KriYansh Oneshots (OS) || ch3 prt5 pg57 jun'10

Preeti ArsHa

@preeti_kreya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#391

Wowww namy its awesum yaar !!! 1stly SHITLESS REY kria ka kyA HAAL HOGA i cn understand and dat KISS was megical hayeee !!! And wah pehle na jb rey ne kria ka name suna and kria ne rey ka toh expression change KYa baat KYa baat kyA baat.. supeb mindblowing NamMY loved IT<3 PLEASE update FAST egarly wAITING for NEXt !!

Edited by LOV_ARSHA_KREYA - 13 years ago

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#392

It was perfect . . . . So lovey-dovey 😍
no, u r nt gng fast . . . . I actually loved the idea that both moms disclosed the real reason 🥳
kriya drooling over his hawtt body . . . . . . & he's teasing her 😉
hayee . . . . Shower scene . . . . Wat a gentleman he is... Kiss bhi kar di aur respect bhi bana li . . . . Ek teer se 2 nishane 😆
now both are in dreamland of each other . . . . Mom ko kiya hua promise jaye bhaad me 🤣
but the promise is itself their surprise
ab dono milenge . . . . . Aur marriage pakki 🤗 🥳

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jahnavi

@Jahnavi_KRAS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#393

wow!! nams...soo nyc updt

kriyansh feeling for each other...❤️

loved the washroom part..n the KISS was adorable!!!😳

plzz yaar jaldi updt karna

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#394

Wow nams , the update was really nice to read.

I was blushing all the way while reading the first part for the washroom scene.

She asked him to remove his shirt to wash it. Oh my lord, how did she get the courage to resist that ? So much willpower??

N the shower scene was totally zabardast. Ab isse zyada romantic kya scene ho sakti hain with Rey and Kria all drenched with their signature LLHH. Bhar mein jaye zookam.Kisse pari hain bimar hone ka.

That kiss on the cheeks. Blush to the core. Finally KriYansh ko love ka dhakka mil gaya. Plz plz next part jaldi se update karna,

Edited by Jiya_ArSha4Ever - 13 years ago

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#395

it was awesome
kriyaansh baathroom scene was awesome
kriya and rey both r blushing about their marriage was minblowing
waiting eagerly for nxt update

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UnAvailable

@MyDarkPassenger

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Posted: 13 years ago

#396

awww i loved it!!

the beginning was good and then the shower scene shit!! the kiss ☺️

Rey jab shirtless hota hai to pata nai kya kya hojata hai! 😉

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 13 years ago

#397

Its mind blowing
loved it
loved their kiss
eagerly waiting for the next part

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raina

@--RAINA--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#398

amazing update...
Thankx 4 d pm.,
update nxt part soon...

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nityaa02

@nityaa02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#399

frankly i really like the pace... its nice and this update... especially the start was really well written... eagerly waiting for the next update :)

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

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Posted: 13 years ago

#400

Aww it was an oh-cho-chweet chapter...the shower sequence -was nice & romantic , and both their reactions on hearing marriage & then each other's names was so well conveyed - waiting for the next part 😊

Edited by meevee - 13 years ago

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