White Flag ::IPKKND:: SS:: Complete - Page 21

you write reallly well!!!! it's beautiful!

Okk...so i've been like literally been stalking every OS, SS, or FF you have written on you Index...

I just started to read White Flags...The first chapter was sooo emotional...the way you wrote how Anjali was broken down...with Arnav in fury...
and then Chapter 2...when she said that...all she had wished 6 monthz ago was to go far away from ASR...and now she can't...

Chapter 3...the flashback...him yearning to see the chirpy KKG that she was...the fact she lost every essense withing her after the marriage...how she was completely different from the Khushi he had met merely months ago...and then her saying that home is where the heart is...indicating that...her heart belonged to Arnav...and she can't leave that behind...as it would make her breathing falter...

Chapter 4...Ohhh gosshh...When she said she can bear anything from him...his anger...his annoyance...but not the fact that he blames the vulnerable victim... himself... I felt like i was gonna cry...cuz i could totally imagine Arnav in a dreadful state =|

Chapter 5- Khushi being terrified at the thought of not being with him...man...That was just sooo emotional...the yu portrayed how she started to adore him as she started to know him a little more better than before was just superb! to make him forgive himself </3 heart wrenching chapter!!

Chapter 6- Damn...! You made me cry!!! the way Arnav said that she desrves better than him...and her reply to what he said saying that you love me...I started crying Man!!! and that rarely happens o.O!! "I'm cherishing you." That simply said it all...the regretz...the pain...the guilt...now slowly turning into more than love

Epilogue- Awww...!!! hooowww cute!!!! I love how she said his hair looks like porcupine...how adorable..!!! and then "conspiracy to get her to stop making jalebi's" Hahahahahah!!! that had me on the floor!!!

P.S. Honestly...when i am reading any of your writingz...they make me wanna hold my breath...!! its just sooo intense...that if feels like if i breath a lil...the intensity would be gone...you know what i'm saying...cuz when i read this...i barely know what i m trying to say -.- lol

P.P.S. ok...now this is the longest reply post i've even written...yet (=

Hey, just read this and I absolutely LOVED it..you write wonderfully well...and I'm planning to read all of your work!

I read this SS in one go.. It is so amazingly beautiful.. Brilliant work, i must say..

Btw, just something i noticed.. You seen to be in love with the phrase 'in Morpheus's arms'.. You tend to use it a lot, dont you? I noticed in the other write-ups too!

Anyway, you are a very good writer.. Keep up the good work! :-)

amazing story...read it in one go...

The best best SS I've read!!! Honestly... let me know when you publish a book.. I'll be standing in line to Buy!!

You weave magic through words...loved it!

Loved this SS. The words you use just transports me into the SS.

Beautiful story dear loved reading it...