IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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Saba

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Posted: 13 years ago

#541

I'm so looking forward to reading more of this story. Thanks for the pm.

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natashaa46

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Posted: 13 years ago

#542

⭐️ wow ! ⭐️

tht was an absolutely marvelous piece of writing !👏 👏

i'm unable to add too much coz it all will be synonyms of words "good or marvelous" ...coz thts wht ur FF & writing is ⭐️⭐️ ...so just a huge round of applause 👏

(just hope the CVs dont take ASR character to the extreme he had in ur FF ...tht'll lead to we all having to hate him ...i sure dont want tht ...i LOVE him 😳

...the present track is like ook ...acceptable but ASR getting physically abusive wid khushi ..a big NO...NO! 😭 )

P.S. just recalled a some wht similar scene we had in Kutmbh (not trying to take convo in diff, direction) ...in tht the male lead gets abusive wid the girl, who was also forced into marriage ...but just in tym realises his mistake & pulls back his eveilness ...so my point is ...we can digest ASR having tht breakdown but not to the extremes like ur FF (dont mind plzzz ...i loved ur writing 😊 ) ...thts just my take on the coming track !😊

continue sooon & thnx for the PM 😊

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aditi07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#543

amazing update...beautifully penned down👏👏
very emotional and touching...loving the story!
plz update soon😊

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dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

#544

finally you updated!!

khushi's reaction seemed realistic to me!! hope things get better for her!

thank goodness the guptas stood up!

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--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#545

That was very good update!! Intense and emotional!!

Arnav regretting what he did.. But what is the use now?? Kushi is already depressed so much even to look at others.

Thanks for the PM.. Update soon!

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Honkytonk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#546

Amazing part and so beautifully written...full of emotional turmoil from everyone...hoping Khushi will snap out of the shock soon.

Many thanks for PM

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desikalakaar

@desikalakaar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#547

Amazing FF! :)

Its so full of angst!

Update soon!

And please PM me :)

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lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#548

Fabulous FF - Read it for the first time. All seven chapters. Awesome job.

👍🏼⭐️

Very similar to what is happenning currently.

Update soon and PM me.

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devishree

@devishree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#549

hey ya that was worth waiting the writing was beautifully laden with gr8 choice of words applause for that

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pearlie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#550

read all 7 chaps...amazing...cont soon n pls pm me if possible

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