ArSha FF (new)- Pehele Pyar ka Ehsaas- # 1 - Page 106

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update Tish...Keep up the good work
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...
it was amazing..
u always take me to d arshaland...
loved d romantic moments bw arsha...
waiting eagerly for d next update,,,
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Posted: 13 years ago
OH MY GOD!!!!Tish that was freaking AWESOME!!!!

oh la la...hawt!!!

my ArSha land has become ur version of ArSha land..the way u see them n portray them in here...

the hallway part was sooo *i've got no words*

Amar is sooo WOW (damn am unable to find any words...am speechless)

This is the BEST FF!!

THANK YOU so much Tish!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

u r such a phenomenal writer dear...loved it...🤗

ArSha romance...☺️

n sorry the like button isn't working, I"ll try again😳

loved it...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
How do you write so bloody well? I mean seriously HOWWW!! Its like the way you write leaves goosebumps across our skin! Like ankita sed in her comment its sad that this is all just fictional but just goes to show that you really are one hell of a writer! Kudos!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww...
damn those yash n anjali... 😡
yaar tish, tun in dono (yash n anjali) ka link-up kyun nahi kardeti iss ff main? at least arsha will be spared...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohh Gosh!! m dead!! How can you write so well? It was freaking hot!! But it does hurts to know that its all fictional!!
Edited by lovekriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
!!

oops... sorry aaj late ho gaya.😉... here's the next update... have fun.😊


It's ok...V luv ur work n wud wait for it<3<3


Part 28



Shakti noticed that Anjali and Amar had not joined them yet'.. she quickly looked back'.. he wasn't standing at his place'. And neither could she see Anjali anywhere'.. she looked around, grazing the entire hall.'.. but she couldn't spot them'.. where did they vanish??!!

Infact even I was wondering where did amar go...after dis😆

She stepped back trying to sneak out of the group to look for him.

Sneha- what?... kahan jaa rahi ho?

Shakti- I'll just be back.

Sneha- (confused) arre but abhi they will exchange the rings'.. where are you going now?

Shakti- Mr. India ko dhundhne.

Remembered indiafest sharey scene..Mr.India!!!!!

Sneha frowned and before she could stop Shakti'.. she left.

She quickly scanned the room one last time'.. she still dint see any of them'.. she hurried out'.. she stepped out in the hallway and stopped'.. kahan jaaun?...... where should I start?... I don't even have my cell to call him'.. he's such a jerk!!... bina bole aise chala jaata hai'.. aur uparse woh Chipkali bhi nahi dikh rahi hai'.. fine'.. I'll check his room.

Anjali a chipkali...wow!!!!I hate chipkali's dat's y i call charlie in my ff as chipkali😆!!!!

She turned to the left and suddenly bumped into a large muscular body.

Shakti- ouch!

Shakti bumped into amar...waiting for dis..😃

She looked up and gazed in those ever tempting eyes'. he smiled.

Amar- hey!!'.. easy babe'.. kaun si train pakadne jaa rahi ho?

Lovd dis line...kaun si train pakadne jaa rahi ho...😆

She opened her mouth to answer but her voice ditched her'.. they was standing real close'.. his arms around her waist trying to steady her from their collision'.. their faces inches apart'. She gulped'. She tried to move back but he shoved her back to him'.. his fingers grazed the counter of her bare lower back'.. she shuddered'. Their eyes never leaving each other.

I expected look looka hawa hawa bg music..thank god u didnt keep dat..i'm bored wid dat!!!!

Amar- (hoarsely) did I mention how gorgeous you look tonight?

It felt really gud to listen d way he asked did i meintion how gorgeous you look tonight.😃

She mutely shook her head.

Amar- then let me tell you now. (whisper)

He leaned forward covering the gap between them'.. her eyes slid shut'.. he brushed his lips on her temple'.. and very slowly stirred it lower to her brow'.. he nuzzled closer and dipped his head lower to plant a kiss below her ear lobe'.. inhaling the sweet flowery scent of her perfume.

D way u described was really gud..u r a gud writer though⭐️!!!

Amar- Gosh!!!... you smell so good! (huskily)

I didn't expect him to tell but he told!!!!

She moaned and rolled back, silently offering him the vulnerable flesh of her throat'.. her hands resting on his chest'. She gripped his coat to steady herself'.. he continued to nibble on her neck'.. she let out a silent whimper and guided her hands lower until they found the button on his suit coat'.. she slowly unfastened it and gaped the blazer open'.. she slipped her hands in and skimmed her fingers from his flat stomach to the muscular chest, crumpling the shirt underneath, in her fist'.. he took in sharp breath and dipped his head further down, gently kissing the path till her collar'.. his arm wiggling her narrow waist, yanking her close'.. his hand gently caressing his way up'.. leaving gooseflesh where his fingers stroked her bare back.

~~~~~~~~~It was so romantic~~~~~~~

Amar- I told you, you'll come back to me. (whispered in her ear)

Shakti felt him toying with the dori of her blouse'.. she gasped and stiffened'.. hell!!!... what are we doing??!!... we are in the middle of a f**king hallway!!!... she willed herself to pull back.

Amar was d way too fast...n she willed herself to pull back!!!!

Shakti (throatily) Kunwar'.. stop!

He felt her hands on his chest trying to push him'.. he sighed, let go of her and stepped back to get some space between them'.. she moved back until she hit the wall behind her and she leaned on it, before her legs gave way'.. they both were panting hard'.. she looked down'.. he watched her flushed cheeks and reached forward to trace it with his fingers'.. she gulped, closed her eyes and turned her head away.

Flushed cheeks!!!!!😃

He quietly shoved his hands in his pockets.

Gentleman...quietly shoved his hands in his pockets...

He heard someone call him out.

Who is dat crap???😡

He turned to look at Anjali hurrying to them.

Expected one..chipkali!!!!!😡

Anajli- hey Kunwar'. kahan the?... kabse dhoondh rahi hun tumhain.

She looked at Shakti and back at Amar?... looking at both their flushed faces she frowned.

Anjali- everything ok?

Amar- hmm

He ranked his hand through his hair and cleared his throat.

Amar- why were you searching for me?

Anajli- ring ceremony start hone wali thi'. And I saw you leave'.. I came behind to call you, but you disappeared.

Amar- haan woh, main Caterer se baat karne gaya tha'.. I had to ask him to send the cake on the stage after the ring ceremony.

Anjali- oh.

She looked at Shakti and then back at Amar'.. she watched his crumpled shirt below his jacket'. And her eyes narrowed.

She understood d situation na..hell..she was der yet!!!

Anjali- what's all this, Kunwar?... ache se shirt toh tuck in karte.

She stepped forward to straighten his shirt that was creased.

Oh no!!!!Shakti...I thought she will be fumin in anger😡!!!

Amar flinched back and quickly put his coat button'. He turned to watch Shakti who was glaring at them'.. he bit back a smile'.. she swiftly looked away.

Had an idea whether he wud help her to tie d dori tightly..but it wud becum a random one..

U changes it...I felt gud!!!

Amar went and stood as far away as possible'.. he dint want to see her dance with someone else'. After a while, the song ended'.. he looked over'.. but they continued to dance for the next song too'.. he saw the guy's arms lingering on her waist'.. Amar's hands curled into tight fists and he wrapped his arms in front of him before he did something stupid.

Thank god he didnt come up n smash dat idiot..environment wud have changed...

He saw Yash lean towards her and whisper something in her ear'.. her eyes widened with surprise'. Amar frowned wondering what did he tell her'.. Shakti reached behind her back and felt the loose dori'.. Amar realized that the guy had just told her about it'.. Shakti shook her head at something else the guy said and it dawned upon Amar that Yash had just volunteered to help her tie the dori'.. Ok that was enough!!!!... he walked up to the floor.

Chipkali version 2...yash!!!! 😡

Amar- (at Yash) excuse me?... can is steal your dance partner for a while?

I dnt think dat yash wid have agreed if had given a chance!!!!😊

And before the guy could even reply'.. he stepped in between them taking Shakti in his arms.

Yeah chipkali 2 eliminated..yupiee!!!!😛

Shakti was surprised to see him'.. she looked over at Yash, who's mouth was still hanging from the sudden turn of events'.. she bit back a chuckle'.. she owed it to Amar'.. if she had to be with that moron for a second more, she would have thrown up.

Good..amar came to help shakti frm tht moron!!!😆

She looked up at Amar'.. and realized him being so close to him was not helping her to calm her nerves'.. they silently swayed on beat of the music'.. eyes locked.

I thought he wud b angry wid her to dancing with dat yash but luckily not!!!😃


She turned around and walked away'.. she heard his soft chuckle'.. Jerk!!... she walked to Alisha and asked her to accompany her to the washroom, to help her with the blouse.

His soft chuckle...gosh man!!!

Luckily for her, she never got a chance to be alone with him for the rest of the evening.


Coming to d update...it was really gud n adorable..
Luvd d update n thnxx for d pm!!!
Sorry 4 d late comment too...
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Posted: 13 years ago
when they ll b officially kriyansh awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW...
it was just mindblowing...
i don't know what else to say, it was just sooo good...

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