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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: its_me

waiting...

when will u continue ?????????????


now 10 more minutes

dont kill me read full ok ...


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Scene 3 Hospital

The Blast

11.40 pm ,24th December 2011

He was counting down minutes 19 minutes , 18 minutes '.15 minutes .. He cant stay at the parking and he went back ..waited at Dr.Meeras cabin continue counting . 11 minutes '4 minutes '

Meera came, she laughed ,to his questioning looks she replied

"so Majnu waiting for his Jaanu , Come we wait at Parking karan will come 'My duty time is Over , Or I allowed myself ,Dr. Alice had to take over now , I was being polite and gentle to her . But seems she don't deserved to be " on their way she spoke After marrying Karan a Hindu boy, Meera rarely attends Christmas party , So she agreed To Dr.Alice to be at Hospital so That Alice can have Party .

Maan "Geet ??"

Meera " Dekho Maan , there is a patient Arundhati and Geet' is very close to her , she don't have anybody else and she is in labour now , Dr.Alice is already here .. and they will shift her to OT , Just 20 ,30 minutes more .Geet will attend the OT and come , just 1 hour break she took , that she will compensate ' ..I am Sorry '" Patting Maan's Shoulder ," You Know Na Geet and Her Dedication ..."

Maan smiled and thought himself .."Do I know ..!!" .. When the lift stopped , Maans Gaurd 1 and Meera stepped out First , ''.Maan just got down from lift , but before his second guard could get out he heard an EXPLOSION somewhere Up ,somewhere at the top floor and he fell on ground his other guard who got down before him covered before any glass pieces could hurt him''.

He heard Meera screaming !

He heard another crashing and Blasting sound somewhere deep , and smokes and dust gushed out of the hollow of the place where there was a lift '

Panic attack ''''' People running screaming ,crying , smoke blood ''''''..

As soon as Maan could able to stand , he was bleeding his hands , forehead ' He saw his guard's back full of blood ,

Meera when fell got hurt and her shoulder was bleeding ''..

Maan hold him and Meera and guided rushed through the panicked crowd ..and ..finally reached the open area in grass and made them sit ,

Meera " I am OK ..Go Get Geet 'use stairs of emergency exit GO '", he looked up 'saw ' 20th floor .. Full on fire and smoke and fire flames licking the sky through the broken windows ''. The whole building was almost dark except the glow of some red dim light of emergency lighting ..

He Immediately Ran to the door of the Emergency Exit, from where people where coming out like swarm of bees from hive when attacked ,

By then Maan figured out , something exploded at 20th floor and fire spreading and Geet is on 28th floor .. Now covered in smoke ..

He ran and made his way , hitting and pushing , all he wanted to be with his Geet ..!

Then he saw Dr.Alice Running down stairs ,Sister Rimi too with her (though Maan did not recognised her) , dressed up for OT, He saw Maan trying to go Up, and she hold his Hands

And dragged him out ..She shouted " Come Maan '. Come Save Geet '. She stupid Girl not Ready To Come with us '.And " She was Panting heavily , trying to breath ' " You Know How obstinate and uncompromising she is '! ..We have to do Something 'Come '."

Maan in mind .." Ha . Do.I Know !!!!"

Dr.Alice told him that Geet was not ready to leave with them leaving Arundhati and other patients , they somehow managed to let out 3 ,and there was 2 patients left in the labour ward and above all Arundhati started to have labour pain and not in a movable condition ' The other one is unconscious following a Uterus removal surgery and on life support systems.

By then fire workers started their Rescue Mission ' Dr.Alice quickly ran to them and asked to arrange stretchers , but most of the stretchers available was with patients, burned with 2, 3 third degree burns and people are running with them to nearby hospital as traffic blocked

As the degree of danger passed above the rescue level on upper floors fire fighters started to concentrate rescuing people below 20th floor because fire was spreading up rapidly '

With a tremendous fight with the authority Maan himself allowed to go up along with stretcher , because with heavy smoke they fear the people may be unconscious ' And two stretchers obtained and by then the fire reached up to 24th floor , and the upper floors almost covered with smoke even not able to distinguish whether there was a building ..

Maan was on one and in another the other brave fire fighter decided to go along with him in his mission , they reached the window of the labour ward .. The Night vision cameras proved useless with smoke .


Edited by -Magicia- - 13 years ago
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Scene 3 Hospital

I Love You

11.50 pm ,24th December 2011

They heard a women screaming in pain , shouting , cursing somebody when they managed to find the exact window

They got in to the ward easily .. Maan screamed GEEET GEEET ...

From somewhere she came and Hugged him , the other man quickly explained about the way to fix the gas masks they brought with them , and get patients laid on stretchers and strapping . They got in to action quickly ,The other patient was on some health support , Geet told them it can not be removed , so they strapped the woman along with the life support equipments and to hold it right fire fighter had to climb on it and he managed and he said he will come back soon ..with better stretcher to strap moving and uncontrollable Arundhati better .

Maan and Geet helped him to get out

Maan Hugged Geet tight and tried to console her ..

AHHH ...a scream ..Arundhati's whole body just rose from the bed the maximum it could because Geet Already strapped her Hands , and she drowned again heavily trying to move on either side because of pain , Geet checked and Told Maan

Her voice shivering ..she cried and explained ..

"She already Broke her water , She is heavily bleeding and Sinking "" she checked Arundhati and screamed to maan "Its going to be a footling breech delivery ,and there is risk of Umbilical cord prolapse ! We have to get her medical aid ..NOW , Maan Now ..Or ,,,,!! She cried

Maan who was not able to understand a single bit she spoke just obeyed what she asked him to do , they both lifted Arundhati and strapped on The stretcher ,, they sat on sunshade , Maan asked Geet to climb on it and Hold Arundhati who was moving heavily in pain and they are at 28th floor !

But Geet petite structure did not gave her enough strength to hold Arundhati who was moving violently in deadly pain ...Geet asked Maan to hold Arundhati's body immobile and he did , Geet started to unbuckle the stretcher from window pain , he heard the chains crinkle from its hook and realized it cant hold the weight !

Without any hesitation , she removed her mask and kissed Maan once again , and whispered in his his mouth ,

Maan You go Now ... Wait for me ..I will come for You ... He stared at her before he could register ,

she put his mask back and hers ..and moved away from him ... SAVE HER AND BABY ...she commanded

She hold the window pane and ..pushed stretcher away from the window harder unbuckling the last strap ..

The stretcher hanged swinged twice in air ...Maan shocked and yelled

"GEETT GEEET "

"I LOVE YOU MAAAN I LOVE YOU ... I CANT THINK OTHERWISE I WILL COME FOR YOU ,..." she yelled back ...like a lunatic

By then the stretcher started to descend ...

He saw once again her face , crying and smiling brightly at the same time ..when the light from search light sprawled for one moment at the window .. He wished the world go in still there ... And captured her vision in his heart , may be last ..he prayed hard ..not to ...

"GEET GEET ..WHAT U HAVE DONE ...GEETT " He cried his heart out , hugging and holding Arundhati ...

...as soon as he landed he ran to the crane and before he could ask them help to pull him up there ... ..ANOTHER explosion ...BIGGEST ... They all Stared Up , he saw the whole upper stories of the building in fire ... ...the floors no more distinguishable ...

Meera and Karan came to him , he was in shock , Hugged him tight ..and hold him and moved him from there ...

He fell down ...crying ... He heard cries of a New Born behind Him ...and church Bell Ringing

00;00 25th December

please read next chapter tooo

Edited by -Magicia- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene 4 University

A Kiss Again ..


11.45 pm 24th December 2019



Anju was really worried , Ye seniors Ragging ke naam pe Kya Kya ..But then its cant be called ragging completely , anyone dare to rag me ' Its bet 'Uff like the wierd seniors ..their wierd guest .their weird guest .then ..its completely in my hand ..

I have to do it or not to !!

Oh god ..! Mumma is really worried all these weeks . There is not enough blankets for grandpas in winter to survive '.. A smile crept through her lips when she thought about the Grandpas , inmates of her mothers charity home ' ..no blankets no socks ' no food regularly , still they all happy ...love her ...What if she dont had father , but about 50 elders at her ""home"" .

Already they all have that old age problems ,and winter as if taking revenge get harsh on n their old bodies '

She sighed '

Maximum what he is going to do ..A complaint , then i can save myself saying its part of the ragging so ..i can come out clean ..

They were damn sure that i cant do it ' Hmm will show them

50000 rupees ..Oh my God its really a huge amount ..with that i can not only by clothes for winter ..but whole year ..She cant believe its their one week's pocket money !

She stood up ..

Check her dress again .. The loosest shirt and jeans ..

And walked taking bold steps to the path in between the rows where students were sitting ''''

Yes Anjali ..You Must ..You can ''.common do it Anjali ..

Somebody from the depths of her heart soul screamed '''..

She saw him coming a well built young man with confident steps , she ignored ... Surrounded with , principal ,teachers .. And some seniors who had done the betting with her last night ..!! She enjoyed their shocked face ,and not noticed her "PREY " seeing her on their path and '' Her steps quickened ''

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Chaos 'everybody shocked

Whats this '''''''..

How dare she ???????

Who is she????????????????

Such a shame to college ?????????

Do she actually who he is ''..?

Such a decent ..most eleigible bachelour hard core still '.at his 43 !!

Oh god ..a little girl ???

Kissed ' ?? Not kissed actually '''. still they are kissing '.forgetting a world 'screaming around them'..

What to do ..how to save the guest from ..from that that .."kiss::"accidental "

Principal sweated heavily 'On the cold winter night ..already he was in tension because the chief guest arrived really late unlike him ,saying its personal , then almost everybody was waiting for him to come even ignoring its Christmas ..., .and he feared he will not and requested really hard how much it matters to them ... reminded its the college where he studied once ...and he came 'finally ..and this '.he felt like he is going to have aheart attack ..

Somebody murmered to principal "Sir she is that Arundhati's daugheter'"

Principal "who .??" the man replied "the women activist .. That run the orphanage and all .. her name is Geetanjali .,,"


One teacher poked principal 'hinting them ''.

"Sir ..students are watching .and still she ..."

The principal , wiped sweat on his forehead and passed a dismayed look at the teacher asked him

"actually ..its they still they " he saw maan's hand going around her in a hug and ... Chee Chee ..Principal tilted his head to the other side ...

They were kissing ''as if they never had enough of each other ever '..


His hands passionately went around her back feeling and measuring the plum ... she blushed ..bite his lips shyly ''''''he smiled feeling her turning red ...''.


And They kissed and kissed ..and kissed ''''''


Some were Church'Bells Rang...Like a Blessing ...


00000. 25th December

ps: (Geetanjali means anjali to Geet )

Edited by -Magicia- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh Magicia... pyar ki dushman... tum ne kya kiya 😭😭
poor Maan he was dreaming about his wedding &you killed his love💔

Geetanjali ...OMG...
finally ...
pyar kabhi marta nahi ...

well written...

loved it

thanks for the x'mas gift

love you🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abina03

oh Magicia... pyar ki dushman... tum ne kya kiya 😭😭

poor Maan he was dreaming about his wedding &you killed his love💔

Geetanjali ...OMG...
finally ...
pyar kabhi marta nahi ...

well written...

loved it

thanks for the x'mas gift

love you🤗

ps. i have taken back 1st line of comment


LOL love u da

i was little scared of your reaction even when i clearly gave you hint earlier ..i think

thats why ..i did not pmed you .the dedication part not written ..

u know na how weak i am giving introduction.. ..


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