IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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sbk2

@sbk2

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#781

Hiru Dear...

As usual, that was a fabulous update. I know, this must be a hard FF to write...the trauma and the subsequent emotional upheaval Khushi is going through is hard to pen down in words!

You are a terrific writer and manage to capture both Arnav and Khushi's emotional sufferings very well.

Amazing my Dear!! 👏 👏

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claireDD

@claireDD

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#782

i can't believe that i missed ur work for such a long time hun..
i read all 10 parts in one go...
i literally had a severe trauma while reading it...i was feeling as if i was the victim...i was so glued to the story..please hiru make khushi stronger..make her overcome this chaos..
u r an amazing writer hiru..u really are..
thanx a million for the index..i have loads to catch up..
i really wanted to drop a comment for all 10 chapters.but i was too busy reading..i nearly forgot to breath even..
do pm me when u update...
here's a big hug for u sweetie🤗🤗

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#783

Uncontrolled anger leads to self-destruction and thats classical Arnav Singh Raizada.

I want Khushi to become stronger and dont want her to forgive ASR easily.

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Thrishna

@Thrish

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#784

Loved it... continue soon...

You did a good job in portraying their emotions.

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Juicee Sushie

@Juicee_Sushie

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#785

Excellent update!!!

Just re-caught up with the story by reading all 10 chapters again!!!

Looking forward to seeing how you get through the pain being experienced by both ArHi!!!

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#786

Gosh now what is Khushi up to ?

really queer behavior, I expected her to get her confidence back during his absence and be ready to charge at him when he returns... instead is she going to get help from a women's organization... doesn't sound like our dear tigress who usually is good at fighting her own battles :)

waiting for the next part to find out :)

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a4aarsh

@a4aarsh

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#787

Thanx 4 the pm loved it as usual

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CrazY-4-BaRuN

@CrazY-4-BaRuN

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#788

I wasn't actually reading this FF .

I was reading *Her Pregnancy* ...

But then i got your PM and i just went through this...

and I ended up sitting for hours ! 😃

Its Wonderful ! 👏

I Really wish Khushi recovers .. 😭

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#789

Great great work! I can imagine how tough it is to write this. It's just going to be so difficult for Arnav and Kushi to bridge this gap, if not impossible. Not sure how you will take this forward now and look forward to the next update. Bon Courage as they say in french!