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haminasto

@haminasto

Alumni

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#611

awww👏👏👏...its comin bak...
bt that white sari lady😕...fishy...
Shokofa where are u?...let me give u a hug!!!!🤗

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Asmita88

@Asmita88

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#612

hie lyraa...

how are u doing??? i was hoping u would do the reason i breathe update too

but this ff was great too...

one thing i love most about ur ff was how u incorporate the incident in real tv serial into ur ff making it feel more familiar,..

i simlply love it..

u have way wid words... u construct fiction so beautifully that while reading i seem to be lost in ur construction world...

plz do keep on writing and plz update the other ff too...

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arta

@arta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#613

it's great
it's amazing how the heart can remember 😊
who was the lady in white that always cheek up on him???
what happened to khushi ???
so much mystery but i'm loving it ...
update soon and thanks for the pm 😊

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meghnas

@meghnas

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#614

It was beautiful!! Loved the way Khushi kissed Arnav...n Arnav ate jalebis to see her smile 😊

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#615

Loved it! Thanks for the update!

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

There was nothing to NOT like about the update...I enjoyed it!!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

awesome update loved their flashback i was glad that arnav believed her instantly that his trust on her was forever i was so sweet when she was not sure when she remembered the kiss scene and the way she kissed him but that made him so happy her touch he love her so much that he was going to eat jalabi even do his life would have been at risk

i didnt get the lady in white sari...who was that any way loved thank u very much for an awesome update thanks for the pm

Edited by dumas - 13 years ago

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kohli4ever

@kohli4ever

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#618

Beautiful...

I was crying in the end..the pain arnav went through...

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td_dhoom

@td_dhoom

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

Absolutely Brilliant and beautifully written👏

Loved how she remembered the kiss,her most affectionate moment with her love and its amazing to see how it was tatooed in her heart for eternal not even letting her brain to empower thiat moment or erased from her rememberance even when she did'nt remember anything and Loved how he is welcoming her recognition of thier affection allowing himself to completely exhale her presence and smile.This feeling and moment of thier peace is palpable to both of them.

Greatly looking forward for the next read !!