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@sweetcharms

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

first of all thank you for the pm😊...

secondly coming to your story...its a flawless piece of writing👏i am mesmerised

i love the way you have penned down the strength of Khirad in your story...applause for that👍🏼

waiting for Ashar to meet Khirad...hopefully it would fall in the next chapter

and it was a delightful read for me😊...

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

You kn ow what - I'm completely cluess about Khirad's past - is it related to something that's on the show? Nevelr watched it!

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richiiiii

@richiiiii

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Ah! You don't need to be watching the show to follow the story. However, I do recommend you atleast try a few episodes and I can assure that you will be hooked.

Thanks for writing :)

i do plan to watch it sometime...i am waiting for it finish -as i have read somewhere, it only has 21 episodes- so that i can watch the episodes back to back..i hate to wait you know😆

you are welcome girl...and thanks for the pm😃

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-eiya-

@-eiya-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

hiii...m a hardcore fan of geet...never read anything apart frm MG ffs...but i just love to read ur writing ...so here i m...i hvnt watchd tis show...but i loved wht u hv written so far...thanks for the pm...eagerly waiting for the next part..

-poojaa

Edited by eiya22 - 13 years ago

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@.Stuff.

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Well I caught on very late...this isn't the same plot as the show...duh!! I'm losing it, I honestly am.

Ashar still has the memory of his cousin and he believes it to be some disorder in his brain 😆 Someone is definitely living in denial...or at least visiting it 😆 Well I guess from that moment he felt something, maybe not even as strong as attraction, but there was something definitely there or that memory wouldn't of stuck with him. Can't wait for them to finally meet and converse :)

I don't even need to say it was a brilliant update ;)

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538742

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Brilliant👏

Loved the way you write...😛

Update soon & Thnx for PM⭐️

Edited by sadffi - 13 years ago

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Mehwish

@-Mrs.SKMehwish-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

RES !!!!

I ll post comment soon after read .. thank you so much 4 PM 😛

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sia221

@sia221

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Interesting story.. u hav started here... Btw u r on roll !!!!! Good for me...😆

I will say.. I was not keen at first for this story.. but after reading the PROLOGUE n d FIRST CHAP..

KHIRAD... female lead.. really struck me...

Her resolve, her determination, her dignity, her self-respect, her clarity.. everything was seen in that one decision that she took...

I wud really like to know more abt her...

I hav one question here... this FF is based on a serial.. so is it that... u hav to know abt d serial beforehand??? coz I hav not seen this serial...hav no clue at all...n so d 2nd chap itself was very confusing for me...

Btw.. I just loved the song.. AMAZING !!!!!!!

Thanks for d PM 😊😊

Edited by sia221 - 13 years ago

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: 0986
first of all thank you for the pm😊...
secondly coming to your story...its a flawless piece of writing👏i am mesmerised
i love the way you have penned down the strength of Khirad in your story...applause for that👍🏼
waiting for Ashar to meet Khirad...hopefully it would fall in the next chapter

and it was a delightful read for me😊...

Ah! so you want them to meet already...;)

Thanks for writing back. Hopefully it will keep up with your liking.

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568124

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: mechantefille
You kn ow what - I'm completely cluess about Khirad's past - is it related to something that's on the show? Nevelr watched it!

You don't have to watch the show to follow the story. And I have purposefully kept Khirad's past a mystery.

But do watch the show, its just amazing.
Thanks for writing back.

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