thread 2--maaneet ff -- is pyaar ko kya naam du

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nahtani88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM

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love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

yeh sasha sab jagah tapak padti hai...

wonderful update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Infinity.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

beautiful update...!!
loved it...

waiting for next
cont.soon

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

..dear...😛

4 Pming me..😛.

ur updates r just ,

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u done a dear..👏👏.

... dear

keep the job up dear..👏..

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

y adi wants to talk to her alone??

continue soon...

thnx for PM..

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janvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

hey

gr8 part..

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..

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priyanshi15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Part 41
Maan : adi kya kaam tha
Adi : sir, jo kaam apne diya tha, wo ab pura ho gya,
Aur wo gift bi tyaar hai
Maan : great job adi
Adi : thanks sir
Flashback in
Maan : geet is design me yha mistake hai
Jao isme changes krke mujhe dikhayo
Geet : yes sir,
Mein abhi dobara bnake lati hu
Maan : hmm
She left.
Maan(think): isne aaj bina mujhse zagda kiye meri baat manli
Kuch kaha tk nhi,
Tabiyat to thik hai na iski
Sasha enter in his cabin.
Sasha : mk, ye rhi Mr. Mehra ke project ki file
Saare designs tyaar hai.
Ek baar aap check kr lijiye.
Mk : hmm
Mk(think) : geet ko hua kya hai aaj
Sasha : MK
designs perfect hai na
Mk(think) : mujhe kya geet se is baare mein baat krni chaiye kya
Khi us din ki baat ko leke to abhi bi gussa to nhi hai
Sasha : mk
Mk(think) : no maan tu uska boss hai
Aur galati uski thi
She placed her hand on his shoulder.
Sasha : mk u are alright
Maan : hmm
Tum kuch kh rhi thi sasha
Sasha : Mk
Ye designs thik hai na
Maan : hmm
Sasha : ok Mk
Flashback out
Maan :geet
Kaka : beta wo to ghar pe nhi hai
Maan : ghar pe nhi hai
Kaka : bete wo kh rhi thi, ab wo apne ghar pe rahengi.
Jb tum yha ho, to wo is ghar me nhi , apne ghar pe rhengi
Maan : ok kaka,
Aap ghar ka aur apna dhyan rakhna
Kaka : ji beta
See below

Edited by maanetpriyanka - 13 years ago

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priyanshi15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Flashback in
Maan : geet ghar aa gya
Geet :
Maan : geet duniya kuch bi kahe,
tum janti ho,
mein janta hu,
Hamara pyaar kitna pakh(pavitra) hai.
Geet ab ghar chale
Geet : maan ye to apka ghar hai,
Mein to wha apne
He placed index finger on her lips.
Maan : geet mera nhi, ye hamara ghar hai,
Aaj se, jo mera hai
Wo tumhara bi hai
Geet
Geet : par wo ghar
Maan : jb tum kbhi akele yha ooty aayo na,
To wha rhna
Aur jb hum sath honge, to humare ghar me rahenge.
Aur waise geet, tumhe mein kbhi akele yha aane hi nhi dunga,
Hum hamesha sath ayenge.
Flashback out
Maan : geet mein hamare ghar aa rha hu
Aaj bi tumhe wo har pal yaad hai
Kash maine apne pyaar pe yakin kiya hota.
To galati se bi un palo ko dhokhe ka naam na deta
In house
Geet : dekha babaji
Unhe kaam ke aage kuch dikhata hi nahi hai
Mein yha unka wait kr rhi hu,
Aur wo..
Chado
Maan slowly comes in , without making any noise, he locks the door.
Geet : unhe aane de aaj
Mein unse baat hi nhi karungi
Geet turns & notice maan...
She was leaving..maan blocked her way. She looked at him.
(there was so much passion & care in his eyes)
Maan : geet mujhe tumse kuch baat krni hai
Geet : abhi nahi
Maan :abhi
(he still kept moving closer)
Geet : maan mujhe bhut kaam hai, baad mein baat karte hai
Maan : maine kaha na .. Abhi to abhi..
He was very close.. They could actually feel each other.
She tried dojjing him.
Maan put his hand around her neck, rested his head on her forehead.
His breath was falling on her eyes & hers were falling on his neck..
Tickling his senses, geet moved back...

part 42

Edited by maanetpriyanka - 13 years ago