FF/SS Preeto ILU con updated pt11 pg14

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi everyone here is my first attempt on writing a FF/SS. Please let me know what you think.
It is a couple of days before the Roka and Biji asks Rajbeer to stay over (cvs I had this thought before watching the episode so please do not feel offended). Rajbeer is excited as he has seen a change in Preeto behaviour and knows that she is going to tell him her feelings on the Roka.
Roka day:
Preeto: Biji sab kama hoyege ab mein ready hoka athi hun.
😳
Biji: Ja Preeto Mein biki sambaloongi.
Biji to Rajbeer: Rajbeer Puttar tuubhi nakar ready hoja.
Rajbeer: Ji Biji.
Preeto has had a shower and her hair is wet. She is in her room getting dressed. Rajbeer also had shower and has got dressed. Rajbeer has to pass Preeto's room before going downstairs. He is passing and see Preeto dressed up (she is wearing the chunni) 😆 and putting on her bangles and about to put the kangan that he gave her.
Rajbeer (is mermorised by what he is seeing) comes in and kneels beside her. 😃
Preeto: Aap. Aap hein?
Rajbeer: Ha Kyunki? Any problem?
Preeto: Nahi tho problem ka honihe?
Rajbeer: Apne haath do?
Preeto: Haath?
Rajbeer: ha haath!!! he then takes hold of her hand and places one of the kangan on it. Then it takes the other kangan and places it on her other hand. He gets up and pulls her up.
Preeto: (blushing) looks up at him. Kika karho?
Rajbeer: Tume ready hona me maathadat kare hun.
Preeto: Bas mein ready hun.
Rajbeer: Preeto tune muhje kush kena thanah aaj yaad he?
Preeto: (teasing him) mein? Nahi tho.
Rajbeer: Preeto ab aur maat saatho? Bathoo nah?
He looks at her with pleading eyes!! He pulls her up and she bumps into him. She turns away blushing. 😳 He holds her head and turns it around😳😆. He whispers her name!!!.
Rajbeer: wase tho mein samje gaye hun ke tuney kia kana tha par mein tumse suna chalatha hun!!
Preeto: Accha!! Tho batho mein kia kaney wali thee?
Rajbeer: Mein qui batho!!! Tumhe pelhe batho warna mein abi yeha sey chaley janoo ga or phir khabi wapas nahi aahoonga.
Preeto: Accha baba!!! She holds his hand and says mein tumrahi chunni orrli he aur kina chati hoo ke aap ki Zindagi mein ko wapas thadi hoon aur?
Rajbeer: Aur kiya?
Preeto: Ke aap biji aur papaji say baat karlo. Aur!!
Rajbeer: Preeto says Rajbeer in a stern voice as she is still teasing him.
Preeto: Accha!!! I am sorry par muhje tumko saateney mein mazaa atta ha. 😆Mein kina chaliti hun ke and she pauses and then whispers I love you!!!❤️
Rajbeer is shocked to hear her say that and says that 😃he didn't hear her doobar balo mein suna nahi!!!
Preeto: accha!! she starts hitting him and he tells her to stop. 🤗She stops and they look at each other and she tells him again I love you Mr Rajbeer Singh❤️
Rajbeer: using the same tone as her I love you too ❤️😃Miss Manpreet Dhillon. Preeto ab mujhe duniya ki haar kushi milgi aur tum meri hogi. 😃 I am so happy Preeto.😃
Preeto: Mein bhi bohawth kush hun qui pyaar karne mein aap se sika Rajbeer aur muhje itna accha saathi mila.😃
Rajbeer: Nahi Preeto muhje zaada kushi he. Mujhe Sab ke khoobsoorat aur accha saathi mila. 😍
Preeto: Aap phir lerena sur kare diya?
Rajbeer: Ha.
They both laugh and cuddle each other. Then Biji calls Preeto. Preeto responds I am coming Biji.🤗
Rajbeer: holding Preeto's hand and says hum duno saath nachey jaingaye haath parkaye aur sida Biji aur Papaji ka Arshiwaad leyange aur phir mein tumra haath mange loonga.
Preeto: Nahi mein nahi aap ke haath paraloongi!!!
Rajbeer: Darpok.
Preeto: Accha mein darpok!!!! Chalo phir. She grabs his hand and they go down the stairs together.
Biji and Papai are overjoyed to get such a beta/son in law.
Let me know what you think.
Edited by Bobby1810 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh my sweetness Rajpreet together... 😍
grttt one gurminder...👏
do come up with more and ha if u can long one next time...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Haye cute Rajpreet love story..Loved reading it..

Thanks for listening to us and putting your thoughts into writing..👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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are waah...u broght dem together...

🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗...dese r for u dear...

write more soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊 enjoyed reading it ... do continue writing more FF's and SS's
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Ur 1st FF but u really done good job👏
Preeto: Accha mein darpok!!!! Chalo phir. She grabs his hand and they go down the stairs together.
good that preeto and rajbeer are together 😊 waiting for the ur nxt one

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Thank you all for liking my FF. I really appreciate it.
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Originally posted by: Bobby1810

Thank you all for liking my FF. I really appreciate it.

come up with more dear...😃
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wow...super... Rjpreet...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys I am doing the second Part of ILU Confession let me know what you think.
The scene ended with Papaji and Biji is overjoyed to have Rajbeer as SIL/Beta. Here is the next part hope you enjoy.
Simram was running late for the Roka and comes in just as Rajbeer and Preeto are taking Papaji and Biji's blessings. Simi is shocked to see Preeto wearing the chunni because she knows what that chunni meant to Rajbeer.
Preeto: Biji, Papaji mein abi athi hoon mujhe kush kaam karna hei.
Biji: Accha Puttar konska kaam?
Preeto: Biji Meeta di ka Roka hai tho kitna kaam karne baki hai aur ab Roka soorajana hai.
Rajbeer: Mein bi tumara saat chalte hoon aur madat karadonga aur jilt kaam kataam hojaaga. (With a cheeky smile and raised eyebrows as to say I want to be with you).😃
Preeto: Nahi Rajbeer aap guests ko samalo mein kare loongi.😃
Rajbeer: Accha boss mein guests samaloonga.😉
Simran calls to Rajbeer. He comes up to her and she asks him: tune kabhi baata nahi ke tum Preeto se pyaar karke ho.
Rajbeer: Simran mein isilaye nahi baata kuike mujhe Preeto's ka jawab ke intazaar tha. Aaj hunse ha kardi aur isiliye unsa meri dadi ki chunni penleli.
Tears are in Simi's eyes and she starts crying. 😭 Rajbeer asks are you ok? Simram says nahi mena socha tha ke tum mujhe pyaar karketha hoi and tune kibara kaya ke tum meri sab kush hoi.
Rajbeer: (shocked to hear this from Simram but controls himself) and says Simram I love you but just a good friend and nothing more. Simran Preeto meri Zindagi hei. Usne mujhe jigna sikha. Usne iss pattar singh ko insaan banaye aur pyaar sikha. Preeto ki vaadja se mein badal hoon. Simran I am so sorry.
Simran: No tune sorry maat bolo. Mein nahi deka tumara pyaar aur I wish you all the best.🥺
In that Preeto comes to join them. 😆Preeto gives Simram a hug and you can see Simram is jealous of her but give her a hug, pretends she is happy and wishes all the best. Preeto thanks her. Preeto is about to leave again to do something else when Rajbeer grabs her and tells Simran I want you to meet Preeto meri jaan, meri zindagi meri sab kush. Iseke bina me ek pal bhi nahi jee sakatha. 😳❤️Simran excuses herself and leaves from there.
Preeto: Rajbeer Simran ko kia hua?❤️ Woh nazaar he kia? Tune usko upset tho nahi kia?❤️
Rajbeer: Nahi Preeto meri jaan mein aisa kush nahi kia. ❤️Woh baas tohare sa upset isileya ha ke ukse dost ko uski maan pasand jeevan saathi milgayi aur usko abhi koi nahi mila.
Preeto: Simran ko Pyaar karne wala bohot jildi anawala hei. Ab chalo Roka soorahoyaga.
Rajbeer holds her hand and says hum saath chalayga. 😳
The Roka ceremony is over and they are dancing and singing songs. Rajpreet are dancing to the song Tum meri zindagi me aayi behar bane kar and Tumse milka asa laga tum se milka aramaan hoye ...
Rajbeer (whispers in Preeto ears). Preeto mera paas tumare liya ek surprise hei. Kaal subah jildi tere honya aur hum saath jaake uss surprise dekne jaanage. 😍
Preeto: Accha agar mein mana karoo tho?
Rajbeer: Tum mana nahi karoogi aur agar mana kia mein tume uttoha kare laye janoo ga. ❤️
Preeto: Ok Rajbeerji in a mocking voice. Mein aap ke saath chaaloogi.
The next morning comes. It is VD and Rajbeer has a lot planned for the day. Unknown to him Preeto has also made something special things for him. Rajbeeer is wearing a red shirt and white suit. Preeto is wearing a simple red and white suit. Preeto had already packed the things that she was going to give him and asked him about breakfast. Nahi breakfast baad mein. AB chalo before someone comes.
They get in the car and drive to where they first met by the lake. Rajbeer had arranged for some people to place some red balloons and flowers in a little corner and set a table for two. He asks Preeto to close her eyes so that she does not see the surprise until he tell her to open her eyes.😆
Rajbeer: Preeto ab tum apni aakoon ko kol sakti ho. ❤️
Preeto opens her eyes and is memorised by what she sees. Rajbeer ye aap merali kiya? How sweet. Tears are in her eyes. 😭
Rajbeer holds the tears in his hand and says nahi Preeto aaj no rhona ab mein tume hamshaha kush rakooga aur tumari aakoon mein asooo nahi anadoonga. Rajbeer takes her hand and sits her at the table.
He makes a call and the waitress come to serve them breakfast. Rajbeer ordered everything Preeto likes to eat. They eat in one plate and feed each other and just look at each other with passion and love in thier eyes.❤️
After the enjoyable breakfast ad eyelocking event Rajbeer takes Preeto to another part of the lake where there a blanket of red roses made into a heart shaped and also lots of red and white ballons. He makes Preeto sit down and then asks her to close her eyes. He sits beside her and gets out the most beautiful diamond ring you ever saw.❤️😆
Rajbeer: Preeto apna haath do mujhe.
Preeto: Kui?
Rajbeer: Do na abhi paat chaljaga. 😆😉
Preeto holds her hand forwards with her eyes still closed.
Rajbeer takes her hand and kisses it. Then he places the ring on her finger and asks her to open her eyes.
😉
Preeto is shocked and in a shaky voice says Rajbeer ye kia he? kitni kuboosarat hei. Her eyes are all sparkly and she is just so happy to be with the man she loves. Rajbeer is smiling as he looks at her all sparkly eyed and see how beautiful she is and she is the love of his life. Is ring se jada kuboosarat tho tum ho Preeto. Tune meri zindagi ko itna kuboosarat banaye hei. Ye tho kush bi nahi hai tumara samaanaye. Abhi aur suprises bhi baki he.❤️
Preeto: Aap ne kia aur suprises plan kia hai? Issa pehle ke tun muje aur surprise do mujhe bi aap ko kush surprise dena hai. She asks him to close his eyes. She takes out a heart shaped handerchief that she embroided herself and written thier names on it. She also bought him a lockets with two hearts on it. One with his name on it and one with her name on it.
Preeto: Rajbeer apne haath do. He gives her his hands and she places the handerchief in his hands. She also places the lockets in his hands. She asks him to open his eyes.
Rajbeer: Wow Preeto tune tho itna kuboosarat tohfa banaya mera ileye. Aur ye lockets?❤️
Preeto: Ek locket tumara hei aur ek locket mera hei. Ye locket sirf locket nahi hey. Ye mera dil hey jo humasha tumara hei aur tumara dill hamasha mera saath hooga.
Rajbeer: sahi keha tune Preeto. Tum meri haar saas mein baasti ho. ❤️
They cuddle each other. He then starts kissing her passionately on her hands. He then moves to her arms then neck. At this Preeto starts blushing ☺️ and says kia kare ho kui deka leya!! kyon? Yaha kui nahi ha. He puts his hands in her hair and then pulls her closer to him. He kisses her forehead, then her closed eyes, cheeks. Finally he gives a passionate kiss on the lips. Preeto trys to resist but all power within her is gone and she can do nothing but oblige. They exchange the most passionate kisses and she whispers his name Rajbeer. He responds by silencing her once again by giving her another kiss. 🤗
They are locked in each other for what seemed like hours then Preeto's phone rings. Preeto jumps to see it is Biji calling. Preeto answers the call and Biji asks her where she is. Rajbeer tells her not to tell them where they are but make an excuse. Preeto bus mein tohara se kaam the tho mein baas howhi kare hi thi. Accha jildi ghaar aaja tuse kush baat karni he aur Rajbeer kana hey? Woh bhi sabah se nahi he aur nasaata bi nahi kare ke gaye? Preeto says mein 10 mins take aajaanogi and hangs up.
Preeto: Rajbeer chalo Biji ne bulah hai aur mujhe jana howga.
Rajbeer: Preeto abi tho itna masaa aara tha aur baki ke surprise abhi baki hey.
Preeto: Nahi Rajbeer hume jana hoya vaarana Biji koosha howgayeni.
Rajbeer: Ok baba chalo tume hamasha muhje saathathi hoi. Jana se pehle mein kush karna chaanoo gaye. Preeto: Kia?
Rajbeer showers her with flowers and she just smiles. He then asks her to help him to release all the ballons in the air. She does that and they both hug each other as they watch the ballons going up into the sky. Rajbeer then gives her another kiss and she responds to it.
They depart and the rest of the surprises will have to wait for another day.
I hope you enjoy . Next part to follow soon.😳
This one may not be as good as some of you guys have written but let me know what you think.
Edited by Bobby1810 - 13 years ago

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