FF/SS Preeto ILU con updated pt11 pg14 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I was wondering what gift she will choose for him - superb!
Thanks for continuing - hope it wont disturb u too much if i ask pelase continue soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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tooo cuteee Rajpreet...😍sweet and lovely updates Gurminder...👏continue waiting for next part😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you Preeti so much for liking and commenting it is greatly appreicated.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you so much Sneha for liking and commenting. Your support means a lot.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sana here, can u please write the next part soon. maybe for tom.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 7 - Preeto's Celebration Party at Dhillions house
Rajpreet arrive back home and ring the door bell. Sonu answers the door and hugs Preeto di and greets Rajbeer. They go inside and see the place is decorated. Sonu calls to everyone Rajpreet aagiya. Biji comes and bringing a pooja taal does aarthi of Preeto. Preeto asks Biji why she doing this.
Biji: Tum Itna baara competition geet kare ile ho tho mein itna kushhoo tho tumare aarthi utthari hoo. Tumhe tho humara naam pure Amritsar may nahi bahlke puri dunyia mein rosaan kare diya and biji starts crying.
Preeto: Aw meri pyari biji. Mujhe competition geet naanhi tha kui ka Babaji, Papaji, aur Biji aap ka arshriwaad humesha mera saath ha. Aur dursi baat ager Rajbeerji ne mera naam nahi competition mein pathe tho me geet nahi pathi. Isliye credit Rajbeer ko jaltha hai aur Simran jise hain sample diya Rajbeer ko. Phir meri turisi mannat. Preeto then hands over the money to Biji who gives it to Babaji.
Biji: joog joog jio meri bacchi. Ha Patta hai tu tho kisi bhi cheez ka credit nahi laygi. Waise hum sab na tumare liya ek choti si party raki hai. Chalo ander chalo. Phele aap dono nahalo phir hum shooroo karkne party. Aur Rajbeer tum raat phar yehi rookoogena koi ke Masterji aur mein tumse baat karni hai subah.
Rajbeer: Gi Biji.
Rajbeer takes the luggage upstairs to the room which he stays in and also puts Preeto luggage in her room. Rajbeer takes a shower first and then gets dressed. Preeto also takes a shower and comes out and is getting dressed when Rajbeer passes by and seeing that she has just washed her hair and how cute she looks with her hair open goes into the room and cuddles her.
Preeto: Rajbeer tum yeha. Kya kar rahe hoi. Mujhe ready honeha sab humare intazaar kare rahe hai.
Rajbeer: Haan pata hai par jab tum nahalkare kuhal baal rakethi ho toh tum kitni cute lege thi ho. Aur mujhe tumari pyari si kushboo keche layai hai. He moves her hair away from her neck and kisses her.
Preeto: Rajbeer please chorow na. Kui aajayega. Aur mujhe jildi ready bhi hone hai.
Just then Biji calls out Preeto and Rajbeer's names. Tum dono ready hoge ke nahi. Sab log aap ke intazaar karare hai.
Preeto: Biji bus do minute aur mein aagahee. Rajbeer tum jao mein abhi atti hoon.
Rajbeer: Ok abhi toh me jaraha hoon tumhe baat mein deka loonga.
Rajbeer goes downstairs wearing a blue tshirt and jeans. Preeto also come down wearing a blue suit. Everyone is there and they congraculate Preeto and there is music and party.
Rajpreet, Pankeeta, Dhruishu, Jogi-Jassi and Simran with her finace is there. Everyone from the muallah are there. They all greet Preeto.
Rajpreet and all the couples dance to various songs and then they have a competition boys against girls. Jassi does not take much part as she is expecting and so is Ishu. Jassi is nearly due and Ishu is a few months pregnant.
After all is done and all games finished both teams win as they draw in the competition.
Biji: Chalo sab log Khanna kalo warna khanna thanda hogane hai.
Everyone puts food on their plates and sit on the tables and chairs with all the guests as well. When eating Rajbeer grabs Preeto's hand and she tries to pull away.
Biji: Preeto tum khanna kui nahi kari ha. Tumhe book nahi ka? Mein aur Meeta ne tumari favourite dishes banane ha.
Preeto: Bus Biji kari hoon abhi. She mutters under tonque and tells Rajbeer to let go.
Rajbeer: Phele mujhe ek promise do ke tum mujhe 12:00 terrace pe milogi aur mujhe jao karne hai woh karne dogi.
Preeto:Ok Baba knowing that this is the only way Rajbeer is going to let go of her hand.
After the party is over everyone goes home and everyone helps with the tidying up. Preeto is in the kitchen putting away the dishes and the others were sorting out the hall. When Rajbeer sees Preeto in the kitchen alone. He goes up to her and starts teasing her. Preeto carries on putting the dishes away. Just as she had finished the light goes off. She cuddles Rajbeer tightly.
Rajbeer: Accha phele mujhe ignore kari thi ab jab light chalihigi toh tum mujhe hug kari ho. Chalo accha hai thank you Babaji. Rajbeer just cuddles Preeto back and gives a kiss on her forehead.
Biji tells everyone to go to bed and everyone says goodnight and go to bed. Rajbeer hold Preeto's hand and does not let her go.
Rajbeer: 12:00 bagne wale hai. Tumnah promise kia tha nah. Aur ab chalo mere saath.
They go up to the terrace although Preeto was protesting Rajbeer simply ignored her and said agar tum chup chap nahi atthi toh mein tumhe uttha kare lage janooga.
Rajbeer: tum itni kubsoorat qui ho. Tumhe pata hai jab bi mein tumko deka tha hoon toh dil karta hai tumhe humashah meri bahoo mein laynoo aur tume jane na doo.
Preeto:Ha pata hai but Preeto was not in a good mood as he did not let her go so easily and brought her to the terrace.
Rajbeer: tum gussa Hoi? Phir toh ab mujhe aur masa aayaga.
Preeto:Kya matlab?
Rajbeer: Batata hoon. He takes her hands and pulls her closer to him.
The wind is blowing and Preeto smells the scent of his aftershave. She loves the smell and starts blushing. Rajbeer has a big smile on his face as he knows exactly what is happening to Preeto. Rajbeer starts kissing Preeto first on the forehead, then her eyes and then cheeks. Preeto is about to protest when he stops by kissing her on the lips. She tries to struggle free but in the end just gives up as she knows Rajbeer always gets his way and starts responding to his kisses.
Edited by Bobby1810 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Thank you Sana. I promise next one will be updated soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
sweet and romantic Rajpreet..❤️
grt job Gurminder...👍🏼👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i don't n about 5,6 parts so late reply from me ..Pm me when u write nxt ff😊
5,6,7 parts are awesome Gurminder...waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 8 - Rajpreet's Roka discussion and introduction of Rajbeer's Dad
It is morning in the Dhillion household. Preeto wakes up early and comes down to find only Biji and Papaji. The rest were sleeping as they were tired from the night before.
Preeto:Good morning Biji, Good morning Papaji.
Biji and Papaji: Good Morning Preeto.
Biji: Preeto tum itni jildi kui oode gayi. Sab log abhi tak sooreha.
Preeto: Aw bus Biji aise. Aap ko pata hai ke Meeta di ki Shaadi ka kitna kaam baki hai toh meine soche ka jilti oode kare tura kaam kare loon.
Biji: Accha kaam baad mein karane phele Rajbeer ko Coffee deyah. Aur ukse kehana ke Biji aur Papaji ne tumse baat karni ha.
Preeto: Gi Biji.
Preeto takes the coffee upstairs to Rajbeer's room and knocks on the door and enters in. Rajbeer sees Preeto and pretends to be sleeping. Preeto puts the coffee on the side table and is about to walk away when a hand grabs her and pulls her to the bed. Preeto loses her balance and falls on the bed and is shocked and angry.
Preeto: tum bohot buure hoi. Mein soche tha ke tum soore hoi aur mein chup chap coffee raake chalijoogi par tum pretend kare the ke tum soore ho. Agar mein geerjaadi tho.
Rajbeer: Tumhe mein kabhi bi nahi geerna detha. Aur tum to janthi ho ke tum subah subah itni cute and beautiful legati ho toh mein romantic hojaatha hoon. Rajbeer gives her a kiss on her cheeks. Preeto blushes and moves away.
Preeto: Tum bhi nah. Chalo tum coffee pilo taandi hojagi aur jildi se ready hojawo qui ke Biji aur Papaji ne humse kui baat karni ha.
Rajbeer: Accha ab Biji aur Papaji ka bahana baan ke mujhe itni jildi chootna chati ho.
Preeto: Nahi Rajbeer sache mein Biji aur Papaji nah bulaya ha.
At this Rajbeer has his coffee and gets out of bed. Preeto looks at him and then closes her eyes saying besharam nanga.
Rajbeer: Accha tumhe mujhe besharam kaha. Abhi batha hoon tumhe.
He grabs her by her hands and pulls her towards him. He then holds her by putting his arm around her waist and with the other hand puts his hand on her chin and makes her look up. He then kisses her on the lips. Preeto just responds to his kiss as there is no use fighting him. Preeto then pushes him and says to go have a shower and she will be waiting downstairs with Biji and Papaji and also reminds him to give the presents to them that he had bought for them.
Rajbeer takes a shower and comes down. Biji brings him breakfast and after breakfast Rajbeer gives them the presents and also for the rest of the family.
Biji: Isi kiya zaroorat thi.
Rajbeer: Biji aap tho mere Biji Papaji ho aur meri family bhi ho tho mere bi tho farz banathe hai. Biji, Papaji Preeto kaari thi ke aap mujhe kush baat karni hai.
Papaji: Haan Rajbeer Putter tum tho jaanthe hai ki Meeta ki shaadi aarehi ha paan uske phele hum sochethe ke tum aur Preeto ke Roka hoojaye toh accha hotha kui ke muhollaah wale ki baata banayege. Aur dursi baat ye ke tum apne Dad se bhi baat karele. Hum jaanthe hai ke hum tumare Biji or Papaji hai par ek baar tum apne Dad se baat karelo aur unko yaha bulaho aur woh Preeto se bhi milenge ek baar.
Rajbeer: Biji, Papaji aap log tho jaanthe ho mere Dad ke baare mein par mein aap ki baat nahi taaloonga. Mein aaj hi Dad ko phone kar loonga.
Edited by Bobby1810 - 13 years ago

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