FF/SS Preeto ILU con updated pt11 pg14

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Aqeelah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Me first Loved the update ... and the rajpreet moments 🤗 sooo cute and sweettt

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Sneha Patro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

superbbb update...👏Rajpreet too cutee...❤️

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Raj_preet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Awww love Rajpreet moments and enjoying every one's FF/OS every one are giving so many Rajpreet scenes nd lovely moments thnx to every one👏

waiting for nxt part Bobby😊

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Mary1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Love your story bobby! Can't wait the next part. xx 😃

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Bobby1810

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Part 9 - Rajbeer talks to his Dad

Rajbeer goes to basecamp for his training and Preeto goes to the boutique. Rajbeer had dropped Preeto off. Rajbeer during his lunch break phones his Dad. (By the way the dad is being played by Ronit Roy).

Rajbeer: Hello Ah Hello Dad how are you? Kise ho aap.

Dad: Hi Rajbeer haan mein teek hoon tume kise yo aur aaj ye achanka phone kaase kiya?

Rajbeer: Woh mein aap kush baat karni thi. Aap busy ho kiya?

Dad: Haan busy tho mein hu paar tum bohot kia baat karni thi. Waise sab teek ha nah?

Rajbeer: Haan sab teek hai. Woh aap ko pata hooga ke meine ek ladki pasand kareli ha aur mein use shaadi karne wala hoon. Paar mein soche ke aap agar unse mil lo tho accha hooga after all she is going to be your daughter in law.

Dad: Accha tho ye baat he? Waise mujhe Mahesh ne bathidiya tha. (Mahesh is the one who gets the paperwork signed by Rajbeer and Papaji).

Rajbeer: Accha toh Dad please aap bahot kab mein aap se mill sacke tha hoon.

Dad: Aaj tho mein bohot busy hoon. Par do din baat miltha haan. Tum ghar sham ko aajana. Aur soono usko bhi saat le kare ana. Mein bhi toh deku ke mera beta ne kisi ladki pasand ki hai.

Rajbeer: Ok dad mein do din baat miltha haan. See you soon and take care.

Dad: Ok beta mujhe bi apni meeting attend karni ha. See you in two days time.

Rajbeer hangs up the phone and then dials Preeto's number. Preeto is busy with a customer and does not attend the phone. Rajbeer thinks to himself ye ladki bina kabhi phone nahi oothathi. Mein boutique ja kare use baat karoonga aur use mill bi loonga. Rajbeer then heads for the Boutique.

At the Boutique Preeto has just finished dealing with the customer and Simran was not there as she had gone for the day to a meeting and would be back until tomorrow.

Rajbeer: Hi Preeto. Kise ho aur tume phone kui nahi ootha rahi thi kab se try kare raahe tha.

Preeto: Hi Rajbeer tum yeha? Kia hoowa? Sorry aaj mein toora busy hoon isiliye phone nahi oothapie. Aur Simran bi yeha nahi hai.

Rajbeer : Accha toh ye baat hai. Meine socha ke tum mujhe ignore kaarehi thi. Waise meine aaj Dad se baat kaareli ha aur unno ne hum dono ko 2 din baat bhuliya hai. Aur Biji Papaji se baat karni thi paar phele soche tumhe baatha do.

Rajbeer then moves closer to his Preeto and gives her a hug from the back and kisses her on her cheeks.

Preeto: Rajbeer kia kaare rahe ho. Koi customer aajahiyaga tho.

Rajbeer: Tum tho janathi ho ke mein tumse door nahi raare sacketha. I just can't wait ke kab meri shaadi hoogi aur tum meri hoogi.

Preeto then pushes him away as she sees a customer coming. Ab aap biji or papaji se baat karo ho.

Rajbeer: Hum saath chalte ha. Waise bi 7:00 o'clock hooga hai aur boutique baand karni ha.

Preeto: Haan mein toh bhulihe gayi thi ke luna mere paas nahi ha. Chalo mein boutique baand karthi hoon.

Preeto and Rajbeer set off in the car towards home.

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Sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

great job 👏, missed some of the earlier parts, hoping to catch soon..but keep writing..thanks.

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Bobby1810

@Bobby1810

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally by Love03

great job 👏, missed some of the earlier parts, hoping to catch soon..but keep writing..thanks.

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Thank you so much Love03 for your comments. Your love and support means a great deal.

Edited by Bobby1810 - 13 years ago

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Sneha Patro

@snehapatro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Gurminder this part was bit small but good one dear...👍🏼

waiting for next part...😃

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Bobby1810

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally by Snehapatro

Gurminder this part was bit small but good one dear...👍🏼

waiting for next part...😃

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Thank you so much Sneha. I know this one was short and sweet but did not have much time. Will write the next part a bit longer.

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Saina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

OMG ,first of all i missed from part 5.never knew you were writing until you told me on FB and Thank God you told me :))

Read all the parts and truly liking the flow of the story.

It's like a show episode by episode and all Happy Rajpreet scenes

Aww loved every part ...

👍🏼 Fabulous job dear

Please PM me when you write your next part

Note: All writers are doing commendable job ..Hats Off to all for keeping us entertained by taking time from ur busy schedule ...Love u all

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