The Feather of Blue Bird#2 [MN] *Completed* - Page 14

it was a very toching update..
the thing i like about nupur most is that she never loses hope..

do continue soon..
thanks for the update and pm.

OMG!Suja u r a true sweet heart.🤗

nic update..

Why im constantly feeling that mayank did came in her room for real...Dont know why...But the way u told it all, i cant help but feeling this...The touch, the pain, the tears of him all seemed so real and i think he truly wanted to come this near to her...Dont know may be he came...
The breakfast part ws beautiful...im glad that atleast they had one proper meal together..but SIGH...one more time mayank dint let his pain come out before nupur...If only once he gave this relationship a chance...
But hope for the best...
And im really looking forward to the party...Kya pata yeh party kuch naya rang laye unki rishte mein...
And LOL how mayank ws being sadu in office...Poor his PA...Hope she'll be able to come back in 30 mins...oops actually 23 mins...
Totally loved this update apu...Kintu koto deri kore update korla...Eibar kintu taratari koro...🤗

mindblowing. very very very painful. di aj keo kadlam. but story ektu ketu kore progress korche. mayank and nupur r pain unbearable

nice part...
may be this party invitation has bought a good turn in their life...
the breakfast part was so beautiful...love can be seen in his eyes, though he aws trying not to show them...
your way of expressing feelings is amazing...
waiting for the next part...

firstly i m extremely sorry by heart kaan paker k... m terribly late suja but believe me i am stil badly stuck in things going on in my life... 😔

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

Now u know ur each n evry word wht has made impact on mayank'..

This part of ur update took me away, whn she said it's a dream but he touched her,I was like hain yeah kiya hoa'

But than it was a dream, I hope her love tht is only way tht can make mayank cum back..but the dream was so beautiful peacefully, and the helplessness of her was so clear in it

The birds,..by the way im missing nature in FOBB these days a lot'

The thought that she hasn't eaten anything still make him restles, the name she herself, make him so at pain again n again, yet she is the sure to all this'.

But i really liked the way Nupur is making him do it, for his good'that beautiful one step towards good ended up in such a'sigh'it will take much more effort than tht'.but I hope she will not loss herself

The office moment when suhani went out to tell everyone was so much like a typical gossip at work place'.it actually made me smile when he came back and shouted'

So here cums her chance'I wonder whts for them there, but yet atleat spending sumtime togther'

Lolvy part suja

tc

Originally posted by: 18anila1

Finally!!!!!!

3raton se rozzz chakkar laga rahi thi..By God!!!!