IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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haminasto

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

im a lil confused...theres a chapter where Anjali is home n Khushi is takin care of her...is that the present senario...n also that Shashi asked Khushi to leave Arnav...all this is happening in the present right?

i loved the heavy emotional cloud u built..it was pure melancholy...
Arnav's demons personifing his actions so rightfully...it surely is killing him...an error of judgement n he send an innocent girl to the gallows...of course he's suffering...n he shud to realize how much damage has been done...
Khushi's agony is unbearable...im fighting to stop it...it really pierces my heart to see such a self imposed n other's hurled destruction...wat all transpired will surely put off anyone's light...

it was a great chapter in the amount of emotional n elemental feelings u went in.👏...

Edited by 18shabbo - 13 years ago

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meenaluma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

very emotional feeling bad for kushi

had exams sorry for the late comment

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kajal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

gr8...for once i thought u closed this ff...thnks dr

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insanelycrazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

😭 😭. this part has literally left me in tears! first of all im sooo sorry for the late comment!

and i loved the way you described arnav's internal emotional turmoil and his suffering. he doesnt even know wat to do! its so wierd to see khushi like this all broken, but the fact that she is trying to fight it out is makes people feel for her even more!! awesome updatee!!!😃 i felt all heavy after reading it

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SedonaScarlet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#555

AMAZING!Cant wait for more!! :D

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smileystar-123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#556

WOW... your work is reallly detailed and very easy to imagine, keep up the fabb work 😉

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Aisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#557

You write really well...loved the update :D

Can't wait to read more...😛

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rana5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#558

CD Love, I just read all 7 chapters and it is amazing. Please add me to you PM list so I can follow this heart wrenching story!!!

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saarah96

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Posted: 13 years ago

#559

wonder if khushi wil ever forgive him

keep up the good work and update soon=]

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SankaDevi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#560

Oh wow! Arnav, ultimate monster here.. He did all of this in rage an now.. He can't see her like this! And poor khushi, she is so broken:s but payal doesn't know about the force Arnav used huh? Hmm I wonder what Arnav could do to ever redeem himself because reading a khushi like this has got me shivering! Nice writing and great update!