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Posted: 13 years ago
toh geet maanse gussa hai...abb manao apne pyar ko...

awesome update...


loved it...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt update...

n thank u very much fr d lovely update n also fr d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesme dear
waitng 4 mre maaneet romance
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome :) but tooo short...
I want to know what happened next between Maaneet
me making baby face:|
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update dear love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update
loved it
Eagerly waiting for nxt
cont.soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 42





His breath was falling on her eyes & hers were falling on his neck...
Tickling his senses, geet moved back.
Maan : geet, itna naraz ho mujhse
Jaan isme meri kya galati hai,
Saari galati tumhari hai..

She come out from his embrance
Geet : meri,
Ye thik hai,
Galati kro khud, aur iljam mujhpe dal do..
Aap hamesha hi asa karte ho
Maan : jaan mein to time pe ghar aa gya tha,
Pr tum mujhe bina bataye yha aa gyi..

Geet : oh,
To ab mein apne ghar me bi nhi aa sakti,
Maan : nhi.. Geet..
I mean, asa nhi hai geet
Mujhe to acha laga tum hamare ghar me wapas aa gyi.

He held her hand & take in his both hand.
Maan : jaan jb kaka ne mujhe bataya to tum yha ho
Mein sbdo me byan nhi kr sakta
Mujhe kitni khushi mahsoos huyi
Galati to meri hai geet
Maine hi tumhe yha se jaane ko kaha tha,
Tumhe kuch bi khne ka mauka nhi diya
Mujhe to tumhe khud yha wapas lana chaiye tha
Tumse mafi magni chaiye thi

She placed her palm on his lips.
Geet : sshh
Aap to avyi senty(emotional) ho rhe ho..
Mujhe bi rula diya

He laughs.
Geet : aapko hassi aa rhi hai
Chaddo
Aapse koi baat hi nhi krni

Maan smiled, geet looked at maan confused.
Geet(think) : mein yha gussa hu, aur ye hass rhe hai.
He raised his fingers to brush on her face.
Maan : geet, ek baat batao, tum itna gussa ho kyu
Geet : ye lo,
Aapko ye bi nhi pata

Maan pulling her immensely closer, he planted his lips on hers and mumbled over her lips " sorry jaan, tumhe intzaar krwaya"
She crushed her face into his neck, hugging him tight.
Geet : sorry maan, mein avyi aap pe gussa ho gyi,
Koi kaam aa gya honga, tbhi to aap late ho gye
His fingers crushed into her waist while her arms snaked over his neck, he kissed her hard, their lips just licked and sucked onto each other.. The saliva transfered from one mouth to another. While hands were going crazy for more and more..going insanely passionate,
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See below
Edited by maanetpriyanka - 13 years ago
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Geet bite his lips hard and maan's hand waist into her kurti as a reaction, her skin jolted in sudden pleasure as she felt maan's fingers dugging onto her bare waist.
She pulled him even closer and moved into him mouth for a breath taking kiss.
He kissed her hard & pulled out.
He picked her up in his arms & took her to the bed.
Maan rubbing his lips on earlobe then he planted a deep kiss on the skin just below her ear and next maan dipped his lips into hers.
Geet's closed her eyes in delight ... When she felt her lips being sucked , licked... He kissed her so passionately.. She felt his hands snaking her waist wildly closer to her.. She felt almost crushed into him in his strong chest, his fingers restlessly pulled away that cloth that was stopping him from touching her bare skin... He pulled her top almost up and snaked his arm around her waist , dugging his fingers into her back...
Till she was tight again his body.. "maan" she moaned in pleasure and kissed him with same passion.
Edited by maanetpriyanka - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
original posted by...
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uff yaar
kha aa ke rok diya
contt soonnn
suprbbb updt


koi nhi ab enjoy karle aage ki update
priyanshi15 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
original posted by...
love2_soma

toh geet maanse gussa hai...abb manao apne pyar ko...

awesome update...


loved it...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt update...

n thank u very much fr d lovely update n also fr d pm...



thank u so much...maan geet ko mna hi lenga...

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