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Posted: 13 years ago
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too good story Radhi! continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 4
wondering what happend mr. Aks retrning hme sddnly his ph slippd from his hand and it get bouncd twice and gt droppd in d manhole in road. He lookd surprise. He havnt reactd and cntinue walking towards d home slowly
.. Hey mr saxena (a voice heard )
.. (he turns bck) yes ! ! Oh mr gowrikar what r u doing here? U stay abroad na?
.. Oh c'mn saxena u must b joking dnt u knw my daughter's marriage near so jus cme bck 4rm dubai
.. Oh ya (he said casualy)
mr. Aks walks away slowly murmering smethng.
At his hme while opening d door he sddnly get realisd dat ohh goshh mr gowrikar's came here last here for daughter's marriage bt nw? He had only 1 daughter.
Thought to be too much stressd out he ignord and went to d rum n flt asleep in d couch.
Sunday evng no exceptn. Aftr retrng his wife sit n watch tv, he opend d pc n usd to do the office work. Then usd to go to play billiards .. Then the same curry at dinner .. Then in d land of dreams.
Life no xcptn

part 1 and 2 @ pg 1
part 3 @ pg 2
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww awsm di loved it a lot!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome !! just luv these kind of stories ! ❤️

Thanks a lot for the PM
and update soon ! :)
👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
hey awesome...👏
i have read that...''THE THIRD LEVEL''...so your story is inspired by it...
great...so mr. aks is suffering from depression...
n his boring life n wife...o god...
n the incident...then sddnly he shivered his hands bcm cold, o gosh! Whos dat to do that joke with me? Meera died 2years before...😲
dear u scared me...well not u...but i m scared for a while...i thought...well u can understand...all that stupid stuff...😆
your story is too good...
well if u tell us a particular character than it becomes easy for us to imagine the characters...😊
n thanx for the pm...
n pm me next time too...😃
update soon...
luv u...
n HAPPY NEW YEAR...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx al n thnx ridzi 4 big cmments.
Nt replyn indivualy bt read al of ur cmmnts
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyy Radhi...! Never knew abt third level...

Bt ur story is veryyy gripping.. specially mr gowarikar and Meera part!!!!!


Suspense ha😉 Loved it... and do continue!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
characters kab introduce kr rahi ho?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
great start
seems like gripping suspense
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Third level??? wow yaar!! i loved it!!
pura padh kar aaj raat comment karoongi!! :)

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