IPKKND: Stolen Moments - Page 4

Originally posted by: minimuffin86

NO NO NO Shue!! As noble as your intentions were you still didn't manage to make it raunchie enough! It was still written with class and dignity.

Being a vetran and a Topic Closed pro ley me give you a few tips. you should have mentioned the following:

*That she rode him like the stud that he was till her thighs were raw and she walked with a limp.

*that he welcomed the morning by ramming in to her so hard again and again that she saw stars and thought it was still the middle of the night

*you should have added that neither of them were in love with each other or looking for commitment, actually she was getting married to some one else by the end of the month but when he showed her his huge erection she felt like a child in a candy shop with an addicts control! so they always ended up in bed satisfying their lust filled urges towards each other!!

all of the above would have had your topic closed in a jiffy... or no if you would have added those it would have stayed open till the end of time!!!

Originally posted by: malluangel

just for the record. the arhi version was way better... but then again, im biased :P

Oh!! Did i manage to make it to stamp my mark of revolt?? Oh yeah baby!! This is even more fun!!