IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#801

It's a nice update!

Brilliant writing!

I didn't read the former updates so I couldn't relate with the story quite well.

I have to read the other part also to enjoy the story even more.

I loved Arnav as a caring brother so much.

Thanks for the PM.

Edited by sohara - 13 years ago

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

#802

very well written.. the pain that khushi is feeling and self loathing that arnav is facing..

perfectly written chapter..

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517072

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Posted: 13 years ago

#803

Loved it...👏
thanks for the pm.😳

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Ann

@ipkkndank

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Posted: 13 years ago

#804

Awesome update dear =) =)

Love it =) =)

Continue soon =) =)

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renee

@renee27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#805

lets see what happens when they meet... one of them is sure gonna freak out... i bet its Arnav... Khushi is one strong woman 😊

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Flame.

@Flame.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#806

Oh God! Its so heartrending to see Khushi so depressed. She's so cheerful otherwise :(

Will she be going to that shelter for women?

I felt for Arnav in this chapter. I really did feel bad for him. It must be so difficult for him to even look at himself in the mirror.

Your an amazingly amazing writer and your doing a great job 👍🏼

Please do continue soon. Will be waiting :)

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#807

Thanks for the PM. Loved it. Both Arnav and Khushi's emotions were very well conveyed.

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monaya_sajan

@monaya_sajan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#808

amazing update yaar!!!!! sorry for the late reply!

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Vishwa

@vish94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#809

i just read the ENTIRE FF in one go and i must say i love it.

even though it is sad and i would probably have preferred a happy one.. but u have promised us happy moments in the future so im ok! n anyway, not all stories can be happy ones and i understand that. so its k.. no resentment.. no bashin frm my side!

hmm ok. im reallu sad about what happend with khushi and the trauma shes goin thru because of that. and i also feel sad about arnav. he shud regret what hhe ddid - and i want him to feel sad - but on the other side, its also killin me.. i think u knw what i mean!

and i think this is all still in the flashback right? khushi watching that show with manorma mami and all that? cuz arnav and anjali are still abroad in this and in the first chap u had shown anjali is on her bed and all.. so im guessing this is still the past right? we will come back to the present (where sashi was with khushi in the hospital) in the future updates?

whatever it is, i love the FF!

CHEERS!

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sreemeera

@sreemeera

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Posted: 13 years ago

#810

Khushi is so worried and broken and she really hated Arnav. I really hope that every thing will become normal in her life and she will be able to overcome all these dejected feelings.