CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 30

very nice update lovely . n thanx for this much long part

Ha ha ha awesome part dear vo mujhe rashu ka cmt padhke hasi aa gyi plz dnt mind. Loved the part waiting for more veenya moments.

amazing part di...

thanks for updating
i din't find it long
as i read some part in promo
n this long part seems me too short after reading it😉
so i m not commenting on promo part
i liked vicky here very much
in dv sagars din't use his full awesome acting ability
i liked vicky after sweetsumi's KYC in this ff
loved him to play cupid
hope sia too accompanied him in this work
hate this miss khurana
now whts boiling in her mind?

ohh anu feeling lonely
n expecting veer to call her on same time she don't want to disturb him by calling herself. she use to it from her childhood poor child but she din't mind at tht time too!! very cute child!! as she knew her father loves her!! hope veer will too!! hmm here comes veer!! so she wanted to look beautiful !wow! yeh her dress is too dull!
veer mothers is very smart to use her new daughter in law's money to give gift to veer!! i hate her too!1 i din't like his both vehicles!!

ohh poor pihu got fever but did she taken veenya's marriage on her mind? and ananya is not aware of it? thanks to seema she din't inform him abt tht else his trip will cancelled. he loved so much pihu
now coming to veer
thank god he acted on thought n advise of manoj!!
but he is too professional when he replied to her
i had came for some paper work
but i liked when he choose khichadi as ananya having it leaving all mouth watering delicious dishes made for him!
hope 1 day both will enjoy mouthwatering food.
wow our anu is so innocent tht she din't even think before sign as the person is important to her!! and veer thinking abt the same!!
uno i just love this couple!! they r so simple n decent!!
i think there will not be much needed to develop love between them
as each other pure nature n simplicity will help them to fall for each other!! anu is already!! only veer have to!!
i loved vicky very much!! he is very thoughtful to advise manoj
n will thanks manoj too for acting on it n bearing veer's anger
waiting for the day when veer will thank u!
precap is very interesting n made me egar!!

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

reserved..

installment 4...

me first again...

~~EDITED~~

wowie...

u noe di, one thing...

i wanna tell u is..

maine phirrse poora ka pora ud padha h...

thank u so much😊

feel aa gyi boss, wahi wali...

me really happy that u got the feel, i was tense that i may not b able to paint a proper picture wid the words

but u as usual boosted my morale

a big🤗

taming n shrew k 1st ud ki...

wow, kya installment thi...

maaze gaye, pori ki pori veeranya...almost.

so veer is being gud wid ananya, as i wished... (sahi kaha h, finger crossed really works at times... do try it..))... but why d ditch its not working for rtmc comeback on tv... flop idea... rejected.

actually lunch together ki idea u only gave me as u stated in prior comment that u r sad coz ananya was alone at the breakfast n u wanted rromantic dinner between veenya

so introduce this part with "possible romance "at current scenario

chalo, be it a advice by friend... (lov u manoj for dis))... at least he is being gud to her...😍

paneer kurma , spicy minced chicken ,paneer makhan mera bhi mouth watering baba...rooz aisa khana mile tho kya life ho jayegi haumri,,,,😍

actually roz aisa khana koi nahi khayega else cholestrol n other problems will b shooting high😆

but 2 imply that veer sacrificed something so just 4 that i mentioned😃

bechari ko khichadi khani padi...oops!...mujhe nhi pasand khichadi...

but agar anu kha sakti h, she is a gud gal... tho main bhi try karungi..

aww anu ke liye tumhara pyaar😊

okay, lucnh over...

ppr wrk ki baari...

i reaaly lovd dis thing.

. Actually d thing is that our haveli has been mortga...

Ananya- (picking the pen up) where should I sign?

Ananya was thinking why on earth ; he has to be explaining her everything for just getting a sign....god, again a hiden humor... i lov dese all...banda thoda professional h na anu tumhara pati...isliye elaborate karne lag gaya

i juz lov ananya... she is best... money is cipher to her...relation means everthing.. but sadly, she has money so huge... n relation so tiny😭

wanna cry for dis.

yup thats sad . hope she wil get wats she wants n wat she deserves soon

vicky dude...u r the most important here... bhai tumhara dimaag bhot chalta h...👍🏼

kahan h tumhari khopadi...aaj uss khopadi ki aarti karungi..😉

vaise sachh bolo vicky.. yeh khopadi iisliye itni chalti h na coz sia iiski malishh, chumpy karti h...

dekha, patni k bina hr pati adhura h...

veer ki khopadi pr jab ananya chumpy karegi, den veer ko bhi brains aa jayenge..( excluding his professionalism))

abhi tho veer ki halat h- gareebi main aata gheela, upe se khopadi ka screw dheela...

but ab ananya aa gyi h na.. sab kuch thiik n sooper gud ho jayega...

this champi thing made me laugh😆

too gud

manoj, chalo tum bhi credit le lo.. aakhir saari scolding veer ki tumne hi tho khayi h...vicky ne tumhare exploitation kiya h...but he did it for a gud purpose.. so leave him...

yup give him too credit

coz manoj recklessness veer's family became bankrupt n veenya got hitched

Vicky with a happy glint and a smirk "relax bro.I m not gonna muddle up.To get veer's life together on personal front I just did a little meddling with his life on professional front. Trust me he is gonna thank me 4 THIS one day"

this one day... wen the hell its gonna come... i m dieing...next ud shud b sooper soon..

ayega ayega woh din bhi ayeaga

i know meri speed se thoda delay ho raha tha

but ayega😊

Originally posted by: ridzzi

hey nice part...👏

loved vicky's and veer's convo...so vicky is engaged with sia...and she effected him just 6 months,,,,,,,,,,,,

and anu is waiting for him...awww...she got too much happy just to saw him...that was so cute...

and this khurana aunty...bad bad bad lady...chudail...

and loved that scene...where anu and veer were eating together...veer ate khichadi just for her...awww so cute...

and i really love vicky...he is trying to make veer-anu close...gr8 going man...

continue soon...

luv u...😊

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, nice part
loved it
precap is interesting
continue soon

Originally posted by: chand1234

awsm prtt...cntinue soon :)

Originally posted by: samantha1987200

Hi😊

Thank God you finally updated!!!!

Loved the update... It was awesome😊 Plz continue soon... will be waiting😊

Love😊

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

woowww...

that was simply amazing..

sooo awsum..

loved it..

so finally things gonna settle up b/w them..

all thnx to vicky..

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...