White Flag ::IPKKND:: SS:: Complete - Page 15

Amazinggg.. story 👏👏

Sigh. Just...sigh...

You know that feeling of completion you get when you've JUSSTT finished that final bite of the decadent chocolate cake covered with boozy cherries and topped with shavings of decadent truffles? And the sense of well being, of being sated, of being HAPPY just floods over you, and you think I've done it, Ive eaten this monstrously good, fantastically satisfying, longed for treat, now I'll wait for the next one, but for now, im replete with a sense of happiness, of being stuffed, but in the best way? Yeah, that is what I feel right now. That dessert, the one lovingly created and then enjoyed with a sense of awe, thats your writing, and the gluttons, thats us readers.

Thanks for the best of all possible endings.

Now-could you get back to the grindstone of the other wonderful pieces I'm still hovering over, salivating for, and needing updates on?

hehe...Roman slavedrivers have got nothin on me... Thank you!

i am in love with this update.. just amazingly touchy.. thanks a lot..

wow! Wat a lng nd a beautiful ending.

Simply superb the last three lines are.

Lovd d way kushi decided nt to go away frm him.

It contains ful of intense love on eachothr.
Lovd it totaly and thanks 4 pm

That was a fab update and a perfect ending but I would love to read an epilogue too :)

Nice end finally they're with each other

Aww it was beautiful, do write an epilogue and Happy Birthday =)

Brilliant update. ThankGod Khushi did not listen to him and stayed.

Happy birthday!!!!