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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Freethinker

Thanks sweetie...that was just wonderful...

thanks dear for ur lovely comment😛😛😛😛
luv u😛😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
very beautiful update!!
loved veer giving neha surprise!!
but poor naha feeling at tht moment
and whts going in dhruv's mind
and yeh sushma hamesh rude hi rehti hai
loved sister-bro cute convo
and neha's cabin full of flowers!!!
loved veer's surprise!!
waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...
confession was tooo gud...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 19

she turned n saw him...he was standing near the doors...she smiled with tears and constantly looked at him...she felt very blithe...he also gazed her lovingly ...to saw her lovely face he felt very happy n then expand his arms to embraced her...she saw her expanded arms n shyly lowered her eyes...then again looked at him hesitatingly he blink his eyelid softly ...to saw his indirect indication...she moved n embraced him..both of them embraced each other tightly...fresh tears rolled out from her eyes(background music)

haan...
jo kwabon khyaalon mein socha nhi tha,
tune mujhe itna pyaar diya,
mein jab bhi jahan bhi kadi dhoop mein tha,
teri zulf ne mujhpe saya kiya,

(han tu h haan tu h,
meri baaton mein tu h,
mere kwabo mein tu yaadon mein tu,
iraadon mein tu h)...2
iraado mein tu h

(he placed his hands on her waist n tightened his grip...she feel warmth of his hands on waist..n curled her arms around him)

yeahhh...we could fall in love,
i say...i could fall in love,
yeahhh...we could fall in love,
and i say...i could fall in love with u

(he moved his hands on upper side of her back...n she hold his shirt in her fist n embraced him even more tightly)

koi bhi aisa lamha nhi h ,
jisme mere tu hota nhi h,
mein so bhi jao raaton me lekin,
tu h ki mujhme sota nhi h,
tu h ki mujhme sota nhi h,

(han tu h han tu h,
meri baato mein tu h,
mere kwabon mein tu h yaadon mein tu h,
iraado mein tu h,
iraadon mein tu h...

(she twisted her head n placed on his shoulder n closed her eyes...he placed his hand on her hairs n smell her fragnance


yeahhh...
ohhh...
h teri inaayat tujhse mili h,
hoto pe mere hasi jo khili h,
usse mera chehra chupa bhi na paaye,
tujhe paake haasil hui jo khushi h,
tujhe paake haasil hu jo khushi h..,

(han tu h han tu h,
meri baton mein tu,
mere kwabon mein tu yaadon mein tu h,
iraado mein tu h )...2
iraadon mein tu h...

after sometime veer pulled her n saw in her eyes... wiped her tears she looked at him without any expression n start sobbing...veer cupped her face n said-''kya hua tum ro kyun rhi ho ab to mein wapas aa gya hun na''

she wiped her fresh tears n lowered her eyes...veer lifted her face n said-''meine bhi tumhe bhot miss kiya isliy to itni jaldi aa gya''

she made a childish face n pulled him little bach-''jao mujhe tumse baat hi nhi karni tumne mujhe juth kyun bola...''

he smiled n came closer to her-''kunki mein tumhe surprise dena chahta...kaisa laga mera surprise...or fir mujhe tumhaare chehre par wo khushi dekhni thi jo mein dekhne itni door se aya hun ...or tum ho ki mujhe hi naaraz ho gyi''

her anger was dissolved in a second n she smiled back at him-''bhot accha laga''...he looked at her-''yeh hui na baat...is smile ko paane ke liye mein kuch bhi kar sakta hun''n she replied softly-''kuch bhi''
he came more closer n said in very low tone-''hmmm...kuch bhi''...he came more closer...as he came near to her...she moved backward...he gazed her with very passionate eyes.. ...she moved backward n sticked to the wall...as there no space to escaped from him...he followed her backward steps and put his one hand on the wall n one near her waist -''ab kahan jaogi mujhse bachke''

she felt very shy by enclosed in his arms from both side...he constantly looked at her...her black eyes are looked more beautiful today...he touched her cheek with his thumb...she lifted her eyelids n said-''aise mat dekho''

veer-''kyun''

she felt more shy n lowered her eyes-''mujhe accha nhi lag rha h''

veer smiled at her lovingly n lifted her chin -''kyun accha nhi lag rha''

she hesitatingly looked at him n said arrogantly-''bas nhi accha lag rha h mujhe tum jao ab mujhe bhot kaam h''

veer put his finger on her lips and put his head adjacent to hers...she got nervous n closed her eyes...he bend his head n caressed her hairs...she feel his love n put her hands on his chest n then curled around him...he rubbed her hairs n then kissed her ear...she felt warmth of his lips..n his passion of love...she embraced him n he placed his hands around her waist n pulled her more closer separated from the wall...after sometime she completely lost in his arms...he didn't wanted to disturbed her so he softly placed his hands around her shoulders n smiled

after few minutes he pressed her lower part of ear with his teeth softly...she screamed in pain and came to her senses-''ahhh...''n pulled him

he laughed n said-''kya hua''n made a innocent face-''jab lagta h to aise hi dard hota h ''n came nearer to her

she frowned n smiled smirkly...he was confused but didn't stopped his steps n moved towards her..as he came more nearer she smiled n pricked her nail in his chest...he shouted n pulled back-''ahhh..ahhh''

she burst in to laughter n said-''jab lagta h to aise hi dard hota h''he frowned n said-''neha..chodunga nhi mein tumhe''n ran behind her...they ran around the table n she said-''pehle pakad ke to dikhayo''n laughed...he ran fast n snatched her dupatta...as he snatched her dupatta she strucked to the corner of the chair n screamed...veer immediately removed it n came near to her n asked worriedly -''neha tum thik to ho na''

she looked at his worried face n smiled-''han mein thik hun ab tum jao bhot der ho gyi h tumhaare ghar par sab pareshaan ho rhe honge''he didn't listen her but saw at her foot which was strucked to chair...he hold her hand n made her sat comfortably on the big sofa n cupped her face-''tumhe kahin chot to nhi lagi na''she hold his hand into her hands n said-''veer mein bilkul thik hun kuch nhi hua h mujhe tum itna pareshaan kyun ho rhe ho im fine''n smiled

he also smiled n said-''sach mein thik ho na''

she stand up n grasped his wrist and walked towards the door-''han baba mein thik hun ab jao''he looked at her foot n then said-''accha thik ho to fir se shuru karte h apna game''

she surprised n frowned at him..pulled him outside n said-''ji nhi jao mujhe apne patients ko dekhne jaana h''

veer turned n said-''patients ko dekhne jaane ki kya jarurat h jab tumhaara patients tumhaare saamne khada h...usse bhi bhot serious bimaari h''

to hear this she quickly put her palm on his mouth n said-''aaj ke baad kabhi aisa mat kehna...mein nhi chahti ki tumhe kabhi kisi doctor ke pass jaana pade or tumhe koi bimaari ho''

veer looked at her moist eyes n removed her hand from his mouth-''im sorry neha aaj ke baad kabhi aisa nhi kahunga ...ab to has do''she smiled at him

then he said-''accha to mein''before he could completed she pushed him little n said-''ab jao''n pointed her hand towards the gate..he looked at her n said-''han han mein jaata hun par meri baat to suno''she closed the door n said inside the cabin -''bye bye...ab jao''
veer smiled n came near to the door-''ok bye apna dyaan rakhna..''n finally left...she opened the door n looked at he gate...but he was already leave..she smiled n hugged the bouquet of flowers n said to herself-''thank u veer for this lovely surprise mein tumhe bata nhi sakti ki mein aaj kitni khush hun...tum bhi apna dhyaan rakhna''n after sometime she went to check the patients


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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful one..!!
but when would they confess officially..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update dear 😊...

i just loved this surprise of veer 😳...awesome...

u r doing great job dear...keep it up ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
it ws such a lovey dovey ud...
too good.
they really so cute ,

u r very cute,

i really like her our emotional neha, but don't her show her too emtional, i want her to a bit bold s at times...

she will b rocking that way...

veer is really a perfect guy which every gal desires, ...cute man...

surprise was cute, convo ws more awesome, veer worried abt her ws also too good...

thanx for such frequents uds...

i love u tejjo.
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!!👏
with whole veer-neha😃
n hug scene reminded me prc rtmc hug after yudh😳
loved whole update described beautifully😃
Edited by shruja - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...👏
loved veer's surprise...n yes that scene...where they hug each other...😳
riya it seems like u r totally inspired by prithviraj chauhan...but i like it...prithviraj chauhan ki saari yaadein taaza kar deti ho...👍🏼...whether its the scene of teasing each other or the scene where they hug each other...all reminds me of PRC...i liked that scene very very much...
n neha...veer is right...he is ur patient...usse bimaari ho gae hai...did u know which one...LOVERIA...❤️...aur wo bhi tumse...🤣...iska ilaj to duniya ka koi aur doc kar hi nahi sakta...sivaye tumhare...🤣
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
dat was really beautiful !!!!
Veer's surprise is really sweet !!!!
waithng for dem 2 say " i luv u " ...😍
niice ud...

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