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slgirl

@slgirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

my my..I just came across this FF and I am speechless... your words are so damn powerful ..it was awesome but have a small complain...but the updates are short 😉

brilliant!

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Brilliant update!

Thanks for the PM.. Update soon!😊

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asumi

@asumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

that was a beautiful ss!!! 😊

i loved your khushi's and arnav's versions of fairytails!!! too good!! 👏

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Nameera

@Nmyra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Awww it took my breath away when he said
""Because I wanted so badly for you to stay. And you've never- not given me what I wanted." It's lovely. I loved Khusi for her decision not to go and understand her husband so perfectly.
A Perfect end but do write an epilogue to this.
Thnx for PM...

Oppps I am so sorry i forgot to wish you for your coming b'day. Many many happy returns of the day in advance.

Edited by shonagudia - 13 years ago

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Superb ending !!! I have no words to describe it !!!!!
The use of words and the emotions,love and pain which you have described is simply heartouching !!!!!
LoveD the FF especially this last part and Arnav's last line !!!!!
Thnx sooo much for the pm !!!! Keep writing !!!