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Posted: 13 years ago
Hume ye geet ka izhare mohabbat bhut psand aya. Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

THANKS FOR YOUR LOVE AND SUPPORT

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support. Here is the next part I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it
Love-Piya
PART 30

Without saying anything both of them started walking holding each other's hand as if declaring to the world that Maan and Geet would always remain together and nothing can come between their love not even death

After spending some time with Geet Maan left for office

All the students were praising Maaneet's love and were giving disgusted looks to Rasika

Rasika immediately leaves the college campus

She sits in her car and dials Dev's number

Dev: Hello babes aaj subah hi meri yaad aa gayi kya baat hai raat tak rukha nahi jaa raha [Hello babes how come u remembered me in the morning it seems u can't wait till night]

Rasika: Bakwaas bannd karo Dev tumne Geet k saath aisa kya kar diya k wo ghayal sherni ki tarah tumhe dhund rahi hai? [O shutup Dev what did u do with Geet she is searching u like an wounded tigress]

Dev: Kya Geet mere baare mein puch rahi thi zarur roh rahi hogi haina? [What Geet was searching me I am sure she must be in a very bad state and she must be in tears]

Rasika: Geet ronewalo mein se nahi hai balki rulanewalo mein se hai usne tumhe chuha kaha aur pure college k saamne tumhe dhamki di aur meri insult ki aur mujhse ye bhi kaha k jis din tum uske haath lag gaye toh duniya ki koi taakat tumhe uske keher se bacha nahi paayegi [Geet is not a cry baby infact she is the one who will make the person standing in front of her to shed tears. She addressed u as a mouse in front of the entire college and went on insulting me she gave u an open warning that the day she finds u no one would be able to protect u from her wrath]

Dev: Maine toh socha tha k wo kamzoor ho gayi hogi [I thought that she must have become weak by now]

Rasika: Kamzor nahi Dev balki aur bhi takatwar bun chuki hai wo main ye toh jaanti nahi k tumne Geet k saath kya kiya hai par itna samajlo k ab Geet k saath saath tumhe MSK se bhi bachna hoga [Geet has become stronger than ever I don't know what have u done with her but be aware as now u would have to face MSK also along with Geet]

Dev was really scared

Dev: Tum phone rakho main kuch din tak underground ho raha hoon [Cut the call immediately I have decided to go underground for some days]

Before Rasika could reply Dev himself ended the conversation

Dev: Ye maine kya kar diya Geet mujhe nahi chodegi mujhe chupna hi hoga [What did I do Geet won't leave me I have to hide for some days]

He removed his sim card from his mobile and threw it on the road

He took his car and started driving to an unknown location

But he was unaware that Geet had already traced the call as she was sure that Rasika would definitely contact Dev after their confrontation

The hacking skills of Geet were proving to be her strength today

She took her bike and drove to the location where Dev's car was parked when he was talking to Rasika

Geet finds Dev's simcard on the road

Geet: Simcard se trace karna bahut purana tareeka hai Dev tumhe kya laga k simcard phek doge toh main tumtak pauch nahi paayungi tum abhi bhi mere pauch se dur nahi ho bhaago jaha bhaag sakthe ho bhaago [It is an old technique to trace someone through a simcard do u think that after throwing your simcard on the road I won't be able to trace u then I am afraid that u r wrong. Run as long as u can but u won't be able to escape]

She took her laptop and started hacking the Global Positioning system

She got the equipment identity register through this system and from the database she got the IMEI number [International Mobile Equipment Identity number] of the handset

The signals that were getting transmitted by this number helped her in getting the exact location of Dev

She placed the laptop carefully on her bike and opened the map of the city

She arranged the setup in such a way that the signals were now visible on the map and it was now very easy for Geet to trace Dev

The engine of Dev's car was hot and hence it stopped midway

Dev had left in such a hurry that he did not carry water with him and the area where he was standing right now was sparsely populated

He took the can from his car and started walking in search of water

Geet had also reached that area by that time. She notices Dev's car

Geet: Ab bachkar kaha jaaoge? [How will u escape from me know?]

Dev heard the sound of someone's bike

Dev: Lagta hai aas paas koi hai ussi se madat maang letha hoon warna iss sunsaan ilake mein paani kaha se milega [It seems someone is here maybe he can help me it is otherwise very difficult to find traces of water in this isolated area]

Dev started walking in the direction of the sound

Geet was waiting for him patiently and was continuously monitoring Dev's movements through her laptop

Dev was almost there. He did not notice a large stone that was lying in his path due to which he lost his balance and landed on the ground

He lifted his head and saw Geet who was waiting for him on her bike

Dev: (scared) Ye yaha kaise aa gayi? [How did she come here?]

He immediately got up and started running in the opposite direction

Since the signals got diverted Geet started her bike and without giving a second thought she started following those signals

Geet was driving at a very high speed. Dev was running for his life and Geet was behind him

Geet started attacking Dev with her bike

Dev's hand got injured with Geet's first attack

He continued to run but his legs were very slow in comparison with Geet's bike

She raised the accelerator and started hitting Dev black and blue with the wheel of her bike

Dev's whole body was in immense pain he was still trying his level best to escape

In this process his mobile falls down

There was a railway track close by Dev started moving in that direction as he thought that there he might find some people and Geet won't risk to attack him in front of some else

Dev was trying his level best to move ahead but Geet targeted his legs this time and moved her bike on his legs

He started screaming in pain Geet took a chain from her coat and placed it on Dev's neck and started dragging him here and there with the help of her bike

Dev's neck started bleeding

Geet was riding the bike on a path which was full of piercing and sharp stones

Dev was not strong enough to handle this type of torture

Blood stains started becoming visible on his clothes

There were some thorny plants in that area Geet dragged Dev towards those plants and rotated her bike in such a way that his manhood became the target of those thorns

He yelled in pain as those thorns pierced in his private organ. Geet placed her foot on his back and pushed him further down so that the thorns could have a deeper penetration

She was not satisfied and adjusted her bike on top of him and went on accelerating the speed

Dev was finding it difficult to breathe

Geet dragged him to the other thorny plant and repeated the same scene. His manhood was badly injured

Dev noticed that he was very close to the railway track and it was his last chance to escape but he had to be very quick with his actions

As Geet was about to take a turn with her bike Dev somehow managed to reach the keyhole with his hands and he removed the key of her bike and with whatever little strength that was left in him he pulled the chain due to which Geet landed on the ground

Geet had not anticipated this she took few minutes to understand the situation but this time was enough for Dev to reach the railway track and luckily for him a train was passing by at that time he somehow managed to get into the train and he escaped from there

Geet took her laptop but the signals that she was getting was of the place where she was standing

She realized that Dev's mobile was lying on the ground and now she could not track him

Geet: Lagta hai tumhari kismat mein kafi battar saza likhi hui hai issliye aaj tum mere haath se bach gaye [It seems your destiny has decided a very brutal punishment for u that's why u were successful in escaping today]

Geet: Ab jab tum mere haath aayoge toh tumhara wo hashr karungi k haiwan ki haiwaniyat bhi tumhara anjaam dekhkar kaap uthegi [I promise u the day I find ur whereabouts u would be punished in such a way that devil's evilness would also start trembling after watching your end]

PRECAP 1: Maan and Geet open the box together😳😳😳

PRECAP 2: Maaneet's first official date😳😳😳

PLS PRESS D LIKE BUTTON N DO COMMENT

ALL THOSE WHO WANT A PM ADD ME TO UR BUDDY LIST

Love-Piya

Ok Guys from the next update I would be concentrating on building Maaneet's relationship. Dev's character would be making a temporary exit from this FF for some time but he would reenter at the right time according to the story's demand and I promise once he reenters he would be punished in such a way that none of u would have imagined

Besides this can anyone of u guess what is there in that box?

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
deadly amazing...

now ,,, with the torchure dev got he will not b in a shape to get his hands on any girl... poor rasika wht will she do with him now!!!!!!!! i think u got the point i am talking abt...

i loved this!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow... awesome update...
loved it...
geet's revenge was awesome n the use of technology... wonderful...
god dev tho bhaag gaya... next time he should think twice before playing with any girl's life...
geet is soo strong... liked her character...
continue soon...
thanks 4 the pm...
precap is interesting...
Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
feeling proud of geet

nd maaneet love


remins strong nd becumg more strong


dev deserve more den dis...awsome

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Posted: 13 years ago
oh i loved it
har ladki mein yeh taqat honi chahiye
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet is too sharp for dev...

this is only the beginning...he has to pay a lot more for what he did...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
m sooo happy dat i doing bhangra...dev has to b punished...ok...as u say...let him live his life fr some more time...coz nxt time he wont b spared...
dieing to see maaneet love...
really loved it...
thank u sooo much fr d lovely update...
waiting fr nxt prt...
continue soon plz...

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