KriYansh Oneshots (OS) || ch3 prt5 pg57 jun'10 - Page 41

nice updatee loved ittt...

i seriously adore this chapter...

haan thoda fast hai lekin totally apt for the situation u know the initial sparks that they r experiencing and attraction is always there b/w opp. sexes plus yahan since the sparks were there when they saw each other so it is perfectly all right...

and bviously ab tu movie thodi na dikahegi... ki nazron se nazrein mili fir 10 din baad fir mili and fir thoda progress huya u know...

all in all i find it perfectly well... nothing needs to be changed...

so coming to the update.. kria asking his T without realizing what was abt to follow...

loved how u described the feeling b/w them and how u revealed their inner selves... u know slowly opening up...

kriyansh ki shaadi hai fixed and me is super happy...

waiting for u know the official meet u know blushing and thoda talking and thoda LLHH...

awesome chapter...

update asap...

kriya agreed for marriage...wowww waiting 4 nxt aprt

wow cute romantic update... loved d washroom scene... shirtless rey n den both of them in d shower,awesome... kriyaansh destined to b together... super...

Amazng update...!!!
Luvd it...
D washroom scene ws sensuous...
Luvd rey's gesture f controlling himself...
Waitng fr nxt part...

it was such a cute update namy
loved it
the bathroom scene was awesome
i loved it
wow
n loved the two mothers
wah pehle se hi soch liya kisse shaadi krwani h

oh finally rey n kria getting married!!loved it!!u should continue it as a ff!!

looks like my stars are in heaven...update k start mei hi kria ne mere dil ki baat bol di...rey shirtless...m dead...kria gawking at him...hehehe...loved the shower scene...especially kria's anticipatin for a smooch and rey's thoughts to make the moment special and not a mistake...i seriously respect and love him for that...the kiss on the cheeks...my insides were jumping...as it is kriyansh k nam se kam somersaults marte hain jo ki ye passionate intense moment de diya-my heart popped out...abhi bhi yahin kahin pada hoga.its still not fixed to its place...and the mother-children convo was awesome...m waiting for the next one since i really wanna know how wud kriyansh react to each other after the shower kiss and spend time with each other...bang on...