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Posted: 13 years ago
Wooowww.. I would post again n again to read the next part tomorrow... Great update. Plz pm me the next time
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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
Out of all of your ff's this one has got to be my most fav.. and you're ending it so soon..
As always you write beautifully- the way that you describe everything, their emotions and all just completely draws me in each time. Also no dialogues.. an update running only on thoughts and feelings- normally i'd get bored and skip over these types of bits and pieces but with this SS, or is it just your writing style, there wasn't any need for anything to be said. It just all seemed so right. I'm sorry i'm rubbish at trying to put what i want to say into words but you're awesome- simple.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

I'm so in love with these lines...


"But now, standing here in his arms, her forehead to his, her face palmed in his powerful hands, she realized that she didn't have to be. Because even if this stupid, wonderful, perfectly flawed man she loved did decide to martyr himself and push her away as penance.

As regret he's pushing himself away from her...can a man be better than Arnav..flawed but yet so perfect 😍

He didn't get to make that decision.

And if she had to follow him to the ends of the earth to convince him of that she would.

That's Khushi..love her for that determined thought!!

She would teach him how to forgive himself.

Just as he had taught her to create her own destiny.

And then she would teach him how to love her.

Just as he had taught her how to love him.

@purple: These are just amazing..loved the polarity of it!!

"Not even close to forever

But it was Khushi.

And for her - he would give up forever.

And that would be enough.

It always had been."

@purple: Loved the way he though of giving up everythin even the forever only for her. for his Khushi ❤️

Amazing update hun 👍🏼 👍🏼 If you can please do make it a bit longer coz I love reading long updates 😳 Just a request 😳

And thanks a lot for the pm too 🤗





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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it a lot awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh it is beautiful.. Just like a breath taking poem..
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Posted: 13 years ago
No ... I don't want Arnav to let her go. Please make hushi hold on.
BTW Loved the ss.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm speechless !!!! It was simply amazIng !!!!!
Loved the way you wrote and the way you descrIbed their emotions was simply superb !!!!!!!
Thnx soo much for the pm !!! Update soon !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is sooo intense...they didn't speak at all still they told their story sooo beautifully... Amazing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved this part . It was beautiful among all the parts so far.. And you are ending it soon😒
Loved each n every line of it. And specially when Khusi thought
"She would teach him how to forgive himself" It's beautiful👏




Continue soon.. You just left like that

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