CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 52

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Posted: 8 years ago

Thx maxii

love that we got a new muratian her.muahh

spread murat fever everywhere😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

wow its amazing...welcome back pra
oh i missed veer and ananya so.much and little cutie pie piyu..love u for this story
pls update it soon


Thx tejjo

muahhh.

Congrats on completing Kaisa yeh pyaar hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hope we get a sequel or special update for Aarav n mahi!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonia_prc

I read this ff Earlier in 2014

Then I guess it updated late n I missed coming here
Back to my senses now n started it frm d last tht I read tht was silavasa trip
Love this story
Can veer comb ananya hair moving his fingers all over her head? It will be super sensuous 😛 😆
Pls don't rush d romance part
It's best untill everything is half told unsure
Loved veer possessive part.. Hoping to see tht more

Y veer has a daughter she irritates me too LOL gosh m.so obsessed with RT MC I still want them.to be together in spite of them.being married now (ofcrse not to each other :((( BT still wish they were dating somewhere in parallel universe LOL)

Plsss update soon
M a fan too... Love u guyz I have tears tht RT MC fans are still here count me in too

Sorry for lengthy post
I never posted here sab ek saath likh dia 😆


Thanks sonia.

Glad u came back to the FF and lets me know that u liked it.

Thax for the comment With encouragement from murat fans i can share my version of murat story with u all

As per veer's daughter😆 everyone was also like 😕 y baby rajat has a kid😆.

EKTA to jaake pakdo tere liye mein 19 yr rajat had a baby😆 usise idea aaya.

But lets see aage kya hota hai
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pranita1202


thx dear muahh

yes wanted to complete the the scene but lazy me

I really want to see VAnya's romance soon,but I want some of their cute moments of friendship too :) And not only that, I want to see some cute scenes between Anu & Piyu too..I hope Anu breaks her shackles soon with the help of Veer !!⭐️ loved this line.






God dii..aap tadpa dete ho sach me ..kitne dinon baad reply kiya..I thought you have forgotten me ya phr mere comment ka length dekhkar pareshan ho gyi 😳
Please update,diii <3..waiting for ages :/
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Posted: 8 years ago
I just loved part 22 especially the way tried to build a friendship between them. That was so sweet of him. Loved it. But in trio ka kuch nhi ho sakta na? Huh mukul has a briken jaw yet he has to take panga with veer.. matlab had hi hai besharmi ki bhi :p
Anyway update soon and what about Taming of shrew???
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaidehi_1924


God dii..aap tadpa dete ho sach me ..kitne dinon baad reply kiya..I thought you have forgotten me ya phr mere comment ka length dekhkar pareshan ho gyi 😳
Please update,diii <3..waiting for ages :/


😆 no poonam comment length dekhke nahi dari.🤗
Update comming up.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajat_Fanatic

I just loved part 22 especially the way tried to build a friendship between them. That was so sweet of him. Loved it. But in trio ka kuch nhi ho sakta na? Huh mukul has a briken jaw yet he has to take panga with veer.. matlab had hi hai besharmi ki bhi :p

Anyway update soon and what about Taming of shrew???

thx dear😊

trio toh total shameless hai.

Taming of the shrew its in process,
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Posted: 8 years ago


Previously-

"Yes I am sure if we can prove that the marriage took place by coercion we have a chance to get it annulled" the lawyer replied.

"But Ananya statement that it wasn't the case makes our claim flawed, it will not hold any water" Mukul stated.

"For that we have to do some fabrications..."Naintara forecasted.

PART 23

The sun had reached its peak and it was after 12, yet Ananya hadn't left the room. She was awake when Veer peaked his head inside the room after few futile attempts of knocking didn't receive any answer.

She was afraid he might hear her heartbeats which were echoing in her ears,

Whenever veer was near.

She was asleep on her side with her back facing the door.

After a moment when she was alone she heaved a sigh of relief .She wasn't ready to face Veer. She didn't catch even a bit of sleep night, her thoughts were clouded only by one person. Whom she knew she didn't have the right to dream about.

"He accepted you as a Favor She needed to get this in her head and move forward.

After few hours she had composed herself and she was reaching for the door when she was intercepted by curious black doe eyes.

"Hi Do you want to join my tea party

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"So gentlemen on the closing note I had to mention this could be a milestone for us. We shall expect nothing but the best"

On this note the meeting was adjourned. This was going to be Veer's dream project.

He was planning to build a resort which would one link of chain, he aim to build.

USP was that they were going to provide a Home away from home.

With varied features from all the rudimentary essentials of the all Generic resorts luxuries .But what was going to set them apart from others that each resort was going to assimilate the best feature of the location.

They were planning to use the Uniqueness of the region to their benefits rather bulldozing over the natural beauty & building a Five-Star hotel.

After a long time he was feeling passionate about something.

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This was a critical scenario. Why didn't people just legalize everything and put it on a piece of paper rather than make transaction with just verbal confirmation,

Ajay failed to understand

His mentor Alok rai was of a opinion that "A man's handshake is a good as legal bond between two parties.

Because of such notions property disputes were tricky matter and if your defending the side with no paper work it becomes more difficult.

Ajay was about to knock on Mr Rai's door, but retracted his hand when he released his mentor wasn't alone in his cabin.

"Veer, it's all done and set .The capital will transferred in name of Singh's constructions by end of the week. Best of luck

"Thanks Mr. Rai .Without you handling all the legalities this won't have happened so Fast.

Finally after a handshake Veer bid adieu and stepped out the office.

Missing the fact that he was being watched by Ajay ,hiding in the shadows ,he entered the elevator.

Across the street the lens of the camera zoomed in capturing Veer's candid shots getting out of the building and driving off.

The Camera man after dialing his cell , spoke "Yes he has just left the lawyers office. Don't lose him

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"So...

Ananya took a deep a breathe and recollected "Elsa,Anna,M...moana.

"YES. Finally you got it right. "

Piyu had got Ananya to accept a invite to her tea party, if you call dragging someone by hand to one's room , chirping constantly about the fun they going to have on way.

So after the tea party with her stuffed buddies Pooh bear, Fluffy rabbit dubbed as Mr. Bunny ,Purple elephant named Monty and various assorted toy.

Piyu introduced Ananya all of their friends.

Now she was giving educative lesson to Ananya about all the new Disney characters from Picture Book.

Ananya reminisced her childhood which was pure joy with her Mom & Dad.

Those memories comforted her when she lost her Mom and years later her father as well.

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Ajay was enraged, disgusted .What sort of Person this Veer Singh was?

Squandering away the Money, to re-establish his family business, which was rightfully Ananya's. Thinking of her brought a smile on his face. She was such a pure soul and everyone wanted to exploit her. He still wasn't sure it was a right thing to Marry her off to Veer.

He entered Alok Rai's cabin.

"A word Pls.

"Ha ajay, aao aao baitho.Batao Kya baat karni

Ajay queried about his complex case regarding property dispute.

He received a Logical and on point inputs from Mr Rai which reflected his thought process & years of Experience.

Satisfied after his doubt was relegated .He planned to leave. But he couldn't stop himself from asking.

"It was Mr Singh who just left

"'Ha Veer needed some legal advice regarding the new project going to start

"With Her Money" Ajay instigated

"Ajay Kya kehna hai tumhe.Saaf saaf kaho"Alok insisted

Ajay "I didn't mean to snoop. But I overheard Khurana industries would be financing this project. Isn't this unfair...

Alok "Ajay are you hungry

Ajay was bemused with change in topic.

Ajay "Mm.I haven't had my lunch yet

Alok "Lets go out for lunch I am too confined in the cabin since morning.For tumhare saare sawaalo ka jawab bhi de denge"


Part 24





Edited by pranita1202 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Please update..Dii :)
Waiting for ages
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh..I just saw part 23 which I realized that I hadn't read till now..silly me :/
RES for now..will UNRES it soon :)

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