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larina

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awww...the part where he ate the jalebi to make her happy was sooo sweet!

And, YAY! Khushi's memory is slowly returning! :D

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

Everything Was Beautifully Written Man :) 😍 Be It The Kiss Or She Making Jalebis For Him & He Eating It SOOO She Gets A Reason To Be Happy Intact Her Innocence 😳 I'm Wondering How They Got Separated :| 🤔

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Posted: 13 years ago

Eeeks Khushi is recovering well :D She remembered kissing him.

That was such an emotional moment. He had just remembered him kissing her that day and the next thing she did was come and kiss him. They relived that moment <3

Ahh can anyone love someone so much? He had that jalebi when he's strictly not allowed to...only to see her smile. Unconditional love!

Pleaseee update soon. I always wait for your PM's. I love this SS. <3

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Fatuma

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update, in a hurry, but will comment more later.

res!!!

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tina

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Posted: 13 years ago

awsome update...glad u updated...thanx for the pm and keep updating.

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fareeha

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome!!!!

Their flashback was emotional, but the kiss, and jalebi scene was much more emotional. Loved your description regarding memory of the kiss.

Awww that was so sweet of Arnav to eat the jalebi, putting his life at risk to see her happy.

Glad to see Khushi is recalling stuff gradually.

Love the way you are taking the story.👍🏼

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AquaBluez17

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Posted: 13 years ago

aww Lyraa!! tht was a great update!! awesome job hun!! keep it up!!

she is remembering!! whoot!

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N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

beautifully written, thanks a lot for your fab update...

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kdkumar

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Posted: 13 years ago

Such a wonderful update!! Thank you so much and pls continue soon...

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queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

i really like the way you show the connection between them and the structure you put this story in - flashbacks blend in so smoothly with the scene.

and it's the furthest thing from crap just so you know

i look forward to future updates!

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