CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 31

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

beautiful update..
looking fwd for the nxt one...


thanks for liking it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

👍🏼awesomeee

superbbb
lovelyyy
cont.soon👏


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mddmayuri

loved it thoroughly...ud soon


thanks sweety 4 the comment
glad that u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshera

lovely update

one day Ananya's innocence will surely win upon Veer
so vicky is gonna play the cupid. gr8.
update soon


thank u so much 4 the lovely comment😊

happy that u liked
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: radhikarani

awww missed some parts,,,, sorrryyy



don't worry sweety

haven't wrote much

u can easily catch up

love u
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

Ha ha ha awesome part dear vo mujhe rashu ka cmt padhke hasi aa gyi plz dnt mind. Loved the part waiting for more veenya moments.




yup rashu ke comments hilarious hote hai😆

glad that u liked it
Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

very nice update lovely . n thanx for this much long part

Our cute cindrella Anu was thinking abt veer to called her but here he himself came
their Lunch session is nice ...He Look at her n observe what she was eating .n he too ate same thing .ohh so sweet
Ananya going with Veer and all credit goes to Veer's friend Vicky .
nand really Veer will thank u on one day
Veer n Ananya 's street shopping ...ohh that willl so amazing
plzz update soon
waiting
thanx for pm
love u


thanks so much for the wonderful comment dear🤗
happy that u liked the part😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: glossyglassy

amazing part di...

it's great that vicky will now help his friend
i hope he succeeds in bringing VeeNya closer
i absolutely love ur descriptions and your sense of humor...
I actually like Ananya's cozy attire
And inner happiness surely reflects on the face
Loved the way Veer had what Anu was having for lunch
So vicky played a trick on his friend...hehehe...awsum job vick!!
Waiting for their shopping trip
Thx for PM
Lov u...


thank u 4 the lovely comment

glad that u liked the humour
happy that u liked my take on inner happiness


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shruja

thanks for updating
i din't find it long
as i read some part in promo
n this long part seems me too short after reading it😉
so i m not commenting on promo part
i liked vicky here very much
in dv sagars din't use his full awesome acting ability. agree. i really liked him from the disney show but in dv wen veer's secret was out his character was not given justice


i mean in dv characterization not was deep as prc

but we can't complain atleast we got murat together though the track was weak at the end of the show. but if we have murat on screen 2gether wat else we want.


so all in all dv was fultoo filmy historic depiction
but yet we loved it
i liked vicky after sweetsumi's KYC in this ff

loved him to play cupid
hope sia too accompanied him in this work

yup sia will play her role i improving anu's life
hate this miss khurana
now whts boiling in her mind? some scheme. vamp hai adat se baaz nahi ayegi

ohh anu feeling lonely
n expecting veer to call her on same time she don't want to disturb him by calling herself. she use to it from her childhood poor child but she din't mind at tht time too!! very cute child!! as she knew her father loves her!! hope veer will too!! hmm here comes veer!! so she wanted to look beautiful !wow! yeh her dress is too dull!

thank god u understand anu's state ;happy that i was able to describe anu's state. one thing i was nervous as i shud b able 2 convey that anu needs some time recover in terms of looks. glad that readers got that
veer mothers is very smart to use her new daughter in law's money to give gift to veer!! i hate her too!1 i din't like his both vehicles!!

ohh poor pihu got fever but did she taken veenya's marriage on her mind?
yup

and ananya is not aware of it? thanks to seema she din't inform him abt tht else his trip will cancelled. he loved so much pihu
now coming to veer
thank god he acted on thought n advise of manoj!!
but he is too professional when he replied to her
i had came for some paper work
but i liked when he choose khichadi as ananya having it leaving all mouth watering delicious dishes made for him!
hope 1 day both will enjoy mouthwatering food.
wow our anu is so innocent tht she din't even think before sign as the person is important to her!! and veer thinking abt the same!!


uno i just love this couple!! they r so simple n decent!!
i think there will not be much needed to develop love between them
as each other pure nature n simplicity will help them to fall for each other!! anu is already!! only veer have to!!

well said👏
i loved vicky very much!! he is very thoughtful to advise manoj
n will thanks manoj too for acting on it n bearing veer's anger
waiting for the day when veer will thank u!
precap is very interesting n made me egar!!



thanks 4 the wonderful comment

Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pranita1202

so introduce this part with "possible romance "at current scenario...o thnx jii, thnx a lot...


this champi thing made me laugh😆

too gud...

i wanted it dat way...

aap itna acha ud likhte ho, main aapki at least kuch smiles ka reason tho bann hi sakti ho na.



ayega ayega woh din bhi ayeaga


i know meri speed se thoda delay ho raha tha....sachhi kha h aapne, bhott slow ho aap..


legally in lov, cindy, silver amulet, n latest n funniest(meri buddy-ash wala) taming d shrew..😍



but ayega😊





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