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Posted: 13 years ago

Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful responce and comments🤗🤗means a lot to me🤗🤗
keep reading the story.🤗i hope u ll liked the coming parts.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Intezaar

She caught his hand and Mayank looked at her confusedly, she placed it on her stomach and pressed her palm on his palm..

"ap hum dono se bhi apne dil ki baat nahi kahain ge?"

Her words, her act had made him speechless, the way her eyes were glued on his face wanting his trust, faith in return had raised his heart beat, and he was owed to see her unconditionally love for him. He held her hands in his hand and pressed his lips over her palm lingering for some time letting his tears to flow that he always had tried to hide from everyone; her heart sank to see his shining eyes with tears. He bent down on his knee taking her hands in his hands and placing his one hand on her stomach he caressed her skin to feel their child who was breathing inside her but was giving him strange strength to overcome all the pain. He leaned forward and kissed her stomach, Nupur closed her eyes to feel that moment while smiling happily..

"You both are my life Nupur"she opened her eyes to listen his chocking voice and looked down to see at his face, though his eyes were wet due to tears but she could see loved and shine in his eyes while saying those words, she bent down in front of him and wrapping her arms around him she hugged him tightly letting her tears to flow.. "Hum dono ko ap ki zaroorat hai Mayank please hum se kuch na chupaen"his heart caught in fist to heard her broken and pleading voice, she had never demanded anything from him and today she was demanding his trust .how could he let her love down this time?

He crawled up his arms around her waist pulling her closed to him and tightly squeezed her in his arms to feel her love, to feel her closed to him..

Maynk pulled himself a bit away still holding her in his arms and she looked up only to see him starring at him with Love'she stared back in his eyes for confirmation whatever she was thinking it was true or she was again seeing some dreams, but This time neither it was the figment of her thoughts nor it was her dream. It was true.

"Mayank'." She tried to say something but he shushed her placing his finger on her lips and she stopped in mid-way.

Mayank slightly removed her tears with his palm and cupped her face in his hands..

"Tum, hamara baby ,Maa sab meri zindagi ho..main tum sab ke bina zinda nahi reh sakta"he whispered in choking voice,she raised her hand and lovingly caressed his cheeks to calmed him down while holding her shoulder tightly with her one hand to give support him.she knew he had been broken totally and it was hurting her badly..

"ap bhi Mayank hamari zindagi hain..hum ap ko khush dekhna chahte hain"

He smiled to see immense love in her eyes..

" aj main tum dono se kuch nahi chupaon ga.sab kuch bataon ga..jo main tumhain batane se darta tha..khudh ko tum se door rakhna chahta tha.."

He whispered in broken voice and lowered his eyes to feel ashamed of himself for hurting her, for abusing her when he knew she was so innocent.

Today he did let her heart say what he wanted to say; today he did not want to leave any barrier between them as her love and Trust was his strength now.

"is liye shaadi ki pehli raat ko 'main'ne'tumhain kaha tha ke main ye shaadi nahi kerna chahta tha takay tum koi naya khawab na bun sako jabke main ne tumhari aankhon main sare sapne toot te dekh liye '."He said in chocking voice and paused and then again continued while Nupur holding his hands tightly just was listing him..

"I am very heartless person Nupur..i did not feel pity on you. I saw you're dreamy, shining eyes which wanted love from me and I broke your dreams, I saw you sitting on floor wrapping arms around yourself feeling scared of me. My heart caught in fist to see you like that but I did not say a single word to console you I am heartless Nupur."

"I know I have hurt you a lot Nupur and trust me I did not want to hurt you but it was my fear, my regret that was not letting me to come closed to you"

"Regret!!!"she confusedly said and Mayank slightly nodded his head..

"Yeah regret for hurting someone, regret for breaking someone's heart whom I had been lost"

'Ap kis ki baat'''"though somehow she already had guessed he was talking about Piya but she was confused if they both loved each other as she had read in his diary about Piya's confession then how could he hurt her'..

"Piya'"Mayank cut him in between her sentence and taking paused a bit he continued further..

"I know you have read about her in my diary but it was not complete truth" he sighed taking deep breath to calm himself a bit but Nupur could see his changing expressions, the same restlessness was spreading his face, suddenly his face got pale and his body shivered..

"Mayank'."she caressed his face immediately to calmed him down and wiped off his sweat with her duppataa..

He held her hand and kissed it..

"Tum ho na mere pas toh main theek hoon"he smiled slightly to see her getting tensed. She felt relieved a bit to see him calmed again..

Taking deep breath Mayank again spoke up..

"Piya was my friend, my best friend."

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here is update...i hope u ll liked it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

yayyy me first

anila😛
loved the update
it's just awesum...
at last mayank confessed everything...
thanks 4 the pm
do cont. soon...
may god bless u
Edited by parul_bansal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
SIS...🤗
u ended it here...
bt why?????? i want to read further plzzz...
Awesome update SIS...
one of d BEST of dis ff...
i loved it to d coree...
loved d way Mayank said everything to her...
Beautifully written...
loved it lodsss...
m dying to know abt his past though i hv a lil idea abt it...
bt plzzz wanna read 1st...
waiting actually dying to read d next part...
loved it lodsss...
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
tumhari tuuu..
uf khuda ek tu 19 chapter mein aker woh bol raha tha..atlast woh bol raha tha...mein itna gaur se sun rahi thi...aur ,...
MAria...mein ny tumko nhi chorana...yeah kiya bat hoi..had hai yaar

but it was so so beautifully written his love, pain fear, regret her aprehenisn n fear...all was amzing...i was just to much into it...
now i want n update ASAP...within... 4 days...bus...lol

pls update sooon plish plish
lovly

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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful. part. stop in crucial moment? why. we want update very soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice part. ...love it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
osombut ese point per ku rook diya
now u have to update it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
are ye kya...
thoda aur bada kar deti to kya hojata,,...
kamse kam vo baat to puri kar deti...
ye baat sunane ke liye hi to kabse intezaar ka intezaar karte rehte the...
aur ab next update ke liya intezaar karna padega,...
but update soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic update
beautifully written
but why did u stop on crucial point?plz continue soon...

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