interrupted.

Amar- thank you bhaiya (taking both the glasses from him)

He turned to her and passed her one glass.

Amar- here you go darling…. Yeh peelo aur fir chal te hai….. (to Chaiwala) hum Shaadi ke baad first time iske ghar jaa rahe hai….. bhaag ke Shaadi ki thi na….. ab ghar walon ko manane jaa rahe hai….. gaadi kharab ho gayi raste main…. Toh koi mechanic dhoodh rahe hai.

He looked at Shakti….. she was staring at him with her mouth hanging….. he winked at her…. She blinked….. looked at the Chaiwala and smiled weakly….. he went back to his work….. She turned to Amar and glared at him.

Shakti- (hissed) w*f was that??!!!

Amar shrugged…. And sipped his tea.

She snarled at him….. he sniggered.

After they finished their tea, the Chaiwala came back to them.

Chaiwala- sir, woh meri cycle hai. (pointing at a cycle leaning against a street pole)…. Aap usse le jaao….. aate time, le aana.

Amar got up and hugged him.

Amar- thank you dost.

The Chaiwala was surprised by the hug….. he moved back and smiled with embarrassment….. Shakti giggled.

Amar turned to her and winked.

Amar- chale bhagyawan?

Shakti rolled her eyes and got up.

Shakti- (to Chaiwala) thank you bhaiya.

Chaiwala- madam, aise lagta hai maine aap ko kahin dekha hai.

Shakti looked at Amar with alarming eyes….. she should have guessed….. they were known faces….. they would be recognized by people….. thankfully Amar butt in.

Amar- haan….. yahi ki rehene wali hai na….. dekha hoga….. acha chalte hai…… thank you…. Cycle jaldi lauta dunga.

He held Shakti's arm and pulled her to the cycle….. he quickly got on the cycle….. made her sit on the rod in front of him….. and left.

Again there was an awkward silence….. all they could hear was the sound of the pedal chain.

Her back was pressed to his body and he could feel every strand of hair standing on her arms….. his face was close to her neck and he saw her carotid pumping strong….. he dipped his face and buried his nose in the crook of her neck….. her scent was making him go wild…. She placed her hand on the his hand to steady herself….. her head tilted back to rest on his shoulder….. he dipped his head further and planted gentle kisses along her collar…. He felt her tremble.

Shakti- (whisper) Kunwar stop…..

She opened her eyes….. oh God!!... this was not right….. but her throat was dry….. she swallowed hard…. Just then she saw a truck racing towards them….. she gasped.

Shakti- (shrieked) Kunwar, watch out!!!!

He lifted his head to see a truck coming at them….. his eyes widened.

Amar- oh F**k!!!

Just before the truck could crash into them, he took a sharp turn….. but before he could get some control on the cycle they run into one of the road bumpers….. they both flew out of the cycle….. the last thing he heard was Shakti's scream.

PS- Pms are on the way….. I'll update next part tom….. pakka.

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update aap aur aapka mrs was sooo cuuute and she thinking how amar eyes were sooo mushy that was so sweeet and they had accident make sure nothing serious awesome awesome awesome and thnx for pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
arre ab aage kya hoga...update soon and plz pm me...

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