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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
hey radhi finally gone thru all parts,thanx for the p.m...n reely an interesting story haan...good going...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
read all the parts...
u r such an amazing writer.. i just love mystery stories... pls pm me when u update the next...
loved it completely...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
ok pura padh liya!!! awesome yaar!!!
loved it!!
u r realy a gr8 writer..
and the suspence!! woah!!
very nice.. updt soon.. and waah!! u r in full mood,,, 2 din mein 5 updates?? Mast hai!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Extremely short but nice updates. There are flaws but I can pardon it... 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
really awsome
loved it
do update long parts na
pl
amaing!!!!!!!!!!!!!
bye
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Im wondering wht must be in tht envelop😕😕😕

Plzzz longer update next time😃😃😃😃😃 Plzzz

Nd lovely update as usual..

thnks fr pm radhi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
thnx al dearos

part 6 part a-
days passd, lots of files in mr. Aks cabin, he forget that old sparkling envelope. He also havt take d holiday and continues that boring monotonous life.
No place to go even
where he will go
even his wife dnt want to go anywhere.
She also remain bsy in work
and in d tym of reacreatns she watches serial.
Mr aks life no exception.
Dat day thre was lotz of work presure,
mr. Aks instead of going to play biliard dat day went to bar to meet some clients.
Life so colorful, people so hapy bt why nt I?
thnks mr. Aks,
what i dnt hv? Murmurd mr. Aks
n sddnly he said it in a bit louder
what i dnt hv?
.. A holiday - a voice heard behind
aks lukd bck
he surprisd
oh its mr. Joshi, his frnd subh
.. Ah! Subh lng tym aftr hwz lyf going?
Said aks
.. Oh frnd am doing gd.
.. Watz u doing nw?
.. C'mn i gt transfrd to ur city to Intregrity Hospital as Consultant psycriatic
.. Oh fine, dats gr8
oh my psycriatic so u said i nd a holiday? Applyng theories on me huh?
Cntinud
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Part 6 part b
.. Oh theories on u? Nah! Am psycriatic and psycriatic cn understand
.. So wat u undrstnd abt me?
.. U nd a holiday mate!
Ur lyf bit boring. Cnt point out 4rm ur fce mate
.. Oh realy! Bt . . . I mst say u r smewat right
.. Haha am psycriatic i cn undrstnd
u knw wat? Smetyms d persn in too boring lyf cn c and fce smethng that may exists or may b nt, dat othr people nt undrstnd. Bt it thre bt may nt
aks fce gt little thnkble
.. So u thnk it may exist?
.. What?
.. What u say, it may or may nt?
.. Yes
aks fce gt stnnd.
Lookn at d xprsn subh said - haha cmn lets spk smthng else mt u aftr lng days. Hv a drink!
Bt sddnly subh gt a urgnt cl he leavs,
aks kp on thnkng, he flt stffd, cncl d meetng n lft 4 hme.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
nice. holiday seems a good idea. eager to know is stored 4 mr aks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
@ radhi :
sorry for the late reply dear !! actually i thought that you must be giving long updates so thought that i'll read your FF at leisure. anyways, coming back to your FF..i have read all parts now. i havent read the original story " The Third Level " on which you have based your FF, but i must admit..you have selected a very tough subject for your FF..a story based on a schizophrenic person Mr. Aks..it's really praise-worthy. 👏👏
& coming to your flaws..i think since you are typing through your cell, so the biggest issue here is the short form of words that you are using & the lack of minimum punctuation..porte besh oshubidha hochche..jodi parish tahole full words use korish.😊
Edited by polly_03 - 13 years ago

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