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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update!!
so all heard holika story!!
n thts sad neha not playing holi
wow all gathering at sapana's home for holi party
but tanya will be too there!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

part 26

neha sat on couch next to her sister when sapna came with sweets...and served both of them...tanya looked at veer but he looked at other side...tanya-''veer happy holi'

her voice disturbed him and he looked at her and said-''happy holi tannu''

tanya-''chalo na holi khelte h sab khel rhe h''and grasped his hand...veer smiled and then both of them went to garden where everyone play holi and enjoyed the festival with sweets and snacks

veer looked at tanya but he missed his angel...

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diya saw sapna..and moved towards her ..she was busy in chatting with neha and her sister pooja...diya came neare and wished her

sapna-''diya aao mein tumhe apni dost se milati hun...yeh h dr neha mere hi hospital mein h or yeh h neha ki badi sister pooja''

diya looked at neha constantly and said-''to aap h neha''neha smiled at her and shake hands with her...diya looked at pooja and said-''sapna bhabhi inhe to mein jaanti hun yeh mere hi dance classes mein aati h''

sapna-''chalo hum sab bahar chal kar holi khelte h''

neha hesitatingly stand up and said-''nhi mein holi nhi khelti to aap jayiye mein yehi rukhti hun''

pooja-''han sapna ji neha kabhi holi nhi khelti...''

sapna-''kabhi nhi kheli to kya ho gya aaj khel lena hmaare sath''

neha-''nhi dii..pls mujhe darr lagta h ''

sapna surprisingly looked at her-''isme darr ki kya baat h sab tumhe thoda thoda colour lagayenge bas ''

she hold her hand and moved outside

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dhruv saw pooja ...and surprised to saw here...he moved toward her

dhruv-''pooja tum yahan..kaise''

sapna-''meine bulaya h tumhe koi problem h''while raising her eyebrows

dhruv-''nhi...nhi mujhe koi problem nhi h ''and looked at her

pooja shyly looked on other side...sapna,neha and diya looked at them ...all of them smiled smirkly..

sapna-''neha diya hum yahan kyun khade h hme chalna chahiye holi bhi to khelni h chalo''3 of them leave...dhruv and pooja was all alone ..dhruv stepped forward...and coloured her face lovingly-''happy holi pooja''
she smiled shyly and coloured his cheeks-''happy holi''

diya-''sapna bhabhi aap dusro ko hi milati rahegi ki aap bhi holi khelengi...jayiye rudra bhai subah se betaab h aap ke saath holi khelne ko''

sapna-''accha bhot bolne lagi h diya ki bacchi chup kar''while pat her head

rudra came nearer and said-''sapna happy holi''she wished him back without smiling

diya-''neha ji chaliye na mein aapko garden dikhati hun''she nodded and leave

rudra constantly looked at her said-''kya hua ''

sapna-''tumhe abhi yaad aaya ki aaj holi h han''rudar-''par wish to kiya na phir bhi tum mujhse naaraz ho''

sapna-''han mujhe tumse baat nhi karni jao yahan se''and about to turn when he grasped her waist tightly-''to tum mujhse baat nhi karogi''she frowned and tried to remove his grip...but it was too tight-''nhi ''

rudra lifted his hand and put colour on her cheek...she staring him angrily...but he smiled and coloured her face


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diya-''neha chalo na holi khelte h maza ayega''she was excited but she refuse her offer and said-''nhi diya tum jao..mein nhi khelungi''diya made a sad face and said-''mere sath bhi nhi''

neha felt sad for her and said -''accha thik h chalo''diya was happy and coloured her cheeks she also put colour on her face...after sometime she enjoy the festival


neha-''diya mujhe to pta hi nhi tha ki holi khelne me itna maza aata h''and throw the colour in sky

diya smiled to saw her happy and said-''neha mein abhi aati hun tum ye sweets khao''

she leave and searched her brother...she saw him and moved...

diya-''bhai aapko neha se nhi milna kya''veer shocked to hear her but soon happy

veer-''neha...neha kahan h wo...wo yahan kaise''she enjoyed his curosity-''sapna bhabhi ne bulaya h unko ab jao na''veer was happy ..and move when tanya asked -''veer tum kahan jaa rhe ho'

diya frowned and said-''wo bhai ka ek dost aaya h party mein usse milne jaa rhe h...tumhe wahan jaane ki koi jarurat nhi h''saw at veer and blink her eyes


tanya was little confuse-''par wo''before she could complete diya interupted and said-''arey tanya tum mere sath holi nhi khelogi chalo na''grasped her hand tightly and moved to other side


veer searched for her...soon he find her sitting on the chair...veer came closer and sat next to her...she looked at him surprisingly and said-'veer tum yahan...kab aye tum''

he didn't say anything just gazed her...she also gazed him and said-''kya hua aise kyun dekh rhe ho''

veer-''kuch nhi bas aise hi''she looked on the peoples who enjoyed the festival-''veer mujhe to aaj tak pta hi nhi tha ki holi khelne mein itna maza aata h''

he silently gazing her...her coloured cheeks looking more beautiful...her black eyes attracted him towards her..he grasped her hand and said-''chalo''she was completely surprised by his sudden reaction and said-''kahan''veer

veer-''pehle chalo yahan se''hold her hand and went towards the back side..she looked at him surprisingly-''veer tum mujhe yahan kyun laaye ho''veer came closer ..her body became colder to saw him more closer..she stepped backward...and strike to wall behind her..veer put his hand on wall ..now she was fully packed between him and wall...she felt very nervous-''veer''but he stopped her in between and start colouring her face with his face-''happy holi ''

she smiled shyly-''happy holi ''still gazing at her...he grasped her waist and pulled her towards him...she tried to move but he grasped her more tightly

neha-''veer chodo''he smiled and said-''kyun darr lag rha mujhse''

she looked at him and said-''nhi agar kisine dekh liya to''veer came closer and said-''to dekhne do''

she frowned at him and-''veer chodo mujhe jaana h chodo...''

he loosened his grip and said-''thik h jao''she was shocked and said to herself-''itni jaldi maan gya''and leave angrily...now she understand that he was angry with her...she felt bad to ruin his mood


after sometime

party finished and everyone leave for their home but rudra dhruv and veer was still there..dhruv thanked sapna and tanya to organised a party and invited them...and then all of them went outside..dhruv saw pooja and said-''pooja chalo hum tum dono ko chod dete h ''she nodded and smiled

neha-''nhi dhruv ji aap dii ke saath jayeye mujhe pass mein hi kuch kaam h mein thodi der mein aa jayungi''

pooja-''lekin neha shaam ho gyi h tu hmaare saath chal nhi to tujhe der ho jayegi''neha-''nhi dii bas 1 ghante ka kaam h mein aa jayungi meine maa ko phone kar diya h aap bhi chinta mat kijiye''she agreed with her sister and then leave with dhruv

veer stood silently on other side of gate and looked at her angrily..she made a innocent face and try to say sorry ...but he rejected her sorry and turned on other side...diya looked at them...and confused to saw their faces-''lagta h kuch to gadbad h''

then she said to rudra-''bhai ab me chalna chahiye''but suddenly sapna stopped them and said-''arey 2 min ruko mein abhi aati''

everyone was shocked..after few seconds she back with a tray of glaases..which have thandai..tanya was there...and she was very angry with her sister to invite neha and her sister...she smiled force fully in front of everyone..suddenly she snatched the tray with sapna and said-''mein deti hun sapko and served to rudra and diya and veer..and in remaining one glass she put the bhaang..and smiled smirkly...she moved towards her and said-''yeh lo ''

neha took the glass from her drink it...

rudra-''chalo veer hume ab chalna chaahiye''veer looked at neha and said-''rudra tu diya ko lekar chalo mein aata hun thodi der mein''

rudra was confused and said-''kyun tum hmaare saath nhi aa rhe ho kya''

before he could say something diya quickly said-'wo kya h na bhai ko apne dost ke ghar jaana h isliye''rudra was still confused but diya interupted again -''bhai chaliye na mujhe ghar jaldi jaana h''and then they leave

now there veer and neha was all alone...veer looked at her and said-''kahan jaana h tumhe chalo mein chod deta hun''she feel something strange..veer waiting for her answer-''neha kahan jaana h tumhe..jaldi se car mein baitho''she sat next to him and gazed him constantly

after sometime

veer-''neha kahan jaana h tumhe btaogi mujhe'she still gazing him and made a innocent face-''kahin nhi'''he was shocked to her answer and said-''whattt...to tumne dhru se juth kyun bola''

neha-''taki wo dono akele jaa sake''he frowned

neha-''car roko na''now she started losing her conciousness ..(influence of bhaang)

veer shocked to her strange behaviour and stopped the car..she quickly came out the car..and opened the door of his side-''bahar nikalo jaldi''he was more confused..and came out from the car..she grasped her collar and said-''mujhe naaraz ho''

veer-''hmmm''and turned his face...she came closer and made a childish face-''bhot naaraz ho''

veer-'' han bhot naaraz hun''she came more closer and kissed on his cheek-''ab bhi''ver looked at her strangely and said-''han ab bhi''she kissed on another cheek-''ab bhi''veer sensed that something wrong with her...for her sudden changed behaviour...

veer-''neha ghar chalo tumhaari tabiyat thik nhi h''but she grasped his hand and said-''nhi ...pehle ye btao ki mujhse pyaar karteho ya nhi''he looked at her lovingly-''han mein tumse bhot pyaar karta hun''she smiled at him and curled her arms around his neck-''mein bhi tumse bhot pyaar karti hun... i love u veer''he was surprised by her confession...but he was very happy ...he hugged her-'' i love u too''his anger dissolved in a minute

she enjoyed his embraced ..the warmth of his body..she smiled softly...she pulled her face to saw him-''veer...tumhe pta h tum bhot acche ho''

veer-''accha..mujhe nhi pta tha''and kissed her forhead...

neha-''ek baat kahun''he nodded and she replied-''i love u''veer smiled at her-''ok i love u..ab ghar chalo''

she again grasped her colloar and said--''tum mujhse pyaar karte ho na..''

veer-''han..han mein tumse bhot pyaar karta hun''she laughed and said-''to baar baar kyun bol rhe ho mujhe pta h ki tum mujhse bhot pyaar karte ho''

veer smiled at her innocence..she came more closer ..and then more closer...veer grasped her waist and about to kiss her lips..but suddenly he stopped..she looked at him with curosity-'kya hua''

veer-''neha tum hosh mein nhi ho..ghar chalo''she contracted her forehead and said-''kyun kya hua h mujhe...mujhe nhi jaana...aaj hum dono yehin rukte h na..poori raat holi khelenge..bhot maza ayega''veer was shocked...but then laughed..he lifted her in his arms and said--''raat ko holi nhi khelte''

she frowned and asked-''accha par kyun nhi khelte ''he was badly irritating with her silly question ..so he said loudly-''mujhe nhi pta ab tum apna muh band rakhogi thodi der ke liye''

she made a sad and said-'' i know u don't love me''veer was thought to hit his head in car,,,he made her sit in car ...and himself on driver seat...and looked at her..moved towards her and kissed her forhead-'' i love u...i love u..i love u..bas..mein tumse sabse jyaada pyaar karta hun..or bhot pyaar karta hun''she smiled and hugged him...after sometime they leave




sweetsanyo thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
confession, confession '
akhir kaar ho hi gaya,,,,,,,,l,,,
kitna changa ud tha.
bade maaze aye padne main.
cha gaya jii ud thwada...
chalo, ab veer ko needn tho aayegi.
bhaang bhot shi cheez banayi h bagwaan ne.
sahi main, neha ws so cute in bhang
she is soo cute here.
specially the silly talks she ws talking,
again again ''i lov u'' , ''u don't love me any more''
hw did veer resisted her kissing.
listening kiss se tho tum bach nhi sakti.
u hav to give.it, n make it a bang rack.
love ur writing,
chota comment dene ke liye sry.
coz kal chem boards h..

bt remember i lov ur story...
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
dat was a superb update !!! 👍🏼
to Neha ne hOli khele ... aur vo bhi Veer ke saath !!
aur usne FINALLY confess kiya !!! even though vo bhang ka asar tha !!😛
for d 1st time Tanya ne kuch accha kiya !!!😉
d fact dat she kept askng Veer if he luvd her was really cute , adorable n... irritating...n funny!!! 😆
Bhang ne to Veer ka din bana diya !!
'' i love u...i love u..i love u..bas..mein tumse sabse jyaada pyaar karta hun..or bhot pyaar karta hun'' ...dat was really cute !! 😳
n Diya is a gr8 sistr !! n sapna sabke dil mila rahe hai !!
luv d story ...n d cover pic... n u !! ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful holi part!!
loved all couples played holi n diya too helped
but tanya tried to harm neha again
but veer got his confession of love!!
bhang k nashe mein hi sahi!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...👏
for the first time i m not going to curse tanya...kitna accha kam kia hai meri chipkali ne...bhang mila kar...thoda veer ko bhi pila dia hota...
toh veer ne kiss resist nahi kia hota...😉...😆
but i really like neha...after going full too talli...she is continiously saying same thing again n again...n poor veer is irritated...but not able to say any thing...n why he say anything to her...well she has compensated for her mistake...bhale hi nashe main hi kia...but kia toh sahi...n even she confessed...that she loves him...
n she played holi...n enjoyed it to...but sabse zayda toh veer ke saath kia hoga...😉
but u know i really liked diya...what a sis...bro ki setting kara rahi hai...😆
n yes i have said to veer get full talli...but u made neha to get full talli...but koi nahi...wo ho ya phir wo...baat toh ek hi hai...
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update and you have written it beautifully
i loved it..do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

sooo sorry for the late comment..

read all the parts i missed..

n they were freaking awsum..

simply superb...

loved neer alot..

so finally bcoz of tanya she confessed..

sooo happy..

hope all goes fine..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
tuely wonderful ud, sorry fro not commenting on last two parts actually i am travelling read both the parts they were awesome, kya holi gift diya hai thank you. neer as usual were mind blowing ...please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

confession, confession '
akhir kaar ho hi gaya,,,,,,,,l,,,
kitna changa ud tha.
bade maaze aye padne main.
cha gaya jii ud thwada...
chalo, ab veer ko needn tho aayegi.
bhaang bhot shi cheez banayi h bagwaan ne.
sahi main, neha ws so cute in bhang
she is soo cute here.
specially the silly talks she ws talking,
again again ''i lov u'' , ''u don't love me any more''
hw did veer resisted her kissing.
listening kiss se tho tum bach nhi sakti.
u hav to give.it, n make it a bang rack.
love ur writing,
chota comment dene ke liye sry.
coz kal chem boards h..

bt remember i lov ur story...

thank u swthrt for ur lovely comment😛
yeah i know u have ur board exams..still u comment on my ff thanks alot dear😊

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