The Feather of Blue Bird#2 [MN] *Completed* - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting 4 a longgg update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you so much for linking this story.😊







Thank you so much guys for pressing LIKE tab and also your precious comment😊

Thank you so much guys for your love and support.😊

without you all ... this story cannot see 2nd thread.

A Big Thanks to you all ...

now i stopped my bakbak n going to post the update...hope u like it
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Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Now u know ur each n evry word wht has made impact on mayank…..

This part of ur update took me away, whn she said it's a dream but he touched her,I was like hain yeah kiya hoa…

But than it was a dream, I hope her love tht is only way tht can make mayank cum back..but the dream was so beautiful peacefully, and the helplessness of her was so clear in it

The birds,..by the way im missing nature in FOBB these days a lot…

The thought that she hasn't eaten anything still make him restles, the name she herself, make him so at pain again n again, yet she is the sure to all this….

But i really liked the way Nupur is making him do it, for his good…that beautiful one step towards good ended up in such a…sigh…it will take much more effort than tht….but I hope she will not loss herself

The office moment when suhani went out to tell everyone was so much like a typical gossip at work place….it actually made me smile when he came back and shouted…

So here cums her chance…I wonder whts for them there, but yet atleat spending sumtime togther…

Lolvy part suja

tc

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally!!!!!!
3raton se rozzz chakkar laga rahi thi..By God!!!!
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part
Waiting for next update:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update😃
cont. soon 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
so nice and beautiful update
just loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
one of the beautifull update
and hopefull too
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
the up is good
so nupur while supressing her sorrow and pain in herself goes and lies down in her bed she was totally broken by mayank's behaviour but still she didnt loss hope she has determined that she will surely make mayank realise her love
while thikning all this things in her mind she found mayank's hand her neck he was caressing her loving her
nupur who had only recieved harsh and rude behaviour from mayank during these days got surprised to see this loving gestures from him she automatically curled herself in his arms and poured out all her pain
they were enjoying the love and care in each other arms when witha sound nupur's sleep got disturbed and she found that it was again a dream of her
she became more hurt by this but keeping aside all this pain she prepared breakfast for mayank and paved the way for a new day
but mayank he was as usuall cold and harsh towards her
really mayank is getting on nervous now
though he was hurt but he should atleast give a chance to nupur
anyways now they invited in party
plz cont soon and pm me

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