CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 29

Created

Last reply

Replies

568

Views

94.2k

Users

72

Likes

1.1k

Frequent Posters

sweetsanyo thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
installment number three...


di , u di rite thing by telling me alwayz dat u hav updated

~~EDITED~~
sachi kaha aapne...
happiness, smile, serenity n merriment are some times the , actually alwayz d best make...

yeh na ho tho, kitna bhi make kr lo, person is a jhandd..(flop)

n yeh ho tho, bt make na ho,...phirr bhi person roxx...

wowie, dowie, aapke description main mujhe pehli baar laga ki, ananya sachi main kitni cute n simply beautiful h...
u noe one thing, simplicity alwayz impresses me the most...i ma big fan of simplicity...

evn i feel dat veer is a praise of simplicity...

madam ananya concisious hoti jaa rhi h aapne looks ke baare main...
ananya kya irada h madam...
veer ko hgayall karna h kya..

well i feel ananya akele tho yeh kr nhi payegi...

di ,aap jaldi se sia ko lao na,
she is the beacon of light in this jungle of darkness...
iss ghar ki tho saari women aapne se free ho , tab tho ananya ki help kare,...

sima is a gud woman, i like her...
piyu ws sick,
dats y she came home...
ab piyu ko kya hoa,
may she is thinking to much of her new mom n old dad..

veer loves his daughter alot.
hmm...🤔

will piyu eva agree to share his lov wid ananya???

coz top most priority for veer is alwayz piyu... i feel dis way??

but happy times will come soon..
😍


abhi tho aap jaldi se veer ka reaction bata do, n unn dono ki road trip dekha do..

ud soon...

=========================================================================

TO BE CONTINUED...u mean installment number 4...bata dena mujhe, jab bhi ho...plz

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
ridzzi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice part...👏
loved vicky's and veer's convo...so vicky is engaged with sia...and she effected him just 6 months,,,,,,,,,,,,
and anu is waiting for him...awww...she got too much happy just to saw him...that was so cute...
and this khurana aunty...bad bad bad lady...chudail...
and loved that scene...where anu and veer were eating together...veer ate khichadi just for her...awww so cute...
and i really love vicky...he is trying to make veer-anu close...gr8 going man...
continue soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
sweetsanyo thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
reserved..
installment 4...

me first again...


~~EDITED~~

wowie...
u noe di, one thing...
i wanna tell u is..
maine phirrse poora ka pora ud padha h...

feel aa gyi boss, wahi wali...

taming n shrew k 1st ud ki...

wow, kya installment thi...
maaze gaye, pori ki pori veeranya...almost.

so veer is being gud wid ananya, as i wished... (sahi kaha h, finger crossed really works at times... do try it..))... but why d ditch its not working for rtmc comeback on tv... flop idea... rejected.

chalo, be it a advice by friend... (lov u manoj for dis))... at least he is being gud to her...😍



He reasoned with this advice and decided to give it a thought...happy dat he dinn give it a thought but enacted it too

Veer- some paperwork came up, I cud talk abt it later.so u had lunch?...usse phikr tho h...he care for ananya...we cnt say d last prt belongs to his new try...its genuinine.. nhi bhi h, still i will think dis way

Ananya nodded in negation...pati k bina patinaay khana nhi khati...kbhi kbhi lucnh bhi nhi khati...bechari ne breakfast main sirf milk piya tha

Veer-so wud u care to join me for lunch downstairs....issese jyada professionalist koi nhi ho sakta...abhi bhi he is professional a bit


paneer kurma , spicy minced chicken ,paneer makhan mera bhi mouth watering baba...rooz aisa khana mile tho kya life ho jayegi haumri,,,,😍
pulaw (Indian risotto)...yeh tho mujhe pata hi nhi tha...indian risotto🤣... di la javab ho aap.

bechari ko khichadi khani padi...oops!...mujhe nhi pasand khichadi...
but agar anu kha sakti h, she is a gud gal... tho main bhi try karungi..

but ...anu k saath acha nhi hoa, dat bullshit trio...unki vajah se anu aaj itna tasty khana bhi nhi kha sakti...

wow, evn veer compromised...
i m damn happy, veer is atleast trying.. though he himself wil call it a DEAL, but call it romantic...
veer too ate khichdi... sahi mayine main, he is following the words- HUM JEEVANSAATHI☺️...

okay, lucnh over...

ppr wrk ki baari...

i reaaly lovd dis thing.

. Actually d thing is that our haveli has been mortga...

Ananya- (picking the pen up) where should I sign?

Ananya was thinking why on earth ; he has to be explaining her everything for just getting a sign....god, again a hiden humor... i lov dese all...banda thoda professional h na anu tumhara pati...isliye elaborate karne lag gaya


i juz lov ananya... she is best... money is cipher to her...relation means everthing.. but sadly, she has money so huge... n relation so tiny😭

wanna cry for dis.



vicky dude...u r the most important here... bhai tumhara dimaag bhot chalta h...👍🏼


kahan h tumhari khopadi...aaj uss khopadi ki aarti karungi..😉

vaise sachh bolo vicky.. yeh khopadi iisliye itni chalti h na coz sia iiski malishh, chumpy karti h...

dekha, patni k bina hr pati adhura h...

veer ki khopadi pr jab ananya chumpy karegi, den veer ko bhi brains aa jayenge..( excluding his professionalism))

abhi tho veer ki halat h- gareebi main aata gheela, upe se khopadi ka screw dheela...

but ab ananya aa gyi h na.. sab kuch thiik n sooper gud ho jayega...


manoj, chalo tum bhi credit le lo.. aakhir saari scolding veer ki tumne hi tho khayi h...vicky ne tumhare exploitation kiya h...but he did it for a gud purpose.. so leave him...


Vicky with a happy glint and a smirk "relax bro.I m not gonna muddle up.To get veer's life together on personal front I just did a little meddling with his life on professional front. Trust me he is gonna thank me 4 THIS one day"

this one day... wen the hell its gonna come... i m dieing...next ud shud b sooper soon..

installment method will do for me.


precape... ooo...

sone k upr suhaga...

😍shopping🥳 bhiii......



di, ab itna temptation de hi diya h tho, plz abki bar jaldi ud...


lov u di.



Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
AayaTohModiJi thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, nice part
loved it
precap is interesting
continue soon
samantha1987200 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Hi😊

Thank God you finally updated!!!!

Loved the update... It was awesome😊😊😊😊 Plz continue soon... will be waiting😊

Love😊
anumeha_rajat thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

woowww...

that was simply amazing..

sooo awsum..

loved it..

so finally things gonna settle up b/w them..

all thnx to vicky..

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

sweetnandu thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update..
looking fwd for the nxt one...
375400 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
👍🏼awesomeee
superbbb
lovelyyy
cont.soon👏
Nandini25 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
one day Ananya's innocence will surely win upon Veer
so vicky is gonna play the cupid. gr8.
update soon
radhikarani thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
awww missed some parts,,,, sorrryyy

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

3 months ago

Friendship story

I am planning to write a friendship story. I will choose the love interest of Paras Kalnawat and Karan Kundra according to the choice of the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno

7 months ago

Goodbye my mother, the whole story.

My mom. In 1943, World War II was in full swing. Various things happened in the Kopić family. One of the most recognized families in Poland at...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Saumya96

2 years ago

SKR FF 6:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 107

Hello everyone ☺️ This is Saumya ❤️ I have completed the five long threads of my FF "Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story Following are the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".