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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: blah_blah03
Well that was incredibly hot! ☺️

I guess someone really wants to get their OS closed 😆

I'm not gonna lie, I enjoyed reading it! 😉 besharm much?😳

You enjoyed it?!! Even though there's no deep meaningful plot or endless metaphors and references to rainbows and waterfalls!?

How could you!? 😲

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667300

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -Chinnu-

Omg nayika! :O
how could you post this its so graphic and explicit! *runs away to tell on you*
khushi and arnav were getting it on and he touched her :O
tut he also kissed her lips :O
thats very graphic im to young to read!

Right now my real comment
oh this is the manvi and viraat one right?
I loved reading it
it was so hot!

I'm sorry! I didn't mean it! Please don't! I'll change everything, I promise :P

Lol yeah it was :)

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603840

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

lol!!! your intro is very sound.

loved it alll. very hawt!

correct me if i'm mistaken...i can hear the pitter patter of MOD's coming your way, lolololol.

xxx

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667300

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr
You wrote this for EHMMBH, right? I liked it better with ArHi, to be honest :)

Great OS! :)

xoxo
Aanya

Actually I first wrote it about Arnav and Khushi and then I changed it because I thought it suited younger characters more (ie Maanvi and Virat) and also because I'd never written anything like this before at the time so I wanted to test it out on a different forum with different readers lol.

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blah_blah3

@blah_blah3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: nayika

You enjoyed it?!! Even though there's no deep meaningful plot or endless metaphors and references to rainbows and waterfalls!?

How could you!? 😲

😲 How could I be so stupid and not realize there was no rainbows and waterfalls! 😲

AND how did you let Arnav and Khushi touch! Let alone pull off each others pants 😲😲

😲

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@princessunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

yippieee!! i got here to post before this thing got closed down!!

hehe niceee!! ok i think u r gonna get ur wish soon n get this one closed pretty soon!!😆 for everyone - go ahead until then knock urselves out!(no pun intended!)🤣

oh btw i jst realized i did read this on Manvi-Virat and well honestly(despite me adoring them too) that time i felt weird cz they weren't even a couple in the official sense so the hanky panky seemed a lil odd..

but today! i enjoyed myself immensly!!😳

Edited by princessunara - 13 years ago