CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

kahan h vo bmw.. mujhe bhi usme ek camera fit karna h..
haye... kya lucky car h jo veerendra ka romantic.. thoda thoda romntic avatar dekh rhi h... 🤣 🤣

koi nhi..
veerendra devta ka ye rupp bhi sirf kismat walo ko milta h... 😆 anu ki kismat rocksss n veer ki too to get anu
gud prt is... ananaya ko ye darshan dekhne shuru ho gye h...
n uss HER.. SO CALLED HER ne bhi dekha h...
i hate that HER di.. usko hate karo ,aage jake aur hate karoge
mujhe pans nhi...
kyun..
u noe it d best...

mugdha sote hoe kya sweet lagti h na... awww
uss coat ka bhi shukriya jo mugdha k uper usse blanket ki tarah kaam kiya... coat ki jai
haye, ye co-incidence per co-incidence..

o nbo..
ono.
o no.
o no..
o no...


mei bhull gyi...
arey uss ring ko bhi shukriya, jo veer ki AM mei time per girr gyi thi... ring mata ki jai
ek aur co-incidence...

aise hi co-incidence se pori lov stry bann jayegi... universe is getting them together
haye.. me in dreamland...
akhein timtimaa rahi h... twinkling di... ohooo chamkili aaken aapki⭐️

so aage chalo plz...

oo teri.. sirr per lagg gyi anu k..
veer tumhe gadi chalani nhi aati h kya.. driving lessons jake lo veer
usse chott mardi..
meri anu sweetie ko chott maa di...
gande driver...

ok chalo maaf kiya.. kudh aaker bandage bhi kiya na isliye... veer thanking u for giving him maafy
haan haan.. ach se phunkk maro.. dheere dheere.. rashu ka romantic first aid clasess
thoda romantic way mei bhai...


han, chalo.. age drive karo..
zoommm...
wrummm... ye kya h..
car chalne ki aavazz h bhai... wroom awaaz karti hai gadi i thot jhuk jhuk jhuk karti hai😆


anu ro rhi h...
veer music bandh karo..
she is crying... mera cutie pie


ohooo!..
anu ko aage beithne k liye invite kiya..party 🥳

i loved it.
mujhe koi cheemti kato yaar. 😵 😵 😵 chimti kaisi lagi
aage ka cmnt bhi type karna h..
i loved it di...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

wow.. kya plesant ghar h

aapke places usualyy unbelievable hoti h..
aisa kuch india mei tho paka nhi hoga.. arrey mere imagination ke vacation spots mein hote hai n ekta kapoor ke shows me bhi hote hai😆
i lovd ur choice alwayz..

care taker aunty is cool,
i like her...
yahan tho aapne ek dum

cupid's ki sena taiyaar ker di h cupid army 2 get our prince n princess together
vicky..
sia.
seema aunty...
now dis care taker...

ananya's army.. iska naam rakha h maine... wah wah kya naam hai

versus...
veer's selfish family.. 😆 😆 😆

lovely ud..
lovely desc. of anu's condt... thankuuu
veer is still missing dat HER..
butr vo uss HER ko bhi iss house mei nhi laya..
dats speciall yup special things 4 special anu
i loved dis fact...

kya cute ladki h ye anu
i lov her...

she is so simply awesome n beautiful... 🤗 4 loving anu

veer bhi kaam nhi h...
chalo outing karne chale... yehh outing

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

oye..
ye kaun uthyha le gya meri sweetie ko.. 😭 😭
chaodo usse.. leave her else rashu will b after u wid the hockey sticks
plz..
gande gunde..
gunde tho gande hi haote h..
flop joke i know.. purani movies type "chodo chodo bhagwan ke liye chodo"
den wat do u except...
itni panic situation mei bhi mei ek acha joke maro... 😆 😆
cm on di..
abhi isese hi kaan chalao... thik hai

veer ne bacha liya, haye haye..
veer the savipour.. tu mera hero
kya fit ho raha h na title veer k name k saath..
perfecto lagg raha h.. yup
loved wat happened next...
di u hav redefined- JUNGLE MEI MANGAL... 😳 😳 shukriya

hoye hoye...
mei sisese jyada cmnt nhi karungi...
verna u di's wil say ki mei bigad gyi hun... 🤣 🤣
i loved it but..
veer tumahgri biwi h vo
y u hesitate so much..
meer rhi h vo.. save her... veer is turmoil ab kar bhi kya sakte hai
finally..
it happened wat i wanted,,,
she trust veer so much...
eyes open, saw veer, assured life, eyes closed... dats our princess ,lovely n trusting

dis scene ws magicval..
lovd it baDLY. 🤗 🤗


den, veer ko bhi saans pr saans aayi... yup. u have already dedicated the song
she is safe now

veer u did it dude...

anu kissed his lips... 😳 😳


o yes, mei resuscitate ko bilkul nhi bhuli..
ye kuch hadd tak intentional thi..
but i want it romantic..
so kiss ws half till now.. yesss


lovely n sweltering ud..
diloved it badly
i u know hw much i luv such thngs...


amaing language. as usaul..
desc ws quick.. i loved dat thng most
lov u
miss u
thnx fr mega dose

made ma saturday

thanks rashu





4 loving veer and ananya



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

oh!apni to lottery lag gyi
five ud ek saath
lovely
superb
mindblowing
cnt believe ki anu or veer ke bich itna sb
thanks step mom
usne hi kuch milaya tha anu ke juice me
or anu phoch gyi veer ke saath dreamland me
honeymoon !mene socha nhi tha ki wo kbhi honeymoon par v jayege
bt again thanks to stepmom
jo hota h acche ke liye hota thats right
n last me eham eham .
its lovely

mene sb ek baar me nhi padha bt abhi mene dobara padha to jyada maza aya

ud soon
plzzz

luv u


ria technically kuch hua nahi hai 😳😉

but stepmom ki toh jai 4 being the revverse cupid

thanks sooo much 🤗 4 the awesome blosom comment

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Posted: 12 years ago


thanks di 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sultanahabeeb

hi dear

i dint get ur pm itz ok iam really happy that u remember me nd send pm later
i loved it really u r amazing but dear anu ki shopping kyun nahi karey. i want to see her in brand new avtar plzzz change her
once again i loved it nd thank u
nd up utna bhi long nahi hai kyun ki itzzz is a very late up
try to continue soon


anu will get heathy ,then confident then sooper stunning

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great update

thank god veer saved ananya


thank u dear

glad dat u liked it

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shruja

Part 16(a)
at last our veenya started their journey yup
but who is following them?
its so nice of veer to invite her in boutique
heheheh all gals guessing veer
n anu unawere of that thought all guessing her
heheheh god how much innocent she is!! they r eyeing ur hubbby darling anu has no clue all line maring her hubby😆
so fairy's entered i mean farida aunty
i liked her very much n loved u choose farida jalal ji!! thanksss
liked she is egar to see her DIL even when veer not interested so much
yeh u should try some new collection!! (dieing to see when farida aunty will groom ananya but she should be little healthy before tht) yup heath ,confidence than new wardrobe
hey whts tht in orange juice? did tht jeep follower have connection with some1 in farida aunties boutique?
part 16(b)
i wanted vicky had more talk with ananya!! another time!! next tym vicky will talkj
thanks to bmw engine driver n tht juice heheheheh
and many more thanks to ananya's engagement ring!!
which saved her from naintara's goon

all the objects zindabad😊

Part 16(c)
So our loveguru vicky noticed love for veer in anu's eyes at first site!1
u r damn right vicky!! hope veer realise it soon!! lets hope 4 d best
and hope dr. sia also soon will come to groom our ananya!! yup
i don't wanted to know abt veer's 1st love i m not bother abt it
but as vicky's info i m very delighted (hehhee wicked laugh) 🤣 🤣
so she is with him from college days! and din't like his grandfather's car! but i think ananya would not have any problem of all these thing with that too when veer is with her!! this is decency of her n i loved it very much!!! yup anu is angel 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shruja

Part 16(d)
loved their road trip!
poor anu missing her father

n loved her very undstanding girl she was n now too!!
liked scene of seat belt
she feeling every little moment with him
awesome description
loved the story for haveli n bunglow!
so he din't brought SHE here!1
i m very happy for this fact!!
liked tht kamla!! seems she will make anu healthy very soon
heheheh veer took ananya for site seeing
fearing he will get burnt n disaster food by kamla!!
beautiful description of site seeing n pics used
ohh wht kind of these wanna bees!! so smart for their age! wannabess kabhi nahi sudhrengi
Part {e}
loved whole jungle scene n its description!!
so stepmom told goons to kidnap ananya!!
loved the whole description of fight scene!!
could imagine rt n mc doing tht scene!! with their latest pics!
ohh poor anu fall in waterfall! 😭 bechhari anu
so atlast he decided to save her!
loved it most if could happen after they feeling for them
but scene was apt n described very well thankuuu
act of anu comming out of consciousness little n speaking his name n last scene of kissing him was so cute!!! loved it very much!
thanks for such beautiful scenes n update!!!



thanksss 4 the support 🤗


and the amzing comment

it helps me to keep going


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sultanahabeeb

Truly loved it, sorry 4 late comment but i truly love ur all rtmc ffs plz up soon waiting 4 next part nd remember me in ur pms thank u and bye take care



thanks dear

glad dat u liked it


love u

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