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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
good one...👏
hmmm...holidays...mr. aks really need a long one...
''...Smetyms d persn in too boring lyf cn c and fce smethng that may exists or may b nt, dat othr people nt undrstnd. Bt it thre bt may nt...''
really...??????
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
i guess u r d fastest updater around here
frankly u r d best..
just love ur update
i thoroughly enjoy them a lot
awsome
fab job
byeee
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Great !! And Check Mine Please !
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Amazing Anki👏👏👏...Ek baat mujhe achhi lagti hai tere FF mein ki tere ff mein real life problems daltyi hai tu...matlab ayse lagta hi nahi kuch imaginative likh diya hai. For Example: ye update mein ek Important baat hai ki kabhi kabhi hum itna busy ho jate hai ki humme lagne lagta hai ki kuch sahi nahi chal raha but actually humme tired ho chuke hote hai daily routine se aur tab Break jaruri hota hai...Ekdum sahi baat👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
i read all your parts..the description is good as well...but i still getting confused about mr.saxena's condition
waise just a suggession..if its a general story then u can post it on writer's corner forum..and if its ff please take ur dhanu as mr.saxena..or take tarunji
Edited by aru_86 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
thanks for the pm!
A very interesting story...
u r posting these from ur cell!! i know its very difficult..how do u manage !! i cant write more than 3 / 4 lines from mine!!😳😆
and i am curious to know...about that the phone call of that girl !!
Edited by khusi_* - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
nice update dear,n it must b reely difficult updating through cell phone so great efforts ..bt try to use more of complete words,the story no doubt is going awesum..keep up
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
I think, Subh is right!!!!!!!!!!!!! He needs some change in life.. A Holiday!!!!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️


I hope there is nothing wrong with Mr Aks

Continue soon sweets😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
part 7-

it was busy schedule,serious hectic days, imp meetings. mr aks forget that letter that he had received ..
the same routine continues.. and ife got even more boring and monotonous.. he sometimes talk to himself, sometimes acts like a machine. may be he is sufferin from schezoid fantasy.. his wife who always use to be in her world noticed the fact.. she got scared..
she told him to conslt a psycriatic.. and they decided to call his psycriatic friend Subh for a dinner.
as we seen earlier that husband and wife both remained busy in their own work.. it was the psycriatic frend who was discussing about the problem that night

in the dinner table-
... so whats the problem?? - ash mr aks wife..

... u.. replied the psycriatic friend

.. me????????

.. of course u dnt u think??

... bt what is my fault??

... dont u think you are 50% tpical women??

... ??????

... ya,, u scold your hubby for not keeping the shoes and dress properly
but u nevr asked him to take u out for dinner which typical wife usualy did??

... bt???????? am happy in my life.. i want a sweet home, professional husband,, i love to decorate my home,, doing work sit n relaxed.. i dont wana go out its teenage and couple who use to do that i fl it wastage of money..
c my room my house it neat and clean, everything in place.. my home my world.. and we are not a college buddies to go out...

... ahh... dats the reason you scold ur hubby for not keeping shoes and fress in proper place??/

... on ho (she laughs) no i not scold my husband.. bt am very particular..

...dnt you think being too particular is atlast became to boring???? like this?? yawn yawn

...

... ok ok let me help you.. became particular means keeping the shoes in same place evryday,, keeping the files in same rack... repeatating performing of this action beame boring one day??? yawnsss?????? think

... may be you are right...
bt what the solution??

.. umm

subh ready to speak up suddenly mr.aks who sat quietly during the conversation speaks up suddenly

.. mate lets leave this topic.. lets speak abt old days.. wat say?? said aks

.. ah u wana go back to those days na??

.. ah stop it.. life cnt take reverse gear...

... may be it can take.. who can say????????

.. subh.. u wana scared me?? hahaaa

.. not scaring you mate ..
ahh its already 11.30.. i hv to drive a long way


after a formal good bye talk.. he left

bt mr aks kp thinking abt his line

"dnt knw y whenever subh leaves he used to tell something that usd to got different meaning.. his xpression got changed

wateva why iam so concerning abt his line..???

let me sleep.. the routine wl again start tomorrow


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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
yeeepieee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i m d 1st 1
i have been trying n i atlast did it!!!!!!!!!!
loved it
it was d longest part u have ever updated..,.thankx for it
u r a fab!!!!!!!!!!!
amazing gal...excellent
byeee
Edited by roshnidiya - 13 years ago

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