CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 50

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi,
I miss your story so much that I read it again a few days back. Please continue writing it and I'm waiting for the next part.
Thanking you.

With Regards,
Kanika
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Posted: 8 years ago
waiting for update
please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Haan dii..please ab kar bhi do update..:(
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Posted: 8 years ago
will post this month only guyz.


work in progress.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pranita1202

will post this month only guyz.


work in progress.

thank you so much will be waiting for it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
super pm me if u update
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

yeah yeah yeah!...i get it, surprise dont even start to cover it -the feeling of seeing me here... Sooper surprised to have ur darshan

"boom!" - may b this will work yeah?

oh my god,...its good to back after such long time,... i missed u!...and ananya!... and pihu n ms. D'SOUZA,... they missed u too

so many thing to talk about di!...BUT FIRST THING FIRST!.( see i have matured, em talking sense!) muahhh aapki baatein hummein hamesha pasand hai n pyaari lagti hai

part19-

first i wanna give a bear hug to ananya!... she is so hurt.
its epic, the amount of pain she endured since her childhood!...but di!...stop this soon,..
she is so fragile n yet she survives!... she outlast every damn hell, hatred, hero, or anti-anti (villians)... ...

i feel so frustated with this man-veer!...damn you dude!...
well he lost his wife not due to fault of his, but due to will of god!...(as the story yets to b unfold) but losing ananya!- IF LOSING ANANYA...that will b solely his fault
i hope this situation here proves to b alarm to him from his sleep of indifference,insensitivity of ananya.

so di- during by A.W.O.L from this forums, i read many novels... many many novels actually!.

and there was a thing you wrote equivalent to professional writer-

The tears which were burning at the back of her eyes few moments ago seemed to have evaporated. Because there was no moisture in her eyes; they were just .. Lifeless ,deprived of any emotion.



It is said that eyes are the mirror of heart. If that's suppose to be the truth ,her heart must have been caught in a ice age or drought.


your metaphor with ice-age!-⭐️⭐️⭐️ this was soul of the whole update- excellent depiction!.
kudoz!.

👏👏👏

ms. dsouza- continues to b cute.
and shasha- still continues to infuriate me!... my msg to her - GET A LIFE BITCH!...

well i really hope veer pulls out his head from his douchebag-ness!.
em angey at him- straight n simple.
his past is certainly is no excuse for his action for ananya!- my angel!.



during my so called AWOL i read a novel- the unwanted wife by natasha anders-... well is u have not read it- please do read!... u will love it di!. (link-
http://www.freebookol.net/The_Unwanted_Wife/index.html



will b posting next comment soon





Thanks rashmi love u

u r always encouraging n help mi improve

I Love Unwanted wife natasha anders is awesome

read her ruthless proposition.
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Posted: 8 years ago


Previously: She gingerly got up and was walking off.Half way across the poolside,She turned back as veer called after her.

"Ananya"
Suddenly she was facing her knight shining in moonlight clad in black full sleeved Tshirt.
Looking every bit of Prince charming.

She in her bedraggled self ,washed off complexion,loose shirt and long cotton skirt ,hair plaited yet they were frizzed out.

Suddenly veer extended his hand "Friends.Kya mujhse dosti karogi"


PART 22

Ananya owlishly looked at him. A bit perplexed. Then a tiny smile broke on her lips and finally she let his large palm envelop her bony fingers and accepted his friendship.

Replying with a full on grin Veer tugged her hand , brought her into the house finally reaching the kitchen. Without a protest Ananya came with him.

"So dosti ki shuruwat kuch mithe se honi chahiye "

"Huh.."

Veer effortlessly slid behind the kitchen counter turning the flame on, kept the milk to boil. Retrieving a chocolate bar from fridge, while breaking it into pieces ,he popped one in his mouth, after placing the bowl full of chocolate in microwave to melt .

Two mugs of hot chocolate were ready with still some left over in the pan , he joined Ananya who was following his every movement mesmerized,

Taking the seat beside ananya, he placed the cups on the breakfast island .

"This is my specialty, hum jab Darjeeling mein the , aur exams hote then everyone used to junk on coffee but humare study circle mein toh Special hot chocolate by Veer used to help us to burn the candle from both sides and study."

He told her with all the boyish pride. With few strands of hair falling over his forehead made him every bit of the chocolate boy for whom girls would swoon .

He was both Devilishly handsome with bit five'o clock stubble,ready to blow up if any one pissed him off and Boyishly beautiful with clean shaved look having a calm aura.

He was Sun and Shade. With loving warmth but also heated anger.

Shading people he loved from all the bad things in the world.

But also shutting down people with his indifference.

She was hopelessly in love with every aspect of him. She was absorbing his every move every hand gesture as he was narrating his few antics with Vicky as both of them were in college.

"...And Vicky aur main jaise taise bach gaye pakde jaane se .

"Arrey you haven't even taken a sip. Don't mind me saying but my ego will be hurt agar tumhe meri specialty achi nahi lagi toh"

Ananya shyly took a sip, closing her eyes she savored the explosion of flavors and texture on her taste buds. It was just sublime. Heavenly...

A crooked smile formed on his lips watching Ananya.

Opening her eyes she smiled at veer. "It's nothing like I have ever tasted in a very long time"

In an amicable silence. They spent the time Ananya finishing the her drink

"you got some your lip" without giving a thought Veer wiped off the access chocolate beside her lip with his thumb. Ananya hitched her breathe at his touch.

The moment was gone in seconds .Did he noticed she was ready to pass out at his touch.

"I guess you should go to bed. It's late".

Agreeing both of them retired their respective bedroom.

Veer en route checked on Piyu, who slept soundly before going to his room

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The summer were heated and having a havoc over us mortals.

Sasha & Mukul were popping like popcorns over hot pan.

It didn't help that Mukul' s face was bloated, resembling cosmetic surgery gone wrong. His lips were swollen and jaw dislocated, nothing which cannot be fixed. He was lucky Veer didn't paint his face black & blue. Now after receiving required medical attention for him. The evil trio was in the Drawing room of Khuraana Bungalow, muddling over the fact that how they had been so close to getting Ananya back and gulping all her wealth .Now here they were twiddling their fingers at least figuratively .Sasha was pacing over her ridiculously high heels ,clad in designer little dress. It helps to play dress up when you are stressed and there looms a fog of being Homeless & Penniless.

"Mom did u see that man (hot hunky veer) , Himmat kaisi huyi uski humare ghar aake aise behave karne ki. Look at Mukul baby's face".

Naintara was trying to zone her daughters chatter out, they had big fish to fry rather than mulling over these small setbacks.

"Enough" she enunciated in calm creaky voice.

We cannot just lay back, let Singh's merrily takeover OUR money."

"What can we do Mom. She is 21 & legally owns everything and Her Husband won't let us touch a penny. After yesterday I think our remaining funds will be frozen"

"Aisa kuch nahi hone wala. Right now we don't have to worry about that we are covered on that front"

But we need to attack .Iss baar aisi chal chalni hai k Kanoon khud Ananya ko humare pass layega.

"Who the hell is Kanoon?"

Naintara thanked her good stars that she had enough brains for all her family.

Veer just culminated his meeting with his legal & Financial advisers .He needed to have a clear vision of the Khurrana empire's current scenario. The Empire was boom in the market. But cannot always too sure. Sometimes the glitches within the system has to found out.

The finance looked good but there were a small margin of unaccountable fund's outflow.

However small he had to make sure all transaction were transparent & no room for error.

It was a long way to go, taking over Khurraana Empire & Handling once sinking Singh Industries hand in hand wasn't easy task.

He was taking one day at a time and putting his instincts & business knowledge to use. It was imperative for him to trust the people he worked with. Hence he was filtering through the management & hiring new people whom he shall trust.

At the end of the day your Company as good as people who work in it.

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Ensconced under the Pink Princess blanket Piyu was bored and refusing to have lunch. Seema was trying persuade her to come out & eat something.

"No. I want to go to school" she huffed, sitting up.

"Piyu beta. Next week se toh jaana hi hai. Abhi gharpe time spent karo"

"No I am bored" she repeated her mantra scrunching her small nose

"Accha baba. Ek kaam karte main tumhe ek Kahani sunati hoon."

This peaked Piyu's interest. So Seema cajoled her into eating lunch by enticing her with Story of Mysterious Land of Fairies who lived happily beyond the Rainbow while feeding her at the same time.

Story was over & lunch was eaten but instead of being drowsy piyu was bunch of restless kiddie energy. And Seema didn't have the time to entertain Piyu entire afternoon.

"Beta Mujhe doosre kaam hai I cannot play Tea party with you"

"But chichi" Piyu's version of Chachi (Aunty) "Table is set and they are ready to have tea". Talking about the ensemble adorable furry toys & dolls seated around the Toy Pink table.

"But piyu... ".

"So you think it will work"Mukul enquired with a slight lisp, broken jaw can do that to you.

"Yes I am sure if we can prove that the marriage took place by coercion we have a chance to get it annulled" the lawyer replied.

"But Ananya statement that it wasn't the case makes our claim flawed, it will not hold any water" Mukul stated.

"For that we have to do some fabrications..."Naintara forecasted.

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Part 23


So guys I am banking updates to give u all regular doses of Ananya n Veer.



I soo want jump the story to romance.

but i m giving it time.


In Cindy world one month has not yet over till anu n veer marriage its just I m lazy bum that from 2012 😆 one month is not yet finished.



Do give me feedback on what u all wanna see

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Originally posted by: Poo_2208

Are U continuing?

Very happy to see U back😃


thanks dear

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