CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73

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surbhijain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#471

Really awesome

Beginning of friendship

And now waiting for more

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#472

Great
Great
Great

Finally knight in the shining armour is wanna be friends with her...
Wow

Thanks 4 d pm

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RajatMugdha4evr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#473

gr8 that you reopened and your continuing FF

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#474

WOW!! beautiful update dear...loved it

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Apoorva

@Rajat_Fanatic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#475

Finally we havr an update here. Yohooo!!!

Veer wants to he friends with Ananya yaya...Happy Times are here again...Big Thanks For the update...😳

Are you planning to continue with your other ff's? 😳

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#476

yeah yeah yeah!...i get it, surprise dont even start to cover it -the feeling of seeing me here...

"boom!" - may b this will work yeah?

oh my god,...its good to back after such long time,... i missed u!...and ananya!... and pihu n ms. D'SOUZA,...

so many thing to talk about di!...BUT FIRST THING FIRST!.( see i have matured, em talking sense!)

part19-

first i wanna give a bear hug to ananya!... she is so hurt.

its epic, the amount of pain she endured since her childhood!...but di!...stop this soon,..

she is so fragile n yet she survives!... she outlast every damn hell, hatred, hero, or anti-anti (villians)... ...

i feel so frustated with this man-veer!...damn you dude!...

well he lost his wife not due to fault of his, but due to will of god!...(as the story yets to b unfold) but losing ananya!- IF LOSING ANANYA...that will b solely his fault

i hope this situation here proves to b alarm to him from his sleep of indifference,insensitivity of ananya.

so di- during by A.W.O.L from this forums, i read many novels... many many novels actually!.

and there was a thing you wrote equivalent to professional writer-

The tears which were burning at the back of her eyes few moments ago seemed to have evaporated. Because there was no moisture in her eyes; they were just .. Lifeless ,deprived of any emotion.

It is said that eyes are the mirror of heart. If that's suppose to be the truth ,her heart must have been caught in a ice age or drought.

your metaphor with ice-age!-⭐️⭐️⭐️ this was soul of the whole update- excellent depiction!.

kudoz!.

👏👏👏

ms. dsouza- continues to b cute.

and shasha- still continues to infuriate me!... my msg to her - GET A LIFE BITCH!...

well i really hope veer pulls out his head from his douchebag-ness!.

em angey at him- straight n simple.

his past is certainly is no excuse for his action for ananya!- my angel!.

during my so called AWOL i read a novel- the unwanted wife by natasha anders-... well is u have not read it- please do read!... u will love it di!. (link-

http://www.freebookol.net/The_Unwanted_Wife/index.html

will b posting next comment soon

Edited by sweetsanyo - 9 years ago

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#477

time to cmnt on part 20- really carzy!!...em feeling so good!...may em flying.

okey- only truth- i was damn pissed with veer- no doubt, but he did take my advice- the rtmc love guru!- so yeah em okey now- but that dosent mean this all suffix for every hurting word uttered to ananaya by him-... that dosen't suffix SORRY!.

and the way u described his act of containing his composure, i was like- NOW IS NOT THE TIME!...DARE U NOT BE ANGRY ON KHURANNA's ...

He seemed cool ,calm ,composed with not a single emotion giving away his motives.This is how mukul found him when he answered the door.But he didn't get much time to gauge Veer's expression's or lack of it because he was shoved on the floor holding a bloody nose as veer pummeled his fist into mukul's face.

BUT THE RED PART- that totally blew me,...well literally it blew mukul... but damn funny man!.

yeah veer- i like your pleasantries exchange with mukul... still laughing it off!. Way too good method to "compose"

The warmth of her breathes against his neck was only factor reassuring him from going ballistics on her so called family.

this one- i loved it!!...very sweetly written.

the wicked witch of east end

this one again- u caught me in laughter!.. i feel like crazy!..

its a serious scene- veer acting an AVANGING LOVER!..and all... but mukul n shasha- god this shasha- ridiculous!!.

veer- his dialogue- vajann tha bohot- bhaari bhaari hindi dialogue- certainly the wicked witch of east end got the msg, no doubt...

i really think uske itney bhaari hindi dialogues sunkey mere aaj ka hindi dialogue quota poora hogaya h!

next cmnt coming up!.

oh yes!- i didnt miss he said "patni" ...🥳

Edited by sweetsanyo - 9 years ago

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#478

em feeling right now--... something between shock n surprise... but more towards shock than surprise, its like majorly shock with element of surprise!!!... - u get right di!...

finally veer n ananya!!- on talking term... after 20 chapters!!..

starting from start-

mrs.dsouza- i like u , really like u, but your suspenseful dialogue of today- its scary madam!!..

just plz- let it not b another hurtful relavation of veer's past!...

dont u thinkk ananya has already has her quota of "feels like bullets to heart n burns like furnance in mind" relavations of 7 life times!.

she is not a puppet- people should actually realise she is an individual- though she has a weak brain, drug addicted brain, but not her mind ----works fine,...no one had given her a chance- a proper chance mind u for her show that she is not a kid( that situation with pihu blew in worng direction, not her fault, ok people...madam dsuoza!.)... she has alot to learn agreed, but if not letting her how could she learn. i want some scene which tells the world that annaya has a back-bone...plzz di!!..

another void i feel- againn it was ananya who reached him out...its always ananya !!..

good thing he invited her.

They shared mutual silence bonded by marriage yet stranded in different islands of loneliness

the above phrase- i see the irony!!😔😔😭- and i dont like it at all!!...

by the way- as a reader- the line is beautifully written!- ⭐️⭐️

(and i really want u to read the unwanted wife if u have not read!)

there was a moment of stupidity-

"Veer its not your fault in whatever happened".

oh yeah!!!!! ?????/ then whose fault it was...

why r u so sweet ananya!.

and there was a moment of super duper cutey cutey pie pie-ness

" Its just that being in dark, you came as a ray of hope to me" With sad smile she continued "My knight in shinning armor on white horse.And I forgot the reality."

she should never come out of her crush for veer- we will always get this sweet scene then.

she is way to straight forward- she is so transparent , there is no filter between her mind n mouth, or i should say mind heart n n mouth!.

this straightness- i dont want anyone taking benefit of it!..

her knight shining in moonlight clad in black full sleeved Tshirt.

Looking every bit of Prince charming.

v/s

She in her bedraggled self ,washed off complexion,loose shirt and long cotton skirt ,hair plaited yet they were frizzed out.

i see the irony again- but who cares!!- life is full of irony! THEY ARE MEANT TO BE!... as simple as that!.

and i like my bedraggled, frizzed ananya!...any problem??

Suddenly veer extended his hand "Friends.Kya mujhse dosti karogi"

More to come..

reaalllyyy bro! *SARCASM*

she is your wife...and friendship- it better be more than just friendship!..

god em such a sucker of will be soon in love- love story!...😳

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Apurva Deep

@Poo_2208

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#479

RES

-Edited-

@pranita

Read Ur FF,its really wonderful 😊

It really is a modern Cindrella story indeed,Ananya being the young,innocent,beautiful girl who had submitted herself to her fate & Veer being her shining armour in d knight😃

The attraction is Veer's daughter,Piyu,too,love her innocence😊

Please do continue it,if possible,its a sincere request😊

Edited by Poo_2208 - 8 years ago

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pranita1202

@pranita1202

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: tejjo
finally u updated
waiting for this up...such a lovely update...but too short...but its ok...like it vry much...so now they are friends..i know she will agree for his friendship...n good description of prince charming loved it..i hope love will blossom soon between them

update soon

muaah thanks dear

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