KriYansh Oneshots (OS) || ch3 prt5 pg57 jun'10 - Page 39

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Posted: 13 years ago
Will be Waiting for dat😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awwwesome update..:D really sweet... looking forward to the next update :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice updates 😊
Finally after that encounter they met again,😉 Rey was so excited to see Armaan n Kria was surprised to know that he is Armaan's brother, koolll 😆
She is feeling that his gaze is saying something to him n that's y she is avoiding his gaze 😳 .Mother's plan has started working out great 😛 n in her Terrance she dropped the juice at his shirt. 🤔
Hope they have some nice talks in next part.😍
update faster.
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u evryone for ur precious comments reallyy loveee u alll muhaaaxxx...



sorry made u wait for long
😭.. hope u hv nt forgotten this OS - dream gal!

next chapter on its way
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 5


Kria led him to the washroom..
'okay gimme ur shirt..'
Rey stared at her.. still not able 2 register what she was asking him to do .. as if she said him to strip off..!! he chuckled and got embarrassed for what he was thinking..
'helloo !!!!!' she waved his hands infront of his face.. 'aap apna shirt denge please ???'
'okay if u insist..!' he said wid a smirk and removed his shirt.. now he being shirtless.. wid his bare hot chest buring infront of her eyes..
First wen he removed his shirt she was shocked to c him.. and soon the shock turned into drool and then she was gawking at him..
He smiled ..
She came back to her senses and closed her eyes after few seconds..!
'aap aap ne yeh..' she struggled for words as cheeks flushed and turned red..
She soon caught her mind and heart.. and instructed both to stay in their limits and not let her feel embarrassed..
'can u make It faster ???' he said soo innocently..
She took his shirt and started removing the stain.. he came infront of her leaning to the wall.. next to the sink..
'so ur name is kria.. umm gud name..' he tried to start convo.. but she only gave him a stare after wich she soon withdrew her eyes from him.. it was too hard to resist him tat too shirtless..?? No way!!!
He smiled again realizing how it effected her.. he came close 2 her.. not knowing what he was trying to do..
She looked up at once to find him close 2 her..
She quickly showed up his tee and infront of them like a barrier..
He was taken aback by her action..
She was soo nervous of his presence as shirtless that her mind had already stopped working and she no way gonna listen to her heart.. after all it said all nonsense and unexpected..
She turn to leave but she was still holding his tee.. she had forgotten tat.. one side she held and the other side rey tried to take it' wen kria turned to leave, simultaneously and unknowingly rey pulled his tee from her hands.. he too unware of her holding the tee from other side..
Wid jerk she crushed against his body.. he moved back.. she tried to balance but then he hit the wall behind him.. wich automatically onned the shower
And the shower, showered its gracious water on them..
Both getting drenched in water..
The water wich was falling down his chest was getting all her attention.. she kept staring at it..
His eyes rested on her beautiful face drenched in water.. and the hair wich stood quietly behind her head taking all the advantage of water falling on it, it went calm.. the curls went straight and water leaped down from the strands..
His tee had fallen on the sink before she fell on him.. he was now holding her both wrists..
He released one wrist and slowly moved a strip of her hair behind her ears..
She looked at him and their eyes locked..
The pouring water on their heads.. the chill that was sent down to their spines due to proximity they wer sharing was something new n different for both
Involuntarily his hands cupped her face..
She innocently struggling wid her arousing desires looked deep into his eyes..
Wid a little wish.. he moved closer trying to close the gap between their lips..
Her pink glossy lips drenched wid water.. slightly trembling.. slightly exposing itself wid desires tat flushed in.. looked like inviting him..
He cudnt resist anymore.. he was so close to her lips that his hot breath was lingering on her trembling lips.. wich sent shivers down to her spine adding to the chill existed due to the intensity..
She closed her eyes in consent.. he moved still closer.. but then as the realization struck him.. he tried this special wish not 2 b a mistake of their life.. he saw her approval.. he was sure even she was in peaks of desires..
He smiled and placed long passionated kiss on her cheeks.. she was taken aback.. cz he did sumthn she dint expect to.. but the feeling was above all.. she felt her heart jump high at peaks..
She let a small smile.. and she indeed loved his gesture and respected his thoughts.. he wasn't the way she thout after all..
He moved to look into her eyes.. her eyes lashes were lowered.. this is the time wen he realized she isnt exactly the way she shows to be.. there was a side of her wich only few specials cud witness.. he was in cloud 9 thinking he was one such special..
She blushed and turned around..
And suddenly they heard a call from Armaan n riddhima..
'KRIAAA' 'REYYY' JALDI AAAO..
Followed by her mom 'KRIA DID U REMOVE THE STRAIN ??'
She suddenly took his tee and placed it on the stand..
She ran out of his sight..
He smiled again..
she ran into her room.. and started breathing faster.. wen she recalled wat had just happened she cud only blush..
She rushed to change..
***
It was already nite.. neither she nor he faced each other after that..
She was confused.. nd for the first time her heart and mind was saying the same thing.. 'kuch toh hai.'
She tried to neglect her thoughts bt was unsuccesfull..
She stood in her balcony and recalled..
Her dreams.. her wishes.. how she wanted a soulmate seeing whom she wud be herself.. who wud luv her innocent gestures.. who wud be as simple as he cud be.. who is a gem of a person.. and involuntarily all her dreams and wishes circled around him..
Their first meet.. how her heart had said he was hot..!!
That uneasiness.. the effect he made on her wid jus one meet..
How she had sensed him cuming..
And all what had just happened in washroom.. that kiss..!
He meant sumthn to her wid jus one meet she was sure of that..!
And the same case was wid him.. he was also drowned in her thoughts sleeping on his bed..
His mom entered the room.. and smiled looking at her dear son..
'rey ?'
He dint listen.. he was still in Miss Ghai's trance..
She felt it different.. went near the bed sat next to him.. placed her hand on his forehead and sweetly called his name 'rey ??'
He got up wid the jerk..
'Mom!!'
She smiled. 'wat wer u thinking of ?'
'umm umm nothing..'
'sach bolo!'
'ermm mm bu business!! Business mom!!'
She snapped her head.. 'BUISNESS KE ALAVA B EK ZINDAGI HAI REY!!!' she said in a bit high voice..
Rey's thouts again drifted back to kria. yes lately other than business that's all he was thinking of..
'REYAAANSHH!!!' she shook him back to earth..
'haana haaan k kya hua..'
Taking in a gulp she said 'I want to talk 2 u..importatnt'
'yess mom bolo..'
'u had promised me remember..'
'kya promise ?' *confused*
'yahi yahi.. ki.. tum.. mere choose ki hue ladki se shaadi karoge..'
Rey almost got a mini heart attack..
For the first time the name 'shaadi' itself affected him..
'ermm haan kia tha .. toh..'
'I have choosen one gal for u..'
"WHATTT!!'
Least did he know why he jerked..
'NO I WILL NOT MARRY'
He said as he moved out of bed..
'U HAVE TO' she urged..
He felt another uneasiness flow thru his nerves.. now he finally thout abt kria' he wasn't sure but yet he thout..
'Tum ek baar ladki ko deko toh sahi..'
'MUJE NHI DEKNA MOM!!!!'
He was sinking..
'DEKNA HOGA!!!'
'NO'
'YESSS'
"NO'
'ARRAY USKA NAAM''
He glared at her and was abt to move out
"KRIA' she completed and left a sigh in defeat thinking he will nt agree..
He stopped at doors hearing the name.. a sudden flush of emotions ran thru his body..
He wasn't sure of anythn.. but he was sure he liked her..
'Kya kaha aapne ??' he turned..
Priya beamed and continued..
'rey mei kria ko bahut pehle se jaanti hoon.. smriti aur meine pehle hi decide kia tha ki tum dono ki shaadi hogi.. that's y I brought u here.. rey ek baar usse baat karo.. share some time wid her.. may b u like her.. and u both may agree to get married.. ? deko this will solely depend u urs n kria's decision mei force nhi karoongi.. I knw shayad tum dono ek doosre ko pasand nhi karte agar aisa hai toh il not ..'
'no no mom mei usse pasand..' he bit his tongue..
Priya chirped 'soo u like her ??'
'ermm umm aisa nhi hai matlab.. wo mei..'
'mei sab samaj gayi..' she kissed his forhead.. 'im sure she likes u too.. milo usse baat karo.. isiliye hum yahan aaye hai.. okay ?? kal raat thak apna decision de dena..'
'MOM ITNI JALDI ??'
She left the room but before leaving she said 'SHUB KAAM MEI DERI NHI KARNI CHAHIYE'
He grinned..
He never thought such a day wud cum into his life were he wasn't sure of his emotions yet his heart is handling everythn.. he was thinking 'is dis love at first sight ??'
***

Smriti entered kria's room..

'kria tumne muje promise kia tha..' she said even before staring the convo wid any other words.. she was soo nervous 2 talk 2 kria..
'promise ?? kaisa promise ?'
'umm umm yahi ki tumm shaadi..'
Kria's eyes widened
"SHAADI ?'
'haan tumne promise kia tha ki tum shaadi karoge jis ladke ko mei choose karoongi' she said in one go..
'BUT MOM MEI.. woo..' she wasn't sure wat 2 say.. she had just started liking him n al dis..
'TUMEI KARNA HOGA ITS MY ORDER'
'NO MEI NHI KAROONGI' she said firmly and was abt to move out..
"PLSS KE BAAR REY SE MIL TOH LO' smriti pleaded..
Kria stopped at once.. "REY ??'
Smriti sighed and said her all about the reason behind cuming 2 dehradun..
Kria blushed.. smriti was amazed..
'matlab u like him ?'
'umm aisa nahi hai wo actually..' kria started
'samaj gayi..!! usse mil lena ek baar..! okay ?' smriti sad giving peck on her forhead and moved out happily.. both priya and smriti wer happy..


is it going tooo fast ????? please gimme frank reviews 😕

well next update after 55 likes 😳

and next is the important chapter of dis OS / SS watevr u call it 😆

and dont forget to comment 😳
Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res
unres


Amazing update nams.
It was so sweet.
Aww Kriyaansh moment in wash room was the sweetest.
Kaun resist karehga shirtless Rey ko.
the kiss he gave on her cheek was best.


Nah its nt fast.


wonderful Update.

Thanks for pm.
Update soon.


Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
REs
unres
awesum love it
thanks for d pm
update soon

Edited by sujana9 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...

awesome

awesome...

this was the only word i could say...

when she asked his shirt my jaws dropped...

i thought...hehe margayi...

and haa wo proximity...

gosh...i shivered at it...

i dnt know abt kriya im breathing hard...

and that kiss wala...gosh he is such a sweet heart...

really i want a lyf partner with the characters of rey...

if so happens i will love him more than my life...

hehe jyaada soch rahi hun na???

no probs ...i can now...major jo hun :P

and haa now i wanna read their meeting...

hey universeji kaash ye sab mere saath hota...:P


but really i loved it...

and u can get it 4r the long cmnt im giving...

mai kabhi bhi itna lamba nahi deti...

just luv u 4r this nams...

next part jaldi update karna plzz...

im literally begging u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...loved it very much
aweee kria drooling over rey when she see him shirtless hayeee
and washroom scenes were awesome, amazing, mindblowing
loved it very much
and rey and her mom conversation was amazing...loved it
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
ooo hooo... party tym... rey n kriya ek dusre se shaddi. yipee..!!!.. awesum update dear.. 😉

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