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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Finally! I made time and read the entire thing - twice!
Bobby, u have been hiding ur story telling talent 😊
CHalo, please continue... its really good - so simple and so romantic!
I miss RajPreet so much when i read and imagine all the scenes u have written - feel so cheated, we bore the EA so much hoping that some day we will get RajPreet scenes once more and this happened!
Special 🤗for not having Sunny around !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Thank you so much Preetihere. I will continue next part later on. I too am missing Rajpreet a lot.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Wow first attempt at writing ... great ...
atleast rajpbeer preeto saath mein hain

happy plz continue ... cant wait ..
Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
When we u update the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Part 5: Celebrations
When Rajbeer found out that Preeto won the competition he excused himself from Preeto and called home to his servants and asked to decorate the place and get some special fireworks with I love you preeto done by the time they get back home in the evening. He aslo told them to order chocolate cake as that is Preeto's favourite. Rajbeer then goes to Preeto and says:
Rajbeer: Preeto Chalo ab celebrations sooroo kare tha hai.
Preeto: Kise?
Baata hoon phele chalo tho si.
Preeto: Ok phele sab ko bye bohot doon.
Rajbeer: Hain majar jildi.
Preeto goes to the loud speaker and once again says thank you and bye and then Rajpreet leave.
Preeto: Rajbeer kum kaha gayare hain? Rajbeer abi bata hoon chalehege.
Rajbeer takes Preeto to the beach where he used to go as a child. It was a private beach with only a few people. Preeto is excited like a little girl when she sees the beach.
Preeto: Rajbeer tum kitne kismat wale ho jo aap yaha atte the Didiji aur Dadaji ke saath. Tume pata hai hum kabhi beach par nahi aaya.
Rajbeer: what? Kabhi nahi? Kia baat kari ho? Beach mein tho sab lok jaate hai.
Preeto: Nahi Rajbeer hum kabhi nahi giya. Accha chalo hum gola kaate hain.
Rajbeer: Nahi Preeto tume pata hai na mujhe baar ki cheesia khanni nahi pasand hai aur tumari tabiytha karab hoi sakati hai.
Preeto: Please chalo na? Tume pata hai ka gola mujhe bohot pasand hai.
He agrees and they have gola and then Preeto sees some children flying their kites she runs and asks them if she can fly the kite with them. Rajbeer just looks at Preeto and is facing seeing her so happy and acting like a big kid.
After that Rajpreet have a stroll along the beach and Preeto splashes Rajbeer with water.
Rajbeer: Preeto kia kare rahi oh stop it.
Preeto: Nahi stop karungi aap mujhe yaha aakare mujhe stop karo.
Rajbeer: Accha toh tum mujhe challenge kare rahi ho? Abi baata hoon.
Rajbeer folds his jeans and runs after Preeto. Preeto goes deeper into the water and Rajbeer chasing after her. They both fall into the water and get wet. Preeto is just laughing but Rajbeer is not happy.
Preeto: Kia howa? Enjoy karo itna gussa maat ho.
Rajbeer: Preeto tum bi na bacche tere behave karti ho and itni sweet and inoccent lagethi hoye isiliye mein tumshe itna pyaar karte hoon.
Preeto: Mein bhi aap ko bohot pyaar karti hoon.
They lock eyes with their so cute and eye look expressions. Then Rajbeer pulls Preeto up and straight into his arms. He gives her a kiss on her forehead and then on the cheek. He whispers her name Preeto and then kisses her on the lips.
Preeto: Rajbeer kia kare ho? Lok dekta hai.
Rajbeer: Tho? Dekhena do. Mein apni fiancee kya saath hoon. Anyways chalo ghar chalte ha. Waise bhi Ramu kaka (servant) humara wait kare hoyenge. Aur phir kal hum nahe shopping karne hai Biji aur Papaji kia liye meine kush lenya hai aur tumbi shopping karlena aur tume pata hai ke hum kal bapas gayare hai.
Preeto: Hain pata. Rajbeer thank you so much aap na itna kush kiya mere liya aur mein aap ka liye kush nahi kia.
Rajbeer: kia ha na?
Preeto: Kya kia?
Rajbeer: Tum mujhe itna pyaar karti ho mujhe aapne baaanaye, mujhe Patther se insaan behanaye aur tum kiathi ho kush nahi kia. Ab chalo.
They hold hands and walk back to the car and head for home. Preeto is so tired that she falls asleep during the drive. Rajbeer looks at her and smiles to himself as she looks so beautiful when she is sleeping. They arrive home and rather than wake Preeto up Rajbeer simplys picks her up in his arms and walks towards the house. As he does this Preeto wakes up and tells him to put her down. He refuses and continues towards the house.
Inside the house Rajbeer takes Preeto straight to her room. He places her on the bed and gives her kiss.
Rajbeer: Tum rest karo aur mein khanne ka interzaam karte hoon.
Preeto: Tumbi rest karo. Rajbeer has a naughty look in his eyes and smiles at Preeto.
Rajbeer: ok then move over.
Preeto pushes him yahe nahi aapne room mein.
Rajbeer: Nahi mujhe tumare saath rest karne hai.
Preeto:anyway ab mujhe neend nahi ayi aur mein fresh hogati hoon aur tumibi jake fresh hoye jao.
They get fresh and take a shower. Rajbeer is already downstairs and Ramu Kaka has put the food on the table. Rajbeer had decorated the room with candles all over. Rajbeer is wearing his mutli coloured red shirt with black jeans and Preeto is wearing her multi coloured red and black salwar kamiz.
They have dinner and Rajbeer says let us go outside I have something to show you. They go outside holding hands and Rajbeer says close your eyes. Preeto does and then he asks the watchmen to light the fireworks and tells Preeto to open her eyes. Preeto opens her eyes and she is gob smacked and overwhelmed with the fireworks and especially the last one where it spells I love you Preeto you are my life.
Preeto: with tears in her eyes. Thank you so much Rajbeer and she just cuddles him. Kise ne mereliye itna nahi kia jitna aap ne kia.
Rajbeer: You are most welcome. Tum meri jaan ho aur meri zindagi ho. Ab mujhe oose din ke intazaare hai jab tum meri biwi banoogi phir tum tekena mein kia karte hoon.
Edited by Bobby1810 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Yeahhh I'm first 😊 Awww this update is so cute and sweet ... Love rajbeer's naughtiness with preeto ... I loved the beach scene where preeto splashes water on rajbeer and where they both fall 😳😳😳and the fireworks with i love preeto on ... rajbeer's is so sweet ...

GREAT UPDATE !! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Awww sooo cute!
I wish they wud extend their stay and the whole family comes too coz Preeto said their family didn't see beach till now.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Thank you Aqeelah and thank you Preeti. Maybe next time the whole family will be there. I will update the next part tomorrow.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Bobby1810

Thank you Aqeelah and thank you Preeti. Maybe next time the whole family will be there. I will update the next part tomorrow.



Can't wait 😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 6 - Shopping and back to Amistar
Rajbeer was up early the next morning as they needed to go shopping to buy presents for the family and also because he was missing Preeto. Rajbeer takes breakfast up for Preeto and knocks on the door and enters. Preeto is still sleeping. Rajbeer puts the breakfast tray by the side table and sits on the edge of the bed and just looks at Preeto as she is sleeping. Then he has the urge to kiss her. He slowly leans over towards her and kisses her cheek. At this Preeto wakes up.
Preeto: Rajbeer aap yaha. Hai Rab Kitnina bage hai mein late hoyagi hoon kia?
Rajbeer: Nahi Preeto tum late nahi ho. Abhi toh saath bage hai aur mein jaldi oodth jaye tha kui kia mein tumahe miss karetha aur tum ko toh pata hai ka tum subah subah kitni beautiful lagethi ho. Chalo hum breakfast karelaye phir shopping bhi to jaane hai phir hum vapsa Amritsar jare hain.
Preeto gets up and goes to the bathroom and has a shower and comes out and as she is coming out Rajbeer comes up to her and cuddles her by the waist and starts to kiss her.
Preeto: Rajbeer kia kareho abhi toh kakethe ke shopping janahe aur phir ghar vapsa jana hai toh mujhe ab ready hone hai. Mein bohot excited hoon.
Rajbeer: tumese koi nahi jeet saktha in a grumpy mood.
They have breakfast and go shopping. Rajbeer wants to buy everyone gifts and takes Preeto to the mall in the city. They go shopping and then Preeto decides that she wants to get Rajbeer something and tells him that she needs to get some things and will meet him in half an hour. Rajbeer says ok but hurry up ok . Preeto is looking what can I buy Rajbeer as he has done so much for me. She enters into a jewellery shop and sees lots of things. Then her eyes for on a heart shaped pendant which read two hearts beating as one. She asks the shopkeeper if they have two of those. The shopkeeper says yes and says they could write names on it too. She asks how long will take. Ten minutes. Preeto says ok and tell them the names of Rajpreet. Preeto then releases that Rajbeer said half an hour and the time was nearly over. The phone rings.
Rajbeer: Preeto kaha ho tum? Half an hour hoyage. Jildi karo ne. Tum bhi na kitna time lagathi ho gifts lene mein.
Preeto: Rajbeer bus 10 min aur mein bus aare hun. She tells the shopkeeper to hurry up.
The gift is ready the one that has her name on it will go to Rajbeer and the one with Rajbeer's name she will wear. She then calls Rajbeer and they meet up and go home to do packing. Rajbeer shows her all that he got for everyone. Preeto is memorised at he knows all her family so well and knows what to get everyone. Rajbeer asks Preeto what she got. She starts teasing him.
Preeto: Woh mein apni special friend kia liye gift.
Rajbeer: Kise liye?
Preeto: Mein nahi bohoongi.
Then seeing that Rajbeer is upset she goes over to him takes him by the hand and sits on the bed.
Preeto: Aap bhi haan bohot gussa karkte hoi. Accha Baba dekathi hoon. Phele apni aakoon ko baand karo.
Rajbeer: Qui?
Preeto: Bus mein kahane!.
Rajbeer: Ok. He then closes his eyes.
Preeto thens picks up the two gift wrapped boxes and give one of them to Rajbeer which had Preeto heart pendant in it. She places the box in his hands and tell him to open his eyes.
Rajbeer: Ye kia hai? Mere liye? Abhi koloo Kia?
Preeto: Hain tumare liye. Aap nahe mere liye itna kush kiaye tho mein aap ye chota se gift derehi hoon.
Rajbeer opens the gift and sees the heart shaped pendant and the words on it two hearts beating as one. Rajbeer then sees her name enscribed on it and a smile comes on his face.
Rajbeer: Thank you so much Preeto. This is so sweet. Phili bare kisi ne mujhe itna kubusoorat gift diyahe aur isiye tho mein abhi penuga. He then puts the pendant on and grabs Preeto and kisses her.
They get interrupted when the phone rings. It is biji asking if everything is ok and she can't wait to see them both.
They are all packed and ready to leave. Rajpreet thanked all the servants for looking after them and Rajbeer said they will be back soon. They head for the airport to get the flight back to home.
Edited by Bobby1810 - 13 years ago

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