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Posted: 13 years ago
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story inspired 4rm 'the third level'
part 1
the auto ricksaw takes a turn near the r.c bakery crossing, a middle aged man came out. Tall build but look like a deep depressd
the man walk slowly with his bag and a cigar in mouth and stoppd near a big gate signd 'the mc cooperatives pvt ltd' the man sigh 'argh! The same old bakery crossing, the same old big gate' he sigh and old inside.
Mr. Saxena all u cn Mr. Akash Saxena people generally calls him Aks is a 36 year old man lives in high street town apartment, generaly meant for higher income group class, his wife Cara is a teacher and they have no child.
Mr aks is the branch manager of the mc cooperatives pvt ltd, joind d cmpany near about 14yrs. People generaly respect him bt he suffering from a depressn. Though he himself dont knw the reason for it.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2
after long day office and meetings mr. Aks usd to return hme by bus c3a which pass through the bridge over the river in d town. Mr. Aks usd to stare from the window and usd to think whats there? n d end of d river? The bus pass on.
Aftr returning hme at 6pm. He usd to keep the jacket in d right hanger of living room. Open d shoes and evryday forget to keep it in d rack unknwngly and evryday his wife shouts for dat.
Its like life becme a robotic. Same old routne evryday. Aftr retrng same dialog by wife 'u never take me out always busy w8 work' and so on. Then going to the big pool club to play billiards with friends. Then retrnd hme and have the same curry at dinner and sleep and again d routne starts. Life is nthng bt a repeatve machine to mr. Aks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Di i will read soon:))thanks for PM BTW on whom is the story??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohh dibtw read just now awsm di!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gr8 👏

plz update soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
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And plz batao ki on whom is the story based ?????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thnx pooja n radhi 2
part 3
it was sunday bt no sunday for mr and mrs saxena. Its d same old boring drama ech and evry day. Mrs saxena also teaches piano in a school down the town and mr saxena aka aks spends lazy hour watchng old dvds .
Mr. Aks yawns! N casualy gv a look at the clock and yawns back.
The ph bell rings.
.. Hello
.. Hello! Cn i speak to mr. Saxena (a lady voice)
.. Yes speaking
.. Hawww ths meera from macau
.. Hawww meera long day after since 2yrs, hows u, n how u r in macau
.. Aww its a long story i get married here
.. What? (shckd) u gt married and evn dare to in4rm me?
.. O c'mn evrythngs happens so suddn.
.. So suddn dat u dnt evn bothr to let me knw
The ph gt cut down
mr. Aks go on remembering the old days
then sddnly he shivered his hands bcm cold, o gosh! Whos dat to do that joke with me? Meera died 2years before.
He chckd d numbr. He rush to nearest isd centre 4 d cl. Bt dat numbr is nt xists.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey i dnt knw ki kisko banau. Its 36 yr old frustatd man.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good Going Anki...Keep it Up👍🏼. Thanks for PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow nice story radhi loved it
keep it up

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