CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 16(d)
loved their road trip!
poor anu missing her father
n loved her very undstanding girl she was n now too!!
liked scene of seat belt
she feeling every little moment with him
awesome description
loved the story for haveli n bunglow!
so he din't brought SHE here!1
i m very happy for this fact!!
liked tht kamla!! seems she will make anu healthy very soon
heheheh veer took ananya for site seeing
fearing he will get burnt n disaster food by kamla!!
beautiful description of site seeing n pics used
ohh wht kind of these wanna bees!! so smart for their age!

Part {e}
loved whole jungle scene n its description!!
so stepmom told goons to kidnap ananya!!
loved the whole description of fight scene!!
could imagine rt n mc doing tht scene!! with their latest pics!
ohh poor anu fall in waterfall!
so atlast he decided to save her!
loved it most if could happen after they feeling for them
but scene was apt n described very well
act of anu comming out of consciousness little n speaking his name n last scene of kissing him was so cute!!! loved it very much!
thanks for such beautiful scenes n update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pranita1202

wow such a superb song love it.. it suits amazinmgly to resuscitation...haina???

shreya awesome.. she is rocking alwayz


but pata katrina pe kuch scenes mein ajeeb lagta yeh gaana...hmm. isme koi seriously indian ladki hi honi chahiye thi

mujhe ghussa aata ke woh shreya ke song ko nicely emote nahi kar rahi...seriuosly, song mei jitni jaan h..dekhne mei flop h...sunene mei it creates magic

wen she is running ; manly lagti hai...err.


me n friends r discussing kuch toh missing hai , acting shayad😕...agree

as chikni chameli she was awesome , but yeh gaane mein pata nahi kya . picturization accha hai .but pata nahi.. it luks incomplete


nevertheless gaana jhakaas hai, shreya rocksss... superhit


anushka ka gaana jiys re isawesome. she resembles aisha of TOT...but cindy is more fav of mine...

anushka resembles so many mc's here in our ff world..

aisha, dhwani, sia of humari adhuri kahani, aarti of veer warrior...

bhot lambi list h...


rajat is comming back . nacho... yes. sahensha e hindustan tashreef laa rahe h


but main murat ko together aane ki hope kabhi nahi chodungi... mei bhi...

but gonna accept present with open arms.. wrking to bring rm back


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Posted: 12 years ago
Truly loved it, sorry 4 late comment but i truly love ur all rtmc ffs plz up soon waiting 4 next part nd remember me in ur pms thank u and bye take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
padh liya, Prani, finaly pura padh liya,

I Loved it Prani, the story is outstanding, ur writting skill is too good, spl ur own touch n comments made this ff mindblasting,

cont soon Love u Prani,
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi4ipkknd

Omg dat was awesome and the hut scene was great but veer still doesnt show any sign of love yet

p.s thanks for pm


thanks dear

happy dat u liked it

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzzi

awesome pari,really awesome
this SM is really a...really a witch ya she is a witch,chudail she is not leaving a single chance to harm our poor anu but no one can harm her unless n untill veer is with her,finally veer ne apni herogiri dikhai n saved our anu
n that cottage scene,oh so u r talking about it n i thought u r writting an ss,when u said our minds r working in same directions
n anu is in her dreamland but how she will feel when she got to know that he doesn't luv her
update soon

luv u


thank ridzzy🤗


love u too

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hairdresser

Thanks for pm it was really great


thanks dear😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum prt , do pm me nxxt tymmm!!!! read the full in one go...(all the 16 prts) 😊😊
U r a grt writr...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo


~EDITED~

Hey, I loved seems aunty

She is sweet,

N unhe aapni DIL bhot acho lagi isliye'

Achi kyu nhi lagegi..

Meri choice jo h veer k liye..

Kaisi h?/? mast h na' sooper hai tumhari choice

Mei hun hi hit.. n anu tho superhit h.. u wil know later'

Hmm.. veer ki formalities na.. uuf!.. gentleman feeling lata h.. ab kya kare gentleman hai woh but jab pyaar mein padega toh dekhna

But beta, thodi tho niyatt kharaab karo aapni..

Tumahri biwi h vo..

N plz'pati aapni sunder biwiyonn ko flaunt karte h.. chupate nhi h'saamjhe..

Ab ye sab bhi mei sikho tumhe veer, comeom dude'mr dexterity, merit ho shaddi bhii nhi hoi hab tak'.but phir bhi im telling u..

Flaut your wifey.. she rockzz'

So, seema dadi..h na anu humare veer k liye yogya bahu' 😆 seema bhabhi . koi baat nahi supporting characters ko yaad rakhna zaroori nahi hai. focus toh rtmc pe hota hai naa

Anu ko kisi cheeez ka lalach nhi sirf pyaar hveer se.. yup

Mela sweetie pie h anu.. I lov her' me luv u both

Log mujhe pamper karte h n mei anu ko.. vah!kya kismatt payi h ananya ne.. rashmi se pampering le rahi h.. verna mei tho sabki jhand hi bajati rahthi hun. 😆 😆 lucky anu


chalo lets jum[p to next prt.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

U noe di, I quite liked ur idea to zoom up story.. actually I lovd it..thanksss

Twisting n turning story holds me, lamba lamba explaination mujhe pasand nhi..

But tha irony is, main aapne ff mei jitna explain karte hu, unta koi nhi kart 😆a.. me myself not sticking to short desc. And speed up ff'.god, kya hoga mera' 😆

Vicky dude, so u likd her?? She is gud na.. actually best.. vickyko currently veer's se zyada dimag hai

Yes u caught it rite' she do only one thng in life- loves veer.. smart vicky

She is amazing'I lovd her, ma sweetie darling'.

Kahan h ye

Bmw.. I lov dis car..

N uss mango juice ko bhi.. kahan h nn dono k charan.. choo lo di meri taraf se plz.. charan choo lo, pooja n aarti karo sab reverse cupid ki😛

Vo kya h na, mumma told me to stay away frm alcoholic drink.. n bmw meri kismet mei hi nhi'

H kismet mei h.. but thodi late h' u will get many bmw abhi padh likh lo😉

Mei kya sochh rahi hun ki bmw aameer wale kisi ladke ko hi bf bana leti hun.. tab thodi jaldi bmw mill jayegi.. 🤣 😆

Vaise ye sab chodo..

I hate dat vamp also.. vamps hi dono ko milati hai ,vamps ki jai

Lift scene ws good. Its was awesome.. mast.. 😊

D way u write convos' r amazing.. I enjoy it. 🤗

Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago

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