HUMTUM (RTMC FF) - Page 30

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

beautiful part
loved it

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i love ur ff too

Originally posted by: Freethinker

too good...nice update dear...

thanks dear for ur comment

Originally posted by: neha_dubey1709

wow... Loved the parts yaar... Bas ab jaldi veer aaye aur apni Neha se mile :)
Continue sooonnn
Thanxx for the pm dear...

thank u swthrt 4 ur lovely comment
will update soon dear
u r most welcome

Originally posted by: sparksfly

woowww... dat was a cute ud !!!!

Veer got d project !!! yay !!! well ye to hona hi tha... Neha ne wish jo mangi thi...

veer-''duniya ki sabse beautiful ladki mirror me hi h dhyaan se dekho''
neha-''lekain isme me to mein''n suddenly she stopped n realised that what he wanted to say

dat so sooo... sweet !!!!!

neha-''aisa ho hi nhi sakta..mujhe aapne bhagwaan par pura bharosa h wo meri wish jarur puri karenge''

veer surprised to hear this n said-''tumhaari wish ...matlab tumne mere liye wish maangi h ''

Neha cares abt Veer soo... much !!!

luv their jodi !!!!

thanks dear😊

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

wow.. such a sweet update..!!!😳

i just loved it TOTALLY..😳

story is getting very interesting ..as it is going on..

thanks dear for a lovely comment

part 18

veer stopped for a moment and said-''kya jindagi bhar aise hi mera saath dogi''

neha listen his words n after few seconds-''haan''

to hear her answer he was very happy as he was on top of the world...he smiled silently...both of them silently waiting for each others reply...after sometime neha asked him-''ab to tumhe project bhi mil gaya h to tum wapas kab aa rhe ho''

veer-''mein kal ''then he stopped ...he thought something n smiled smirkly

she confused n said-''tum kal aa rhe ho kya''

veer-''nhi mein kal nhi aa rha hun mujhe yahan abhi ek week or lagega''n smiled again

she shocked n quickly said-''ek week kyun ...ek week or kyun lagega?tumhaara kaam to khatam ho gya h na fir''

veer-''han mujhe project to mil gya h but kuch formalities poori karne ke liye yahan rukna padega''n made n naughty face

neha felt sad n said-''ek week rukna jaruri h kya''in very low tone

veer curled his lips n said-''hmmm..bhot jaruri h''

neha-''thik h apna dhyaan rakhna or kaam pura karke jaldi aana...bye''

veer smiled again nsaid-''ok bye''n disconnect the phone...he was very happy n want to give her a surprise...after that he seated on the chair n waited for his flight announcement .

she felt very sad n lying on bed...hugged the pillow n said to herself-''i miss u veer...pls jaldi wapas aa jao na''

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(malhotra house)

rudra-''nhi dhruv veer iske liye kabhi nhi manega''n stand up fron the couch

siddart also seated next to him n said-''han dhruv rudra thik keh rha h wo nhi manega''

dhruv alighted n put his hand on his hand n said-''mujhe pta h ki veer nhi manega lekin wo sab aap mujhpar chod dijiye...mein kaise bhi usse mana lunga...bas aap ye bataiye ki aap ko is baat se koi aitraaz to nhi h na''

siddarth smiled-''nhi beta hume koi problem nhi par''but dhruv quickly said-''to bas mene soch liya h ki mujhe kya karna''n then siddarth put his hand on dhruv's head n said-''jaise tumhaari marzi''n then he leave

shubh was little worried n said to dhruv-''dhruv dekho beta veer ko abhi is baare me kuch mat btaana nhi to kabhi nhi manega''

dhruv-''dad aap chinta mat kijiye veer ko kuch nhi pta chalega''n smiled at him...then he leave,,,in the corridor dhruv asked to rudra-..meine jo bhi socha h wo thik h na''

rudra smiled at him n said-''hmm...ek dum thik socha h tumne''then both of then went to their room

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next morning (malhotra house)

everyone having their breakfast...but dhruv missed his brother..whose always sat next to him...he looked at the chair n felt little bad...becoz it was empty since 5 days...rudra sat on his another side...he looked at dhruv n said-''dhruv jaldi se naasta karo hume airport bhi jaana h veer ko lene...dhruv turned n nodded...as he picked up the bowl of kheer...it was snatched by someone...dhruv was shocked...n turned to looked at him...he was none other than veer...he seated next to him n smiled...everyone shocked to saw him

dhruv-''veer..tum yahan ...tum kab aa gye''

veer smiled n said-''jab tum meri kheer ko khaane ki koshis kar rhe the''
dhruv hugged him...n then rudra stand up n hugged both of them...dhruv hugged him more tightly n said-''meine tumhe bhot miss kiya veer'' everyone feel happy to saw 3 of them

veer-''dhruv chodo na itna jor se pakda h tumne mujhe ''dhruv looked at him n then hugged him more tightly-''ab thik h ''

veer smiled n then hugged him back...after sometime he take blessings of all the elders n hugged his mother...she kissed him n said-''kitna kamjor ho gya h mera baccha..ab mein tujhe kahin nhi jaane dungi...wahan khaana nhi milta tha kya...5 din mein hi sukh gya mera baccha''veer looked at himself from top to bottom n said-''really''

dhruv n rudra burst into laughter...veer raised his eyebrows then both of them stopped but again burst into laughter...sushma looked dhruv n rudra angrily n said-''yeh sab kya h tum dono has kyun rhe yahan koi mazak ho rha''both of stopped their laughter n lowered his eyes.''.veer tum fresh ho jao or naasta karke thoda aaram karlo''n she went upstairs

siddarth hugged his son n then left for office with shubh...nivi went to the kitchen...then rudra n dhruv came near to him n again burst into laughter n said to dhruv-''dhruv mera bhai bhot kamjor ho gya h 5 dino mein... khaana nhi milta tha kya wahan...mere baccha''then they ran to upstairs as veer ran behind them to punished both of them n throw coushions on them...


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after sometime diya returned from the college n went to veer's room...he was inside washroom...she opened the doors n saw his luggage n his clothes carelessly thrown on floor..she picked up all the clothes one by one n other things which also thrown here n there in the room...she said to herself-''hey bagwaan bhai ne ate hi saare ghar ka bura haal karke rakha h''then she picked up his phone n saw the photo n said-''yeh ladki kaun h''n smiled

after sometime veer came out from the washroom..he rubbed his wet hairs with towel n saw diya n said-''diya tu kab ayi''

she turned n quickly hugged him n said-''bhai mene aapko bhot miss kiya...ab aap kahin mat jaana pls''

veer hugged her back n said-''ok nhi jayunga..accha tu kaisi h..thik to h na''

she smiled n said-''jiska bhai aapke jaisa ho use koi problem ho sakti h kya''n both of smiled at each other

then she put his clothes in his wardrobe...n he combed his hairs...she smiled smirkly n said-''bhai is baar to koi ladki pakka mil gyi hogi na wahan''

veer looked at her n raised his eyebrows n said-''mein wahan kaam karne gya tha ladki dekhne nhi''n again busy in combing his hairs.

she made a innocent face n said-''sach me to fir wo aapke phone me kiski photo h ''

veer quickly turned ...n searched for his phone n said-''diya mera phone kahan h?''

she laughed n said-''mere pass h''veer came near to her n said-''mera phone do jaldi''she said-''agar na dun toh''n ran to the other side of the bed n veer run behin her-''diya mera phone do''as she turned to escaped from him he quickly grasped her hand n said-''diya ki bacchi ..chodunga nhi mein tujhe ...chalo mera phone do jaldi se''n snatched the phone from her n looked at angrily-''kisi or ke phone me thaak jhaak karna galat baat hoti h samjhi..ab jao yahan se mujhe sona h ''n lying on bed

she put his hands on her waist n said-''kisne kaha aise ki dusro ke phone me thaak jhaak karna galat baat hoti h''

veer smiled n said-''tumhaare bhai ne''

she sat next to him n said-''bhai btao na kaun h wo ladki''veer frowned n said-''diya mujhe neend aa rhi h ''

she pulled the pillow from under his head n said-''nhi jab tak aap mujhe nhi btaoge mein aapko sone nhi dungi''veer sat on the bed n staring at her...she felt happy as he defeated her brother...hugged him n said-''bhai btao na kaun h wo''

veer put his hand on her shoulder n hugged her back -''mein kuch din pehle hi usse mila tha...wo doctor h city hospital...diya usne mera bhot saath diya is project ko haasil karne me...tumhe pta h usne mere liye wish bhi maangi thi...agar aaj mujhe yeh project mila h to sirf uski wajah se''she looked at him n said-''bhot pyaar karte ho na usse''

veer smiled n said-''apni jaan se bhi jyada''she felt very happy to saw his smiled face

she hugged him n said-'' mujhe wo bhot aachi lagi mujhe to pasand h''veer laughed n hugged her tightly n said-''mujhe bhi wo bhot pasand h''

suddenly she pulled back n sat in front of him-''bhai wo bhi aapko pyaar karti h kya?''

veer-'han karti h''then she smiled n said-''to fir aapko usse milne jaana chahiye na''
veer-''mene usse abhi btaya nhi h ki wapas aa gya hun''

she was surprised n said-''kyun ...lekin kyun nhi btaya aapne wo bhi to aapka wait kar rhi hogi bechaari ko kitna bura lagega jab use pta chalega ki aapne usse jhut bola h''

veer-''mein use surprise dena chahta hun dumbo''

she smiled n said-''oh to yeh baat h ''then both of them smiled

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next day

neha entered in the hospital n went to her cabin...as she open the doors...she was surprised to saw the room with full of flowers...n her table with so many bouquets..she came nearer to bouquets n felt very happy..she touched the bouquets n smiled to saw that...suddenly she saw a small card in one bouquet n opened it...n something written on it
thank u so much
mera saath dene ke liye;
mera dhyaan rakhne ke liye;
mujhpar vishwaas karne ke liye;
kya mera saath hmesha dogi?
from veer

to saw this her eyes brightened...she turned n searched for him...as she saw him..tears rolled out from her eyes

dat was sooo... nice !!!!

wow... Loved the update dear... :-)
Thanx for the pm