SwaRon FF- Into You Like A Train- Ch3 Pg15 - 30/1

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

This seems like the ideal thing to read, something I could read without fail if YOU, all three of you update without fail and in time. Uh uh. So, I just read the introduction, beautiful, is all. Cheers!

I will be reading on tonight, I believe and I am hoping you all know how descriptive I am, so I deserve the very first PM for all your updates hereafter. 😛

Love,

Kankshita

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Table tod update guys..awesome just loved it...update soonnn😊

"Khana khane toh aayega, I'm sure. The dude might look like he hasn't seen much of food for a couple of years, but he will need lunch."😆

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

So, I finished reading both the chapters!

@Nandini:

Now, woman, reading these two chapters was like watching the show itself, it was NOT different at all. I believe you have a very engaging style of writing, like your skill grasps my attention with the precision that I can correlate the real thing itself with what you have written. The first chapter, Swayum was the star, these were his feelings that this locker room scene did not capture as efficiently as the it would have been today, clearly the standard has been set really high NOW and we expect to see both of em developing. You've been developing em too, so well it comes around. Chapter two, Sharon's the star. And I am gonna quote Ron Weasley here, 'one person can't feel all that at once, they'd explode.' Too right they will.

Hence, it is all about being in love with Swayum and her ability to over-analyse that she does sound pretty effed up here. Wondrous stuff! 👏

@Rafi:

You better update soon, right. I am liking the flow of the story, you best don't break it, write soon, please. :)

@Sakina:

Oh, Fan Girl! You know you're an amazing writer, right. I am gonna be waiting for your turn to write. 😳

On with you now, great work, buds!

PM me, you owe me. 😛

Love,

Kankshita

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..SD..

@..SD..

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

its was fab nandu, its always a treat to read you guys. Loved the way you explained upto wat extend sharon was lost.
Thanx for d pm rafz, waiting for your bit update soon :)

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@Parvathi12

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

sorry for commenting late...man this is awesome...i love ur use of words...awesome update...update the next part soon pleeejjj

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KoolKatz

@KoolKatz

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Dude awesum

update soon

and pm me

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Bengalibabexx

@Bengalibabexx

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Wow... So sad... Ur Engish is impeccable an easy,to understand... Can u pm me with updates... Thank u... Nazifa xD

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719483

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

It is supa-dupa awesome. 👏

Read it just now !! 😊

Update fast and do Pm me when you next update !! 😆

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musicgal17

@musicgal17

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

"Sharon and i can't work together?"
i was like WHAT?! Hmm... This is so Swayam-ish... Jo sharon chahti hai wahi karega... :D :( hehe..

And it is really nice to read sharon's feelings towards swayam... Her uneasiness on his absence... And everything.. :) just love it..

Btw, AWESOME WRITING... Update it soon... :) <3