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*Banner by Aichu dii. I am glad I am able to use this siggy again*


I seriously don't want to write a long speech and spoil everything. Just know that I am continuing original YAS Chapter 16 and considering the revising version and all the nonsense that went through my head as a terrible nightmare. I don't expect much readers, not after all that mess I created. But no regrets as such. I have always been like this, you guys are just new to it :) Still love ya all for being the best and for always holding my hand. Its like I have got myself a family. MUAH <3


Story So Far : This is just to rewind your memories and plus for new readers who are sure to find my initial writings pathetic.

An orphan rarely has anything but a bright future, some say. But she was determined to change that. She lived to get herself to be called much more than just an abandoned 'child'. This is the story of Ridhima, a girl for whom fate always brought something different. On an ordinary day, when hit badly in an accident, she was left to rot and bleed away while the crowd simply took in the sight of her weakening body. Society evils keep people from helping her and for long, she is left to lie there. Until of course, her hero comes. That's he, enters her life. A prince charming in every sense, he curses the crowd and himself turns saviour to Ridhima whom he takes to the hospital in his hands. However, she is denied treatment purely because she didn't have anyone to accept the terms of the hospital and vouch as her close relative. Once again, furious at the inhuman nature of people, he glides his bleeding hands around her maang, initiating a marriage according Hindu traditions, leaving everyone in the hospital spellbound. All's good as she is taken into surgery and is in the process of recovery. Except one thing. Ridhima doesn't know his real name nor how he looks for everything happened when she was in her unconscious mind. His disappearance right after her surgery leaves an empty hole in her life. Two years later, Ridhima applies for a job and is leading a lovely life, her past and her so called 'husband' still an untouchable alien. Memories of that still haunts her but running behind them was just not Ridhima. Until one day. She is arrested by Vivek, a police officer on account of a smuggling ring that used her name for deals. She dreads her suspicions because the timing of a certain event that she had to encounter with this was a bad combo[For those who have read, I am talking about Chapter 3]. Around the same time, her best friend, Muskaan reveals that she is in love and will have to get married soon for her fiance, Rahul has got a transfer to Delhi. Ridhima is pretty upset with the arrest and the thought of parting with her best friend. But being the strong her, she handles her emotions well and by luck, Vivek pronounces her free. Ridhima chooses to give her best friend a wonderful wedding rather than seeming unhappy at the lovely life she had ahead of her. They share a conversation on the marriage day, convincing each other that their friendship can very much survive even if Muskaan was to shift to Delhi. Ridhima also tells Muskaan the only secret she hid from Muskaan; about her mystery man.
Armaan Mallik, the son of Ridhima's boss, an Interpol Officer has arrived after about 6 years to meet his friends and family in India. Despite informing everyone that he is here for Rahul's wedding, he has other things bothering him behind his head.
Ridhima meets Armaan during Rahul's and Muskaan's wedding preparations. They began the relationship on a bad note with Ridhima detesting Armaan's guts while Armaan taking advantage of the fact and doing more to irritate her.

Actual facts : Armaan is Ridhima's mystery man and he knows this. He has told about to Rahul, Vivek and Atul, his friends. Through Rahul, Muskaan too is aware of this even before Ridhima tells her and has her head onto getting Armaan and Ridhima together. But on realizing that Ridhima no longer is willing to live a life relying on a past that is so incomprehensible disappoints Muski a bit. Nevertheless, she knows that AR have to get together because already they are tied in God's eyes. Armaan wants Ridhima back for in the 2 years he has secretly noticed her and had grown a magnetic attraction to her. But he does not reveal it to her for reasons of his own. Besides, he has the 'things' again to worry about because its the dark cloud above them which is dangerous to Ridhima specifically.
What is the dark cloud? Will Armaan be able to protect Ridhima from all that? How is Ridhima going to react to Armaan on knowing that he is the guy all along?

This story is truly close to my heart. The core concept is very real for its routed by society evils. The rest is like a fairy tale for I think life itself has enough and more harsh reality for us. So yeah. That's YAS for you.

I don't ask anything but sincere support/criticism.

Love ya guys always,
Amal <3

I n d e x


Yet Another Sunset [Chapters 1 - 5]

Yet Another Sunset #2 Chapter 6 - 8]

Yet Another Sunset #3 [Chapter 9 - 12(A)]

Yet Another Sunset #4 [Chapter 12 (B)]

Yet Another Sunset #5 [Chapter 13 - 15]

Chapter 16 // Chapter 17 // Chapter 18 // Chapter 19 // Chapter 20 // Chapter 21
Chapter 22 // Chapter 23 // Chapter 24 //Chapter 25

YET ANOTHER SUNSET #7 [Chapter 26 onwards]
An index of all my other works INDEX
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CONGRATULATIONS 🤗🥳

I can't believe we've reached YAS 6 😲a nd that you're continuing with the original YAS 😲 i have missed this SO much! I went back and read all the other chapters from the 1st 5 threads 😆 i read the summary, but i still felt that i needed to go read the other chapters because they were truly magical and all of them are so close to my heart <3 the summary does not do the story justice so if any new reader is reading this..GO AND READ THE CHAPTERS IN THE FIRST 5 THREADS! I've told you many times that YAS is the first ff i read and thats only one of the reasons why i love it so much 😃 I remember when i first read it and these lines - "I dont know how he looks..I dont know who he is..But I do know..He is my husband..I know I will find him sir..I am born for him..And I will definitely find me..Till then my search shall continue"made me fall in love with your writing <3 and i knew that i would come to love this FF :) I am so happy that i've been with you in this journey. i've watched YAS grow and i've seen how your writing has matured as the chapters progressed.

YAS is truly unique because of how you've portrayed relationships. Muski and Riddhima's friendship is something that i really adored! they are like sisters and they share such a unique bond!

In the first thread you showed riddhima and muskaan both as each others support. I remember how upset riddhima was when she realised she couldn't go to muski's wedding and how she hid her pain from muskaan to see her happy 😃 I also love the mystery that there was in YAS. Riddhima's desperation to find armaan and all those close encounters AR had, with riddhima knowing it was him but not seeing his face were what made me love YAS :) There was an encounter in the first thread, the one in the forest <3 And that gave us a little insight into armaans character. He told her to move on which means that he knew that she was waiting for him. It showed us that armaan cares about her :) In thread 2 riddhima and muskaan met rahul's family They met Aditi and vivek and riddhima realised that her friends husband was the police officer! They all instantly bonded and became good friends, without any awkwardness. and there was another encounter with armaan! I loved how riddhima knew it was him, she could sense him. He stopped her from falling and she saw his blue eyes. i remember wondering why he always disappeared? But at the same time, it seemed like he was always there to protect her. Whenever she needed help or was alone, he was there 😃

And also in thread 2 rahul, atul and vivek mentioned how they missed armaan and we found out about how armaan was a cop and i really started to respect him, while wondering why he left his family and why he never even wrote them any letters. And i was also confused about how riddhima got involved in the smuggling thing and i knew that it was something to do with armaan but i wasn't sure. You really showed the bond between Armaan, Rahul, Vivek and atul well even though armaan wasn't there. i could see how close they all were and i loved how billy was like their father and naina was like their mother :) they are all a big happy family although they aren't related 😃And my VIVAD <3 THEY ARE SO CUTEEE :) i think i loved this phase of YAS the most. Armaans character was becoming clearer and the gang were doing so much masti 😆 Now let me move onto YAS 3 😲 i loved the game they played when they were going from mumbai to shimla. and when they said shaadi to riddhima, she said aankhein! That showed me how much armaan means to her and it made me so happy :) and what was the best thing about YAS 3 was that we got to see armaans POV. he was watching her and admiring her from a distance when the gang were in shimla and that showed us that he cared about her too <3

I thought that armaan maybe coincidentally met her when they had those 2 encounters but when i saw his point of view, i realised how wrong i was. He was watching her for so many days. It was like an addiction for him! He loved her and he knew that they were meant to be together. so i kept wondering why doesn't he go to her? why has he not talked to her for 2 years? Why does he keep watching her from a distance? Armaan was a mystery and trying to figure out why he kept disappearing was something i enjoyed :) and then there was that episode with the kakad sisters 🤣 that made me laugh so much 🤣 it felt so good to see armaan doing some masti and not being so serious! and i remember how AR had a moment and riddhima was staring into his eyes and she was confused because he was a fat woman 🤣 Now let me move onto YAS 4 😎 i loved the interaction between AARV. This line: "His Armaan was so delicate within"made me wonder why armaan was like this. what had happened in armaans life? and it really touched my heart because rahul knew armaan so well and cared for him :) we saw a different side to armaan in YAS 4. I loved seeing him playing pranks and leading the gang. it was so funny when they all climbed up that big tree 🤣 AND OMGGG YOU MADE ME ONE OF ATULS PLANTS IN YAS 4! I WAS SO HAPPYYY 🤣

And now YAS 5 😲 I loved AR's first proper meeting and how riddhima was so annoyed at him 🤣 but i know she liked him, she was just denying it 🤣 and i loved how muski was so excited when riddhima was talking about armaan. i knew from her excitement that muski had found out everything about AR :) rahul probably told her 😃 there was a lot on muski and riddhima's friendship which i loved but it also made me get so emotional because I DON'T WANT MUSKI TO GOOO :( i will actually cry if she leaves 😭 and riddhima finally told muskaan about her and armaan 🤣 but muski already knew 🤣 but what made me sad was that riddhima was tired of hoping. She had changed because all this hoping was draining her out. And i completely understand how she feels. Its not easy waiting for someone for that long But its annoying that when armaan is finally here, riddhima doesn't know what she would do if she met the guy 😭 But at the same time i like how AR's relationship is developing and i'm glad armaan hasn't told her that he is her husband, because she might then feel obliged to love him! OMG writing all of this has made me feel so nostalgic 😭 Reading YAS and being a part of it has been amazing. This journey had ups and downs but no matter what happens, it is so close to my heart and i will never forget it <3

I wanna tell you that i am very proud of you my bacchi :) Yes, you were confused and you wrote YAS again but i'm happy that you did what you thought was right and you followed your heart! And i just want you to know that i'll always be here to support you. No matter what you do. I know that you are finding it so hard to write YAS because you miss AR so much but don't let that hold you back. AR were amazing and their story was legendary. I have never liked a couple like i liked them and yes it is sad that they won't come back together onscreen. But thats not the end because AR will always live in our hearts. Legends don't end. They will always be in our memory. We've loved them for 3 years and been through all the ups and downs with them and even i felt so broken when dmg ended. But you can't let this ruin your talent. You are amazing at writing and especially at writing on AR and if you love AR then just think of writing as a way of remembering them, a way of keeping their memory alive. The original YAS had a magical touch to it and even though i loved the new one, the magic was missing. So i want you not to hold back and try to get that magic back :) i haven't read the chapters of YAS 6 but i'll do that soon! Maybe read though the first 5 threads a few times and refresh your memory of what happened, and just watch some happy AR scenes! And also can you name the titles in YAS 6? Because i loved how in YAS 1-5 you named them and i loved the names of the chapters :) I have made so many friends on YAS (you know who you are 🤣) and i love it so much! So never lose hope and keep writing! love you bacchi <3
Edited by kajen_hamesha - 13 years ago
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Go on and reserve if you want to jaanis. <3

JEEZ. Radhu dii you are so fast. 😆
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Sorryyy! the title said welcome so i reserved 😳
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Originally posted by: kajen_hamesha

Sorryyy! the title said welcome so i reserved 😳


Its kay jaana. <3 I am in good mood today 😛
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EDITED...😳

Finally I am editing my res...I know I am late this tym.😳.bt wt to do my love...Ryt now I am hell busy in work n all🤢..Now coming to ur decision of continuing Old or I can Say Our ORIGINAL YAS😊...I just have to say one thing...I LOVE YOU.❤️.. Seriously Amal you don't have any idea How happy I am to know that You are Fnally Continuing YAS that too Original one...This story is really really close to my heart and I am really missing this like hell.😳..I know that right now u have exams and all but I am ready to wait sweety...Thanks once again for this decision..Now toh I am just super duper excited for YAS journey...All the very best for your exams...Do well in that and then Come soon to YAS and too US...Waiting for your comeback very desperately... Take care

Lots of Love
Geet
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Hey Amal 🤗 Congratulations ,well for this thread n continuing with the original YAS!!! i'm so happy for u n us also😉..lol...but it is really very close to our hearts also!!!!
N no regrets about anything yaar, just waiting for reading more n more of YAS now...well exams going on but after that, it's gonna be great!!! well all the very very best for your exams...n YAS is gonna be amazing like always!!!!!!! it's been wonderful n will continue to be ...

Muahhh
Love u loads
Take care
🤗
Pranishta
Edited by ARKJ_4EVER - 13 years ago
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Congratulations Amal :P Sorry for not giving a speech, i'm kinda busy at the moment!
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Do I get to say that I am in?? Andd I expect PMs for this if you are sending them? 😉
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Reserve #3

These reserves are for Armaan, Poo dii, Rida and Medz. Whoever sends first will get the first reserve and so on. EDITED the story so far. Chapter 16. Hmm. No clue when I can pen it. Actually I have Chapter 17 ready. Its my favorite chapter of all. 😳 Anyways, no promises jaanis. I have 3 pre board exams next week back to back. So its going to tight but I will try to fit in something if I can <3 and yeah PMs later <3
Edited by SmokingDreams - 13 years ago

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